creativitykafune: Hey ya'll I'm back and this time it's longer! I wanted to post it in because I thought it was ready now but if I did any grammer wrong, please tell me then I shall fix it up and replace the chapter!

Reviews

Aqua Aneko
2005-07-15
ch 3, signed Hi this is such a good story I love the twist o and I totally vote for Tohru and Kyo to be together Sei
2005-07-15
ch 3, anon. Wow! That idea for the tattoo of angel wings on her back was ingenious, AND very original. I love it! But' do the wings come back? cutebowlofvioletcurry
2005-07-14
ch 3, signed moo...

i say tohru and haru!

cows rule!

but watever tohru and kyo r cool

but poor kagura...o idea

put her with an angel dude!

yep but poor yuki...
hm...

yuki and rin
there all solved!
-curry linea
2005-07-14
ch 3, anon. love the story! the idea is very good, continue. i vote for tohruXkyo! devils wings
2005-07-14
ch 3, anon. its really good so you should keep writing serra's evil twin
2005-07-13
ch 3, signed yay its a good story

KYOXTHOURU FOREVER someone
2005-07-13
ch 3, anon. is there anymore of the story? this is getting really interesting! CallaRose
2005-07-13
ch 3, signed Actualy...I would like to change my vote to the unknown character and Tohru. Looking forward to the rest of it you might want to get someone to proof read your next chapter first. For instance you have the kingdom of hell planning on starting a war with the kingdom of hell? (heaven?) crazylovestory89
2005-07-13
ch 3, signed that was short, but good. i vote for yuki x tohru and tohru x unknown character. update soon! pie108
2005-07-13
ch 3, signed I vote 3 times for Tohru and unknown character and if not that then her and Kyo cause I WILL NOT LET HER BE WITH YUKI cause they make a really bad coulpe(I am not a Yuki fan and never will I ever be) naomi
2005-07-13
ch 3, anon. LOVE THE STORY! your such a good writer! i love the idea of tohru having fluffy wings! i vote for yuki and tohru! please update with fluff and stuff soon! pie108
2005-07-12
ch 2, signed can everyone plz pick Tohru and the unknown person cause Im tired of reading fanficts about Tohru and Kyo and Tohru and yuki

Couple Votes so far!

Tohru x Yuki-7

Tohru x Haru (this was a vote reader prefered)- 1

Tohru x Kyo-5

Tohru x unknown character (sorry cannot tell ya yet!)-7

Kyo x Kagura-0

Kisa x Hiro-1

Hatori x Kanna-1

Haru x Rin-1

Yuki x Rin(another reader prefered)- 1

Kagura x with an angel (just being soft on her vote if you want her to be)-1

Please vote for couples!

creativitykafune:oh my, so many votes on Yuki! But wait! Tohru x unknown character? Hmm... who is this character? Well, can't tell ya.

Yuki: Who is this person creativitykafune I want to know who this person is I don't want Tohru to be hurt if you make that unknown character with Tohru.

creativitykafune:Gulp well, can't tell ya.

Yuki:...

Tohru/ 'Yuki's worried?' Tohru thought

Kyo: Yeah, who the hell is that guy.

creativitykafune: Kyo, not even you can scare me, but I can't tell ya.

Kyo: What!

Tohru:Kyo's worried about me to? I'm a lucky person' Tohru thought to herself.

Kagura: My loooove! (Kagura head lucks Kyo)

creativitykafune: poor Kagura, Kyo and her just simply can't be together... sigh

Kagura: Eh? No, we shall be together and forever! Today I'll make him mine! (Kyo was tied up together with ropes by Kagura then she hugged him so tight so that he will beg for mercy)

Kyo: Let...go...of...me...

Kagura:NO! UNTIL YOU SAY "I'LL LOVE YOU FOREVER KAGURA AND WE WILL BE TOGETHER!"

Kyo: N-NEVER! (Kyo then kicked her at the stomach and started running as Kagura didn't feel it and she started running after him)

Tohru: I hope they'll be alright...

Yuki: Don't worry Tohru they'll be, the stupid cat will give up sooner or later

creativitykafune: Okay... now let's get back to the story!

