Hey! We finally made it to our goal of 10 reviews! *Gives thumbs up sign*. I want to thank each and every one of you for reviewing. Also, because school is getting closer to being out, I'm probably going to start updating more often because I'll have more time! And, if you haven't already, please check out "Warriors: Cry of the Lion" by ME because I think it's a really interesting story. And Bramblestar isn't being evil like his father, but he's just trying to make everything fair...if you're to that part yet...anyways, ON TO THE OTHER THINGS!XD
COTC:
xXJayfeatherRocksXx won! YAY TO XXJAYFEATHERROCKSXX!XD Y'all can start this planning a chapter thing. Lol yes Foreststar is Foreststar's warrior name!
New COTC:
Opinion: Do you think Hawkfire's reason for knocking Snowflake out is reasonable? The prizes this week are a mystery!
RTRS:
xXJayfeatherRocksXx: Yeah, I never wanted Hawkfire to be Snowflake's mate, and I thought of an interesting plot to end their relationship...XD. YES, I LOVE My cat from hell! It is a GREAT show! I haven't watched it in awhile...been too busy...D:
Spiritleap: Thank you for the OC! And for the wish for me to get 10 reviews soon...:3. And of COURSE Frosty can meet the Clans and join them and get the warrior name as Skydust. Great name, btw. The whole point for OC's (I think, anyway)is to allow the readers of the story to get in on the action.
Recap: The gathering occurred and Snowflake got another prophecy!:O And, if that wasn't enough, Hawkfire knocked her out for some unknown reason. WE SHALL GO FIND OUT!
Chapter 4: A dark day
Hawkfire!
Snowflake thought. Her mind swirled with all of the emotions inside her. She was happy because she was living the life she had always wanted. She was mad because she was living that life in another Clan. She was scared because EternalClan had just given her another prophecy. The Prophecy! Maybe Hawkfire's going to start to become evil now...
Snowflake jolted awake. She looked around to see where she was. I'm near the WaterClan camp. She looked for the sun. It was rising. So it is morning, Snowflake thought angerly. She got up and spat in disgust. Her white fur was speckled brown with dirt! She immediately started grooming it, getting all of the mats and tangles out of her thick fur.
"There she is!"a cat called. Snowflake recognized Foxleap's voice. He charged over and shoved his nose into he face."Did you get attacked?"
Snowflake nodded and leaned away. The rest of the patrol had caught up. Greenfoot, Poppyfire and Hollowpaw, and Icefang were there. Foxleap must be the leader, Snowflake thought.
"I was attacked by Hawkfire!" Snowflake declared loudly. The patrol looked at her like she had gone nuts.
"No...you were attacked by a cat that looked like him,"Greenfoot corrected.
Snowflake hissed and stood up."How do you know I wasn't attacked by him?"
"Because Hawkfire wouldn't do something like that!"Icefang growled. She had always been jealous of Snowflake, for she was Hawkfire's mate.
"I was attacked by him, and I'm going to camp now!"Snowflake growled. She stalked off, lashing her tail. These cats only think I ever do wrong...
When Snowflake finally got back to camp, she saw Mudstar and Waterstar talking. But that didn't matter to her. First, I need to find my kits and make sure they're okay.
"Tumblekit! Morningkit! Echokit! Come here now!"Snowflake called.
"Mommy Mommy Mommy!"Morningkit yowled as she sprinted towards Snowflake.
"Where have you been?"Tumblekit asked her as he trotted up to her.
Echokit tackled Snowflake."Don't ever leave for that long again! We were all worried about you!"
Snowflake purred and gently nudged Echokit off of her."I was attacked by a cat that looked like your father." The three kits gasped.
"But Daddy would never attack you, right?"Echokit meowed.
"I thought so too. But apparently, he did. I can just tell."Snowflake answered.
"Well, I'm going over there to have a chat with him!"Tumblekit growled. He started padding over to Hawkfire, who was talking with Waterstar.
