Third chappie coming up! Thanks Sparklespazz101 for that great constructive review yet many positives, (btw I love flames and constructivism) that is 3 points for a great review and 1 point for trying to guess my favourite character. No it is not Squirrelflight or Sandstorm, sorry. Hint: It has something to do with the main characters name.


Lots of kits

"They're coming! They're coming!" Fiddlenose, a heavily pregnant nursing queen cried. Breezesound rushed in.

"It's ok, it's ok, you're doing fine, relax, relax." Icestar saw Fiddlenose breathe deeply until a small black bundle appeared at her paws. Breezesound bit the ball so the kit could breathe and she licked him backwards until he was breathing natural. Fiddlenose gave a cry of delight when she saw her small gift in front of her.

"I am going to call him Shadowkit!" She decided. Silverfish's three kits Runningkit, Hollowkit and Willowkit came bounding up.

"He's so tiny!" Runningkit gasped.

"What's he called?" Willowkit asked.

"Shadowkit," Fiddlenose told them, proud, that the small kits were paying so much attention.

"Who's the father?" Hollowkit asked.

"Kits!" Silverfish scolded "Don't be so rude, go play outside." The kits agreed almost too enthusiastically and ran outside. Icestar licked her chest; her kits would be born soon, she was thinking about being a mother when Fiddlenose interrupted.

"Icestar?" Fiddlenose asked shyly "I was wondering…"

"Yes?" Icestar asked

"Please don't kick me out!" The elderly queen blurted.

"Whatever would I do that for?" Icestar was confused.

"The father is rouge called Tail." Fiddlenose admitted. Icestar chose her next words carefully.

"I wouldn't kick you out for that!" Icestar told her "You can't help love!" Fiddlenose was delighted.

"Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!"

Icestar gasped and panted. Her sides were heaving with effort. It was a quarter moon after Shadowkit was born. Her kits were coming!

"Get Breezesound!" She called out to no one, hoping someone was listening. Non-reality was dark and she could concentrate on breathing, reality was red and she felt her muscles heaving,

It was all dark. Where was she? Where was everyone? She came back into reality at a voice.

"Icestar I'm here don't panic relax and breath steadily." Breezesound! Icestar did as she was told, breathing slowly and calmly. She felt something coming gradually out! Littlesky gently bite something, the sack, so her little wonder could breathe for the first time. She was distracted by a voice.

"Icestar! Are you ok!" It was Hawkmask. "Is she in pain? What's wrong?" He asked Breezesound.

"Shush," Breezesound commanded. "It's fine, give us some room!" Icestar felt another kit coming! It was out! Icestar knew immediately no others will come. Two for joy! She dared to look down and she saw two beautiful kits so perfect in every way. The she cat was completely white with Hawkmask's blue eyes and the male had a bright red pelt.

"Everyone out apart from Fiddlenose and Icestar!" Breezesound demanded.

"No Hawkmask can stay," Icestar gasped. He shot to her side as she spoke.

"Are you ok?" Hawkmask asked.

"Yes! The kits are... gorgeous, lovely..."Icestar struggled for words.

"What shall we call them?"

"Whitekit and Redkit! Icestar said immediately before thinking. Icestar gasped as she remembered the icy words 'The White and Red beware."

"What's wrong?" Hawkmask asked.

"The kits are in danger!" Icestar admitted

Hawkmask was confused. "How, who, what?"

"Cold is endangering the forest. The White and Red beware!" Icestar gasped. A shriek of joy came from the other side of the nursery, disturbing this horror moment.

"He's opening his eyes!" Fiddlenose cried happily. Hawkmask raced over to see Shadowkit blink one eye and raise his head. He gave a squeak of happiness to see his mother and he licked her before padding over to Icestar. He gave a sniff before scampering back to his mother.

Cold is coming! Rouges POV

Dark could smell the marks. This is someone's territory. He flicked his tail to tell his companions to stop. Cold, his second in command stepped forwards.

"Shall we go further? Cats live here." The scraggily tom asked. Dark turned around.

"There are a large group of cats. Groups have kits! Kits make cats surrender easily," He sniffed.

"I know this scent. It's a mix of cat I recognise."

"The mountain tribe?" Cold asked. Dark hissed

"The mountain cats were weak, which would be easy enough." He sniffed again "There are no scent of mountains," Cream a young cat stepped forward.

"What about those four groups?" She asked. Dark grinned. That was it. Those cowards sneaked off the island they trapped them on so easily and moved here. The smallest kit Diamond squeaked and hid behind her mother. Her sister Crystal asked.

"Why do we always move around? Why can't we stay in one place?" Dark flicked his tail for silence, angrily. Crystal backed away towards her mother. He scented a small group of two cats. The rouges hid in the brambles.

"Amberpelt why do we have to go the long way why can't we go the…" He paused and flicked his tail for silence. They could smell the rouges.

"We have to tell Icestar... or Greeneyes if Icestar is busy with the kits!" The male mewed. Then they ran out of the trees without any sight of the hungry group.

Dark thought 'Amberpelt? Greeneyes? These were the clans. Didn't a star affix mean leader... If it was their leader than there was only the simple task to attack and grab.


Guess the Breaking Dawn quote for 5 points!

The person who can guess my favorare warrior charecter gets 5 points.

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Scores on the doors:

Riverclan- 4

Thunderclan- 1

Windclan- 0

Shadowclan-0

Bloodclan-0

Starclan-0