The Angel Tale

Chapter 4

The Two New Students

The next day…

Everyone did there old routine, wake up, Tohru makes breakfast, Yuki half asleep, Kyo getting a glass of milk, and Shigure in his office until Tohru is finish with breakfast, then they ate, Shigure goes back into his office and Tohru and the other two sohma's left for school.

The three of them were quiet as they walked, Kyo, Tohru and Yuki until,

"Hey Yuki-kun, Kyo-kun, would you guys like to race to school?" asked Tohru.

"Eh? You know that you can't win Tohru." Chuckled Yuki.

"Well, I just asked." Tohru looked disappointed.

"Uh, okay let's race!" shouted Yuki.

"Ha, this time the rat boy will lose and I shall win!" shouted Kyo as the three stopped.

"Okay, I'll count." Tohru said happily as the two got into a ready position.

"1.2…teehee." Tohru laughed as she started running it ahead.

"Hey!" The two boys screamed and started to catch up to her.

"Cheater!" Kyo shouted. Kyo was in last place catching up to second, Yuki in second catching up to first and Tohru is in first place.

"Teehee, try and catch up!" Tohru shouted as she ran faster than before.

"What the…" The two boys thought as they kept running and this time they were at there real speed, but still Tohru was ahead.

As they reached the school gates and the bell had just rang,

"Yay! I won!" Tohru shouted cheerfully.

"You cheated!" shouted Kyo.

"Honda-san, I never knew you ran that fast." Amazed Yuki said.

"Well, I thought you guys would win first." Tohru said honestly. Then suddenly she felt kind of dizzy.

"I feel kind of weird…" Tohru said as she started to collasp.

"Tohru?" asked Yuki but she suddenly fell.

"Tohru!" shouted the two Sohma's as they ran to her.

Suddenly, two men came running toward the group and said,

"We'll take over from here, why don't you two boys go to class, we'll bring her to the falculty." Said one boy.

"Hey, who the hell are you two suppose to be!" shouted Kyo but Yuki shoved him.

"Sorry about him but, who are you guys?" asked Yuki seriously.

"We are new students to this school." Replied one as he picked Tohru up.

"Put Tohru down!" shouted Kyo.

"Shut your mouth loud mouth!" said the other.

"Excuse me, what are your names?" asked Yuki.

"Oh, I'm Hiroyuki." Said the man holding Tohru. Hiroyuki had long blonde silky hair that was tied at the neck to the end and the length of the hair reached to his feet and he had blue eyes.

"I'm Ryouji, nice to meet ya." Ryouji had short spiky blond hair and had green eyes.

"Nice to meet you, now, will you let us please escort this lady to the faculty?" asked Ryouji.

"Eh, hell no." said Kyo.

"Sure, but we have to come along." Said Yuki with a smirk.

"Okay, fine with me." Said Hiroyuki as she stared into Tohru's eyes.

"Wha…" Tohru then blacked out.

Sohma Residents…

"Shigure, what brings you here?" asked a dark cold voice.

"Akito-kun, I have to tell you something important about Tohru." Said Shigure.

"Oh, tell me." Said Akito who was intrigued.

Five minutes later…

"Oh, I see, so Tohru has wings, no big deal, I can tear them apart, but I'll spare her. You may leave." Akito swift his hand.

"Yes Akito-san." Then Shigure left his room.

"Hmm… so Tohru has angel wings eh?" Akito started to laugh evilly.

Back at High School…

"Ow…" Tohru rubbed her head. "My head hurts."

Tohru looked around her surroundings, seeing that she found her self in the falculty.

"What happened, I remember racing Kyo and Yuki to school, then I won and…" Tohru then saw two sea ocean blue eyes.

"Oh, Miss Honda your awake, you can go back to class now, four of your friends had dropped you off five minutes ago, class has already started so here's a pass." Said the nurse and gave it to Tohru.

"Arigato." Tohru then took the pass and headed to class.

Class…

"Um, excuse me, uh, I'm sorry that I'm late, I just found myself in the falculty room." Tohru bowed infront of the class and handed the paper pass to the teacher and then she sat in her desk. But the teacher was interrupted by a staff member and the teacher headed out of class.

"Tohru, are you okay?" asked Yuki.