"Tumblekit, come back!"Snowflake hollered. The kit turned around and mouthed,"Why?" He padded back slowly."You can chat with him in a second. I want to tell you all something,"she gulped. How will they react, knowing that they are Half-Clan cats?
"Well, I am not from WaterClan originally."Snowflake meowed cautiously and slowly.
Morningkit gasped."No...how is that possible?"
"Then what Clan did you come from?" Tumblekit asked.
"Why didn't you ever tell us?"Echokit asked, much hurt in her voice.
"Well, I am the daughter of Foreststar, the founder of ForestClan, so I came from ForestClan. I never wanted to tell you because I didn't want you to think you couldn't be the best warriors ever, but I also didn't want you believing a lie forever."
"If you're ForestClan, then why are you in WaterClan?"Tumblekit asked.
"I fell in love with Hawkfire. I wanted nothing more than to be with him, but I had no idea that he would ask me to join him in WaterClan and live there. I'm doubting my decision now, but having you three makes everything alot better."Snowflake nuzzled Tumblekit and Morningkit.
Echokit backed away and growled,"Liar!"and ran over to Hawkfire. Snowflake frowned. Oh no. She's probably telling him what happened.
Hawkfire strolled over, anger in his blue eyes."Why didn't you get me to tell them?" he growled.
Snowflake hissed,"Because you attacked me!"
"Yeah!"Tumblekit stood, hackles raised. Morningkit join him, unsheathing her claws. Echokit stood beside Hawkfire, lashing her tail.
Hawkfire's gaze mellowed out."I'm sorry. I never told you why I attacked you."
Snowflake nodded,"Uh huh."
"Well, I was back at camp, and Icefang was talking to me, and she was telling me how she wanted to have kits with this special someone, and then when I asked her who it was, she said, you. And I was like, whoa! Snowflake is my mate. Back off! And then she was like, not for much longer. Then Icefang charged out of camp and I followed her. She was waiting for you and Blazestar to stop talking, and then I knew that she was going to kill you, so when you came her way, I had to knock you out so she wouldn't find you...that's all..." he looked at the ground."I really am sorry,"
Snowflake relaxed."Okay. I am sorry for telling our kits that they're Half-Clan without you."
Hawkfire shook his head."You are the one that should've told them, and I'm glad you did."
"Why?"
"Well, you're a bit out of place, living in WaterClan and all...and if they have someone like you tell them that, it'll make them feel better."Hawkfire thought.
Snowflake shrugged. Waterstar was leaping up onto the Bed of Reeds, and gathered the Clan, yowling,"Let all WaterClan cats gather, for I have several important announcements to make!"
The cats of WaterClan quickly gathered. Snowflake wondered what this would be about."I also got a new Prophecy,"Snowflake muttered to Hawkfire.
"Really?" he gasped.
"Quiet!" Lowfoot snapped. Snowflake rolled her eyes.
"Today, from this day forward, we have partnered with MudClan to take down ForestClan. FOEVER!" The WaterClan cats started cheering, and Snowflake felt sick. No...no...ForestClan...needs...me...now.
"I know one of you won't be so eager to fight, but this is a test. Snowflake, if you choose to fight your own Clan, I shall make sure you get rewarded. Now, I must make two new apprentices. Sandkit and Lilykit, you have reached the age of becoming apprentices. Sandkit, from this moment on, until you receive your warrior name, you shall be known as Sandpaw. Your mentor will be Lakeshine. I believe that Lakeshine is ready for an apprentice, and I hope that you pass on all of your skills to Sandpaw. Lilykit, from this moment on, until you receive your warrior name, you shall be known as Lilypaw. Your mentor is Grasswhisker. I hope that he passes on all of his knowledge and skills to you. Welcome, Sandpaw and Lilypaw!"
