Chapter 4. Review this please.

Chapter 4:

Dib sat in the living room of Tak's house. He felt scared. What if Tak didn't survive? What if she died while Dib was trying to take care of her? Until she got out of her coma there was no way of knowing...

"Hey."

Dib looked up and saw Gretchen at the door. She had let herself in.

"I'm sorry..." she said.

"About what?" Dib asked.

"About Tak," Gretchen replied.

"So you heard?" Dib asked.

Gretchen nodded. "I'm sure you must be very upset."

"No, not really," Dib said, "I'm sure I'll get better very soon."

Gretchen smiled. But it wasn't a kind smile. It was a secretly joyful smile. What Gretchen didn't know was that Tak was going to get better, and she thought "get better very soon" meant "find a new girlfriend." Gretchen had always been jealous of Tak's perfect beauty, and how Dib never noticed her and always seemed to notice Tak. It was always, "Did Tak say anything about me today?" or "Do you think Tak likes me?" or "I wonder if Tak and I will get married someday?" Gretchen got pissed by it. Fuck Tak! Fuck her all the way to hell! That's what practically went in her mind every day. So now, with Tak gone, Dib would be all hers. Gaz said so herself...

IZ

Speaking of Gaz, she was getting ready to go to Zim's house. Zim better have those things he promised me, Gaz thought as she got dressed, Or I'm gonna kick that motherfucker's ass all the way into space.

Gaz could really be homicidal when she wanted to. She put on a black singlet with a ripped bottom edge. She wore a black neck band and some really dark blue shorts, along with some boots with a buckle on the front of each one.

Gaz headed over to Zim's house. She rang the door bell, expecting the robot parents to answer saying, "Welcome home son." Instead, she heard Zim pushing the crazy parents into a wardrobe. Then he opened the door.

"Welcome to my base, filthy Gaz human," Zim bowed.

"Yeah. Whatever," Gaz said stepping inside, "Do you have the pizza and video games or not?"

"Right this way," Zim bowed like a duke would do for his queen. He stood up again. "GIR!!!"

Gir jumped out of nowhere and landed in front of him. "Yes, my master!" He yelled with red eyes.

"Get those pizza's we ordered from Bloatys. The Gaz girl demands refreshments."

"Okie dokie," Gir nodded, his eyes turning blue.

Hours later, Gaz was sitting on the sofa stuffing herself silly with pizza. The sofa was surrounded by mountains of pizza boxes, half of them greasy and empty. Zim watched with pleasure.

"Excellent," he said to himself, "The next stop is the video games, then the human demon is right for the picking."

Gaz soon finished all the pizzas, surprisingly still not fat.

"I'm bored," she said snapping her fingers, "Get me the video games, pronto!"

Gaz spent half an hour playing Vampire Piggy Hunter 3 on the ps3. She didn't enjoy it however. Although the game had great HD graphics, it wasn't fun without the two player feature. She looked at Zim.

"Come play with me," Gaz said.

"No thank you filthy Gaz stink," Zim said.

Gaz glared with evil demon eyes. "That wasn't an invitation..."

Zim had a hard time playing the versus level. Gaz kept beating him.

"You're so lame at this," Gaz laughed.

Zim stared at her. He felt weird when she laughed. He felt... giddy.

"What are you looking at?" Gaz asked creeped out, "You better wipe that smirk off your face before I smack it off!"

Zim quickly stopped smiling.

"Well," Gaz stretched after putting the controller down, "I'm bored again. Let's go and have a look at your lab."

Gaz wasn't easily impressed by the lab. On the other hand, she wasn't easily impressed by anything. Zim walked around explaining what everything was. Gaz wasn't listening. She leaned against a table of test tubes. One spilled yellow liquid all over her.

"Argh!" Gaz yelled in frustration, "It'll take forever to get this out!"

"So what do you think of my base?" Zim asked.

"Huh?" Gaz then remembered what she was doing here. "Oh yeah. Great. Great."

Zim could tell she was being sarcastic.

"Well I better go home," Gaz said.

"But it's still so early," Zim said.

"I know, but I had a little accident," Gaz said, "Plus I don't wanna see you. Later." She left. Then Zim noticed the spilled test tube.

"Shit!" Zim yelled, picking it up, "My disappearing juice! Well, there goes that plan."

Author's note: My dad is playing the Nazi Zombies level on Call of Duty: World At War right now. That is what inspired me to put the ps3 in this page.