EXPLANATION
Alright people. This is going to explain the concept of the story to those who do not understand. First off though, I don't mind if you flame it but you really should log in and tell me yourself instead of doing it anonymously. I don't care if you don't like it, but I want you to get it so you'll maybe at least respect it. No, I cannot prove that Skipper would do this, but he kills her because he's afraid of losing her. Skipper has gone a little insane at this point, and a big thing is that (though I may not have explained it well enough) he does not do Marlene's body for pleasure. He does as an ashamed act. He fears himself and is trying to give back to her. But I don't think some of you understood that. You were saying that he raped her. Yes it would technically be a rape but in actuality, she's already dead, therefore, anyone could do anything to her body if they own it. Now Skipper did not own her body. He kind of took it that way though. He screwed up. Haven't we all made mistakes that changed our lives? Why can't he?
No one can say that Skipper would not do something like this. Jealous has pushed people to horrible things and Skipper IS the jealous type. Next, in writing, we get CREATIVE LIBERTIES. Meaning, that we can make the characters do what we want. Writing is a freedom of speech and is not to be suppressed. You were warned at the content of the story as well. You never had to read it, and no one forced you to do so. Although I do appreciate your opinions, negative or not, you should try to understand it. I might be wrong, and you do understand it and think I'm an unforgivable bastard. But Fanfiction is a website for fun. It is not under any rule and therefore there is no one controlling what we are aloud to do. To the reviewer "SAD" I don't agree with you at all. You seem to hate the whole tragedy genera and so why did you read this? You said: "this is so dark it hurts to read. seriously. your stories use to be good, but now they're morbid. skipper would NEVER kill marlene…you must really hate her to write about her being killed so brutally." There are a few things I'd like to point out about this.
You were warned as I said. It says "tragedy" at the genera and "Horror". As I've said, I don't mind you giving your opinion but you obliviously didn't get this AT ALL. I love Marlene, and you have no understanding of my mind what so ever. King Julien as been shot before in a story and yet when I have Marlene get stabbed, you flame it. This was not necessarily a brutal killing. I could have had Skipper tear her head off and rip her intestines out. And frankly, you're the only one I've seen so far who thought that was brutal at all. Finally, I write many different types of stories and I don't care if you don't like my newer ones. As a writer, I explore all genera of writing and your opinion was frankly offensive. I did not ask for your opinion of my writing.
Finally, you do not know if Skipper would kill Marlene or not. Jealous, insanity, and rage were all factors in this story and are a bad mix that can cause horrible things. Actually Skipper was pretty merciful. He could have raped her when she was alive or tortured her. I know the better thing he could have done was leave her alone but that's just not how this worked out. Last thoughts: Dirtyrayze, I'm fine with your opinion but I did not appreciate you saying that Skullshovel was trying to be a "hero". That was uncalled for. He and I are very close friends and are very protective of each other, and maybe he did act out of turn but that comment was very offensive to him and to me. I'm not telling you to apologize or anything but I do want you to realize that it was not at all polite and was actually very rude. And assuming that he favors necrophila was also rude and offensive.
He was not showing off at all. He was just trying to help me. I realize that it might've been better for him to let me handle it but that was very disrespectful and mean. I'm sorry for going on like this, and I have nothing against you, but I am very protective of him. I'm sorry if I offend you but I'm being honest with you on how I feel.
Thank you all for taking your time to read this and please give your thoughts on this. I hope this explains the story better and I hope you may learn to like it.