"SANDPAW! LILYPAW! SANDPAW! LILYPAW!"the cats cheered. Sandpaw touched noses with Lakeshine, and Grasswhisker with Lilypaw. Snowflake looked over at Hawkfire.
"I have to go. Now." she growled.
"Where?" he asked her.
"Home. I need to go to ForestClan. Get the kits." Snowflake meowed urgently. The sooner I get home, the better!
"No. Our kits need to stay here."Hawkfire growled.
"Let them decide. Tumblekit, Morningkit, Echokit, what are you going to do?"
"I'm going with mom." Tumblekit meowed. Morningkit followed him.
"I want to see my other Clan!" Morningkit meowed excitedly.
"I'm staying in WaterClan. They raised me, after all." Echokit meowed.
"Good. Then it is settled." Hawkfire dipped his head, and watched as Snowflake and two of her kits went home, home to ForestClan.
Alrighty! SHE'S GOIN' HOME!
This weeks review goal is 20! Hope we get there soon!XD
Allegiances
WATERCLAN
Leader: Waterstar-pretty silver she-cat with blue eyes; expecting Smokeclaw's kits
Deputy: Redwillow-red she-cat with amber eyes
Apprentice: Kinkpaw
Medicine Cat: Brambleberry-light tawny colored she-cat with forest green eyes
Apprentice: Flametail-orange tabby tom with yellow eyes
Warriors
Grasswhisker-silver tabby tom with light blue eyes
Apprentice: Sandpaw
Smokeclaw-dark gray tom with amber eyes
Whiteheart-big white tom with green eyes
Ashfur-smoke-gray tom with yellow eyes
Apprentice: Riverpaw
Lakeshine-black she-cat with one white paw and dark green eyes
Apprentice: Lilypaw
Greenfoot-light gray tom with a brown paw; amber eyes
Lowfoot-dark blue-gray tom with yellow eyes
Oakheart-reddish brownish tom with amber eyes
Frostfur-white she-cat with unusual blue eyes
Foxleap-white tom with red patches and amber eyes
Moonflower-black she-cat with green eyes
Apprentice: Featherpaw
Marshclaw-orange tom with green eyes
Hawkfire-brown tabby tom with white paws and white tail tip; blue eyes
Apprentice: Flarepaw
Jaytalon-gray tom with green eyes
Darkwing-black tom with amber eyes
Poppyfire-brown tabby she-cat with forest-green eyes
Apprentice: Hollowpaw
Blueclaw-blueish tom with light green eyes
Antpelt-fluffy black tom with dark amber eyes
Tornflower-once beautiful tortoiseshell she-cat with blue eyes
Wolfheart-dark gray tom with a white tail tip and blue eyes
Rowanclaw-dark tawny tom with forest green eyes
Pepplestream-gray she-cat with blue eyes
Hollyheart-dark brown tabby she-cat with yellow eyes
Icefang-white she-cat with amber eyes
Apprentices
Kinkpaw-reddish tom with forest-green eyes
Hollowpaw-gray tabby she-cat with blue eyes
Riverpaw-gray she-cat with pale blue eyes
Featherpaw-light silver tabby she-cat with blue eyes
Flarepaw-orange and white tom with amber eyes
Sandpaw-light russet-red tom with one white paw; blue eyes
Lilypaw-small red she-cat with patches of white fur; amber eyes
Queens
Mossfur-dark gray she-cat with white paws and pale yellow eyes; mother of Whiteheart's kits, who are 5 moons old:
Ivykit-dark gray she-cat with patches of white and green eyes
Flowerkit-gray she-cat with white paws and yellow eyes
Hazelfoot-white she-cat with patches of orange fur and black fur, green eyes; expecting kits
Snowflake-fluffy cream she-cat with a white underbelly, chest, and paws. Green eyes; mother of Hawkfire's kits, who are 5 moons old:
Tumblekit-brown and white tom with blue eyes
Morningkit-nearly pure white she-cat with green eyes
Echokit-brown tabby and white she-cat with green eyes
