Sigh... Thanks for the Reviews guys!
Disclaimer: I don't own anyone
Soda's POV
I should never have walked so far away from him. Right when the mustang pulled up I knew we were in for some trouble. Not this kind of trouble, though. I sprinted as fast as possible after the car, watching them take my baby brother away. No, this wasn't going to happen. I had to keep my promise.
Rain began pelting down at me. The car was still many feet away, but I had to do whatever it took to get to it.
"PONY!!!" I screamed as I got nearer and nearer. My adrenaline was pumping and my legs were blurs running down the street. As I got as close as I thought could be possible, I took a running dive for the trunk. Right that second, the car revved up, leaving me tumbling towards the ground. In mere seconds, it was gone. I couldn't believe. Gone. Miserable wasn't bad enough to describe how I felt that instant.
My hair was dripping and blocking my vision, but it didn't matter. Tears and rain alike dripped down from my face. I couldn't tell which was which. I only knew that I had failed. Failed to keep him safe. Broken a promise. A promise that I thought I could keep.
I didn't know which way to turn. Walking home. I couldn't face Darry, but I needed someone. I needed someone to talk too. I needed Pony. I never really realized how important he really was to me, not even when he and Johnny had run away. But now I knew. That was it. I needed to find him and that's what I was going to do. I began to walk through the rain, down the road the Mustang had taken. The tears kept coming, but it didn't bother me. As I brushed my hair out of the way, a single star stood out in the sky. Through all the clouds, this one light pushed through. Strangely, it filled me with hope. Hope to find my brother. I began to jog and then broke into a run. Everything would turn out okay. Everything would be all right. I couldn't help thinking, however, deep down in my heart, that this might be what Pony really wanted.
Corny? Sappy? Stupid? Good? Awesome? Anything? TELL ME!!! Ugh.. I think it is too sappy =[ Enlighten me with your thoughts!
Disclaimer: I don't own anyone
Soda's POV
I should never have walked so far away from him. Right when the mustang pulled up I knew we were in for some trouble. Not this kind of trouble, though. I sprinted as fast as possible after the car, watching them take my baby brother away. No, this wasn't going to happen. I had to keep my promise.
Rain began pelting down at me. The car was still many feet away, but I had to do whatever it took to get to it.
"PONY!!!" I screamed as I got nearer and nearer. My adrenaline was pumping and my legs were blurs running down the street. As I got as close as I thought could be possible, I took a running dive for the trunk. Right that second, the car revved up, leaving me tumbling towards the ground. In mere seconds, it was gone. I couldn't believe. Gone. Miserable wasn't bad enough to describe how I felt that instant.
My hair was dripping and blocking my vision, but it didn't matter. Tears and rain alike dripped down from my face. I couldn't tell which was which. I only knew that I had failed. Failed to keep him safe. Broken a promise. A promise that I thought I could keep.
I didn't know which way to turn. Walking home. I couldn't face Darry, but I needed someone. I needed someone to talk too. I needed Pony. I never really realized how important he really was to me, not even when he and Johnny had run away. But now I knew. That was it. I needed to find him and that's what I was going to do. I began to walk through the rain, down the road the Mustang had taken. The tears kept coming, but it didn't bother me. As I brushed my hair out of the way, a single star stood out in the sky. Through all the clouds, this one light pushed through. Strangely, it filled me with hope. Hope to find my brother. I began to jog and then broke into a run. Everything would turn out okay. Everything would be all right. I couldn't help thinking, however, deep down in my heart, that this might be what Pony really wanted.
Corny? Sappy? Stupid? Good? Awesome? Anything? TELL ME!!! Ugh.. I think it is too sappy =[ Enlighten me with your thoughts!