"Yes…" Tohru had the shivers once again created by the Yuki fan Club.

"Hey rat, we are going to retake that race you hear!" shouted Kyo.

"Whatever Kyo, but you should also say that Tohru had won the race. Shouldn't you be racing her as well." Yuki smirked at Kyo while Kyo looked fraustrated.

"Well, we could retake that race if ya want." Tohru asked.

"Why it's up to the stupid cat." Yuki chuckled as the fan club did as well for nothing.

"Well, fine! At P.E we shall race!" shouted Kyo.

"Fine by me, what about you Tohru?" asked Yuki.

"Well, okay!" Tohru then held herself because of the shivers from the Yuki-fan club.

"Hana-chan, will you do the honors?" Uo came right behind of Tohru and hugged her from the back.

"My pleasure." Hanajima then stared directly into all the Yuki fan clubs eyes and using her electromagnetic power, she sent them out right through the door as Hanajima followed behind.

"I'll follow her as well." Uotani smiled at Tohru and the Sohma's and headed toward the Yuki-Fan club with Hanajima.

"They are such nice friends!" Tohru smiled her brightest as Kyo and Yuki stared at the smile she had.

Then suddenly the teacher came in and notice half her class was gone until she sweat dropped as the rest of the students who had left the class came back down to their seats.

"Okay, as I was saying, I would like to introduce you to your two new classmates, please come in." The teacher announced as two men came walking in.

"Oh my, they are so beautiful as Yuki-Kun and Kyo-Kun! Look at that boy's long blonde silky hair and even his sea blue eyes to match! Ooh looked at the other boy to, he has blonde spiky hair and his sea green eyes to match! Ooh, were they popular at their school to?" gossips continued as the teacher clapped her hand and said "let the new students speak please" then the two boys nodded at the teacher.

"Hi I'm Hiroyuki and this is my cousin Ryouji, nice to meet you." Hiroyuki smiled as Ryouji only said "Hi" coolly.

"Pss… that's the guys who helped Tohru right?" whispered Uo-chan as she pointed at the two new students.

"Yes they are." Yuki replied.

"They just came out of no where!" whispered Kyo loudly.

"I sense incredible power coming within them just as Tohru's that I'm feeling now." Hanajima sensed.

"Eh?" Tohru turned back to the window which she stayed next to and watch the nature outside.

'Wow, so beautiful… I never thought about nature was so beautiful… it feels so relaxing… I feel different somehow… I can smell better to and now, I could see every single thing outside of what I see… and this desk, I could feel all it's texture…what's wrong with…' Tohru's thoughts trailed because of the teacher calling her name.

"Uh…yes teacher?" Tohru said quietly as she stood up.

"Tohru, please pay attention… well since you aren't paying attention, I would like you to be their guide and they'll be sitting in those empty desk right next to your right and one right behind you." The teacher sighed as she headed back to her desk.

"Hiroyuki, Ryouji, you may sit now." The teacher commanded as the other students especially the girls gave another shiver wave and glare toward Tohru making her feeling very, very scared.

As Hiroyuki sat right next to Tohru and Ryouji sat right next to Tohru, Tohru had met Hiroyuki's gaze and his gaze caught hers for a second then he asked.

"Are you alright?" asked Hiroyuki.

"Um, yes…. I'm okay… were you the one…" Tohru trailed thinking about those ocean blue eyes.

"Yes, me and my cousin had brought you to the faculty with the Sohma's." answered Hiroyuki.

"Oh, thank you very much!" Tohru smiled her brightest as Hiroyuki smiled a bit as he turned to the front you could slightly see him flush a little on his left cheek.

"Eh?" Tohru thought about how he was feeling, she thought he was sick.

"Are you…" Tohru trailed as the girl's glared at her once again and giving the cold shiver wave causing Tohru to hold herself.

"Hey! Sorry that I'm shouting out loud teach but, I gotta say that you have some jealousy rivals in this class." Ryouji smirked with a bright smile making people ooh and ah but some felt guilty as well even the girls.

"It's okay Ryouji since it is your first time here. I'll except that but only once, okay?" The teacher sighed as she took out other books from a backpack she held and handed it to the students.