Elders
Cherryclaw-brown she-cat with a dappled pelt; green eyes
FORESTCLAN
Leader: Blazestar-dark tawny tom with darker tawny spots; black outlines around the tawny spots; cream chest and underbelly, yellow eyes
Deputy: Thistlejaw-dark brown tabby tom with amber eyes and a deformed jaw
Medicine Cat: Briarstorm-white she-cat with a light tawny dappled pelt; blue eyes
Warriors
Dewclaw-brown tabby tom with blue eyes
Apprentice: Creekpaw
Stonehawk-dark gray tom with yellow eyes
Ferncloud-tawny colored she-cat with yellow eyes; has darker tawny spots and a peppered look inside the spots and around the spots; cream neck and underbelly
Curlyfur-brown tom with very curly fur and amber eyes; has tawny colored paws
Brackenclaw-black tom with white paws and tail tip; green eyes
Littlewing-small ginger and white tom with green eyes
Moonwater-gray tom with blue eyes
Whitestorm-pure white tom with unusual blue eyes
Ravenflight-small black tom with one white paw, blue eyes
Heatherpool-golden tabby she-cat with blue eyes
Aspenfall-dark gray, almost black she-cat with green eyes
Gingerclaw-russet red tom with amber eyes
Rabbitfur-white tom with green eyes
Leafsky-black she-cat with amber eyes
Sageclaw-pale ginger tom with yellow eyes
Pounceclaw-large white tom with one black paw and yellow eyes
Tigerheart-handsome orange and black tabby tom with green eyes
Pineclaw-large gray mottled tom with bright yellow eyes
Leopardheart-golden tom with black spots and yellow eyes
Seedfang-dark gray tom with three white paws; green eyes
Redshadow-reddish tom with green eyes
Ferretwond-small light-gray tabby she-cat with big blue eyes
Wheatclaw-yellow light brown tom with little flecks of orange-brown; amber eyes
Blacksky-white tom with a thick black streak going down from his nose to the tip of his tail; greenish yellow eyes
Shadowpelt-black she-cat with battle-scared ears and greenish yellow eyes
Destiny-silver tabby she-cat with brown tabby markings; green eyes
Bonetail-black and white tom with yellow eyes, crooked tail
Stardust-beautiful tortoiseshell and white she-cat with blue eyes
Brightcloud-brown tabby she-cat with blue eyes
Rushwater-white tom with green eyes
Petalsong-brown she-cat with yellow eyes
Apprentice: Treepaw
Blackgleam-silver fluffy tom with black paws and green eyes
Rainsplash-silky pale silver she-cat with dark gray spots and dark amber eyes
Wavestorm-silver she-cat with black tabby markings and blue eyes
Hailstorm-white she-cat with green eyes
Songfeather-black and white she-cat with yellow eyes
Skycloud-black and orange tom with green eyes
Lionfire-orange tom with green eyes
Starlingwing-small gray and white she-cat
Crowsong-orange tom with blind green eyes
Apprentice: Seapaw
Goldenpelt-ugly ginger and white she-cat with a crooked tail and dark amber eyes
Pouncefire-handsome black and white tom with one amber eye;other eyes missing
Pebblefoot-black and white tom with blind yellow eyes; battle scars all over his body
Sedgewhisker-beautiful tortoiseshell she-cat with blue eyes
Apprentices
Treepaw- brown tabby tom with forest-green eyes
Seapaw-gray and white tom with blue eyes
Queens
Rosesky-white she-cat with bright yellow eyes, mother of Curlyfur's kits who are 3 moons old:
Adderkit-fluffy brown and white tom with amber eyes
Junglekit-white she-cat with very curly fur and amber eyes
Mottlekit-brown and white tom with very curly fur and pale amber eyes
