Well, here is chapter four, I'm in need of reviews to get this story going. So I am just going to start the chapter.
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disclaimer: I don't own Naruto…
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Chapter 4
"Why don't you just give up, foolish son?" Sasuke taunted.
"Damn you!" Tatsu gasped.
Megumi and Kogamaru lay there. They began to try to get up in order to help there friend. Kogamaru was finally on his knees, and by that time, Sasuke was using Chidori constantly while grasping and squeezing Tatsu's arms. Megumi still lay there, to strained to get up. She was probably hit hardest by Sasuke. Kogamaru got up. He was panting heavily.
"Hey, Sasuke. Let my friend go!" Kogamaru said.
"Back off. This is not your fight. Stay out and I won't have to kill you."
"I won't let you hurt my friend!"
"Pitty."
"Kogamaru! This is my fight! I can handle this!" Tatsu screamed.
"Well you've got a hell of a way of showing it!" Kogamaru said.
"KAGE BUSHIN NO JUTSU!!" Sasuke said.
Instantly, Sasuke appeared behind Kogamaru.
"Multi KAGE BUSHIN!!" soon, thousands of Sasuke appeared.
"I'll take care of all of you easily," Kogamaru said.
The bushins started attacking him.
"8 trigrams! PALM ROTATION!!"
Kogamaru began to spin, and soon he gained momentum. He began spinning so swiftly, that soon he was a blur. Some of the bushins disapeared, but there were still many of the bushins to go.
"Alright. Guess i have no choice. 8 TRIGRAMS! 2 Palms!"
He hit 2.
"4 palms!"
4 more were gone.
"8 Palms!"
8 more vanished.
"16 Palms!!"
16 more.
"32 Palms"
The rest were destroyed. the next one was targeted towards Sasuke.
"64 PALMS!!"
He smacked sasuke in the chest 64 times.
POOF!!
Sasuke vanished into smoke, and appeared behind Kogamaru. He pulled out a kunai, and stabbed Kogamaru in the back. Tatsu freed himself from Sasuke, who was still grasping his arms, by bashing the top of his head into the under side of Sasuke's chin. As he got up, he pulled out the Kusanagi.
"Hey, Sasuke!! Let go of my friend!!" Tatsu shouted.
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Back in the leaf village, The Forest of Death was burned completely to the ground. In the Hokage's mansion, Kotosai stared right into the face of a brutally beaten Naruto, just barely able to stay consious.
"Where is he?!" Kotosai screamed into the face of the hokage.
"I haven't seen him since I was 16," Naruto said.
"You had better tell me where he is!!"
"I don't know."
"Then there is no further use for you."
Hinata Hyuuga walked in at that very moment, looked around, and screamed...
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Well there is chapter 4. still pretty short, but i'm trying to improve on my depth. so please continue to read and review.