Tohru whispered a thank you to Ryouji and smiled as Ryouji winked back.

Second Period...

As their first period class passed and reached to second, they were now working on their book reports.

"Now class, I would like to collect your assignments on your book report about The Angel of Heaven now please and I shall pass your next assignments.

Then the teacher walked down to each desk minus Ryouji and Hiroyuki but she stopped right infront of Tohru who seemed like she was spilling tears from the side of her eyes.

"Miss Honda, do you have your assignment or not." The teacher moaned.

"I-I'm sorry teacher it's just that I-I…" Tohru trailed as her eyes went blank.

"Tohru I what…." The teacher then notice something was wrong with Tohru's eyes.

"I sense she is hurt…" Hanajima spoke spookly.

"Tohru?" Uotani shaked Tohru's hand.

"Tohru!" The two Sohma's jumped out of their seats and walked behind the teacher.

The class went surrounding Tohru wondering what was going but for some reason Hiroyuki nodded his head to Ryouji as Ryouji stood from his chair and ran to the end of the door and Hiroyuki still watching Tohru, noticing that Yuki and Kyo was watching their every move wondering what they were doing.

"Tohru!" The class shouted for her to snap out.

"I…uggh…" Tohru held her head and started moan in pain.

"Tohru!" shouted the class. Tohru then hit her head on the desk trying to stop the throbbing pain. Then suddenly Tohru started to have visions in her head.

"GET OUT OF THE WAY!" shouted Hiroyuki as he held a blue feather in his two fingers with his right hand. "RYOUJI NOW!" shouted Hiroyuki.

"You got it!" Ryouji replied as he also held a feather in his hand a green one.

Gaurdian of time and space

Help us guardian angels

To stop the fraction of time

Time Stop!

Ryouji chanted then suddenly the room went all quiet and everyone had stop moving minus Tohru was still throbbing in pain.

Vision

Tohru saw herself in her bed room looking at the stars align then suddenly a pang of pain throbbed in her body and she suddenly started dropping to the ground and screaming and moaning for help, she then saw the Sohma's enter her room attemping to go to her but couldn't because of some invinsible barrier. Then she saw Shigure smirk as the Two boys attempt to save her then, her back bleeded with two slits of blood and appearing two pairs of wings and then she saw the vision fade away as she saw herself faint.

Then suddenly another vision appeared. Tohru saw herself when she was a one year old baby being carried by two beautiful angels in a beautiful Kingdom garden enjoying the delight of their child's happiness until…

Tohru felt as if she were the baby, she saw fiery flames shoot from the ground and hit heaven's ground, monsters appearing all over heaven terrorizing the peace of happiness. She saw torture going around heaven's lands. She saw so much blood that she would be barfing to death. Then suddenly as she felt herself drop to the ground, crying for her lost angels, she decided to search for them until, the Kingdom of Heaven's castle fell to the ground as the baby Tohru was still inside and she felt herself fade away…But before she could even feel herself fade away, she heard a wicked boast laughter and she heard of a woman screaming out, "MICHIKOOO!" Then the vision faded away and Tohru felt herself cry even more.

End of Vision

Kingdom of Heaven

"Oh my, Michiko…" The Queen held her Husband's hand tight as they watched within their throne room as they stared within a large mirror glass in front of them.

"I know, but she's got to remember sometime… I just hope nothing goes wrong." The King watched as they saw what had happen within the classroom of Tohru's school where she had been but they could not tell what was going on her head, they weren't strong enough.

As they watched their daughter Tohru aka Michiko, the large glass's image changed into fiery flames and appeared a girl with purple hair and yellow eyes wearing a red leather jacket, black leather pants, and a black top.

"Ah, Ceres the celestial maiden it's been long!" The queen smiled brightly.

"Yes your majesty… it's been long." The celestial maiden Ceres smiled.

