Okay, no I am NOT giving up on this story. I love this story too much to end it. But I don't like how I wrote it. I killed off Venus; an important char. that I need near the end of the story! (How Stupid Was I!?!?) And im not a big fan of "OH SHE CAME BACK TO LIFE!"
Okayy enough babbling from my part. I wrote the first chapter of the Revised edition so check it out!
-LethalxRose