Celestial maidens are powerful beings who live in the Kingdom of heaven with the powerful angels. The Celstial Maidens are also called Tennyos. The Tennyos were at war with the Angels years and years ago, but later when Michiko was born, the Tennyos and the Angels made a treaty to not have war. The Tennyos wanted to live in heaven long ago before the war ever started so they created celestial robes to bring them to the Kingdom of heaven. The angels did not want no powerful beings to live among Kingdom of Heaven and they wanted to stay isolated from these powerful beings, but as the war started and ended, both Tennyos and Angels relized that they were hurting others around them. The Angels never killed a being and Tennyos thought that killing Angels in the process to get to heaven was such a greedy deed so when the King and Queen borned Michiko, the Angels made a treaty with the Tennyos who which agreed to it and made the deal. The Angels had let them in their Kingdom and the Tennyos were able to live in heaven but there was a catch, when the Angels are in trouble or they need help, the Tennyos would be there to help out.

As for Ceres, do you know the story of The Legend of the Celestial Maiden? Well it goes like this;

A long, long time ago there was once a fisherman. One day, as he was passing by a beach, he saw several beautiful celestial maidens bathing in the water. In the pine tree nearby there were magnificent feathered cloaks such as he had never seen. The man realized they belonged to the maidens, and secretly took one home. The maiden whose robe was taken could not return to heaven. Seeing the man the maiden became suspicious, asking him, "Have you seen my robes? If you have them, please give them back." But the man feigned ignorance. The maiden, unable to go home, tearfully became the man's wife. They had children, and many years later, the celestial maiden heard their children singing a nursery rhyme. It told of where the man had hidden the robes. With her robes back, the heavenly maiden returned to the heavenly home she had longed after leaving her husband and her children behind.

Well Ceres was that celestial maiden from long ago. Ceres had been reincarnating girls from a family to find the celestial robes but Ceres would only appear when the sixteenth star align. But, as the first time she did reincarnate herself, at the age of sixteen the girl who was reincarnated by Ceres killed the family so the family had no choice but to kill the girl. But alas, Ceres was able to reappear at the age sixteen once again to find her celestial robes but she would kill any of the girl's family who gets in the way or anyone who gets in the way. But Ceres has her own will to change back into the girl she was before and the girl will have no clue what was going on but unless she would be able to talk to Ceres at sometimes and Ceres may tell her what had happen or someone would tell her what was going on or change back to her if she wants to or if she faints or pass outs or give up Ceres would take over her body. So now you know about Ceres.

Ceres had to stay on earth because she did not have her Celestial robes so Ceres had to become a double-agent but the girl is the one who helps Kingdom of Hell and Ceres who gives the reports. (The girl doesn't have any clue about Ceres helping the Kingdom of Heaven.)

"So, what is going on Ceres?" asked the King.

"The Kingdom of Hell is starting war against the Kingdom of Heaven in a couple of months so you must train your angels."

"What?" The King and Queen shouted.

"Yes they will come to Heaven so you must be prepared and theirs one more thing." Ceres quoted.

"What is it?" The King and Queen asked urgently.

"The King is planning on taking your daughter Michiko to the Kingdom of Hell, so you must tell your two guardians to take swift actions to reach the princess." Ceres said.

"Yes we shall tell, thank you Ceres. Contact us when there is another report to turn in to us." The King announced as the King swift his hand from the mirror and Ceres bowed before the mirror was casted away

"Dear what should we do!" The Queen shouted.

"We must do as Ceres suggested." The King replied and started to announced to the angels to train for their next war with Hell once again and The Queen went to the garden and started to pray so that she can contact the two guardian angels to move swiftly as they can The King had sent to protect the daughter.

Kingdom of Hell

Ceres stood up quickly and heard a man calling out her name.

"Aya! Where are you, it's me Aki oh..." Aki saw the celestial maiden staring with those golden eyes.

"Hello Aki." Then Ceres started to change, her hair bleach blonde and her eyes changed to the color brown.

"Hey Aki!" Aya ran and gave Aki a slap in the back.

"Hey lil' sis, now what should we do now? I mean how do we capture the princess?" Aki asked.

"Let me think..." Aya then had a smirk on her face.

creativitykafune: Sorry to leave it short! Gotta go play MU now well sorry again for leaving it a cliffy. Well gotta go and don't forget to review and ask any questions! Also please vote! I need more votes.

P.S. answer this question;

1. Who is this unknown guy I've been talking about? (I bet you know! But if not, guess ya gotta wait!)

2. Who do you think I will pick for couples?

creativitykafune out!