Sedgewhisker-beautiful tortoiseshell she-cat with blue eyes, mother of Pebblefoot's kits:
Cloudkit-black, white, and orange tom with green eyes
Leafkit-tortoiseshell and white tom with yellow eyes
Elders
Funnyheart-light gray tabby tom with blue eyes
Willowheart-white she-cat with unusual eyes; ISN'T DEAF
MUDCLAN
Leader: Mudstar-big gray tabby tom with pale yellow eyes
Deputy: Heavynose-big dark gray tom with blue eyes
Medicine Cat: Kinkclaw-black tom with white paws and green eyes
Warriors
Dewclaw-brown tabby tom with blue eyes
Apprentice: Creekpaw
Mothbird-dark brown she-cat with amber eyes
Redclaw-dark russet-red tom with white paws and a white-tipped tail; blue eyes
Acornfur-ginger tabby tom with green eyes
Embershadow-dark brown she-cat with white paws, underbelly, and white-tipped tail; pale amber eyes
Apprentice: Mintpaw
Rowanclaw-dark tawny tom with green eyes
Olivestream-black tom with pale blue eyes
Whiteclaw-white tom with green eyes
Tigerstripe-big dark orange tabby tom with black paws and amber eyes; missing one ear
Swifttalon-dark gray tabby tom with blue eyes
Vinesplash-long-legged gray she-cat with three white paws and blue eyes
Sunfire-golden tabby tom with amber eyes
Ratclaw-black tom with amber eyes
Bonecrusher-black and white tom with bright yellow eyes
Shinningclaw-blue-gray tabby tom with blue eyes
Apprentice: Lightningpaw
Molefoot-gray tom with one brown paw; green eyes
Gorseheart-gray tom with a dark mottled pelt; sea-blue eyes
Flowerstripe-pretty silver tabby she-cat with two white paws and green eyes
Fawnsplash-dark ginger she-cat with a white spotted pelt; amber eyes
Galestorm-gray tom with blue eyes
Apprentice: Rainpaw
Tawnyfur-gray she-cat with blue eyes
Apprentices
Creekpaw-black tom with forest-green eyes
Mintpaw-white and red she-cat with amber eyes
Lightningpaw-blue-gray tom with a white dash across his side; green eyes
Rainpaw-gray and white tom with blue eyes
Queens
Hazelshine-pretty tortishell she-cat with blue eyes, mother of Galestorm's kits:
Jaggedkit-black and orange tom with blue eyes
Goosekit-black, orange, and gray tom with blue eyes
Cedarfur-reddish brown she-cat with green eyes; has white chest and underbelly; excpecting Mudstar's kits
SUNCLAN
Leader: Twistedstar-golden tom with a twisted paw; green eyes
Deputy: Goldensky-handsome golden tabby tom with green eyes
Medicine cat: Barkfang-dark brown tabby tom with green eyes
Apprentice: Soulpaw
Warriors
Windsky-light brown she-cat with black spots and amber eyes
Apprentice: Fruzepaw
Onewhisker-pale ginger tom with green eyes
Scareye-bog black tom with a scar over his right eye; blue eyes
Wolfberry-gray tortoiseshell she-cat with light green eyes
Sandberry-ginger she-cat with bright amber eyes
Willowfur-gray she-cat with blue eyes
Fernheart-gray she-cat with green eyes
Brighteyes-white she-cat with light brown spots and blue eyes
Apprenitces
Fruzepaw-light tawny tom with amber eyes
Soulpaw-small milky white tom with big blue eyes
Queens
Dawnmist-pretty tortoiseshell she-cat with light blue eyes, mother of Twistedstar's kits, who are 5 moons old:
Cherrykit-golden and black she-cat with one light blue eye, and one green eye
Shadekit-gray she-cat with black tabby stripes and blue eyes
Haykit-golden brown tom with blue eyes
Silverbreeze-pretty silver-gray she-cat with blue eyes, mother of Goldensky's kit; 4 moons:
Mosskit-gray tom with flecks of golden within his fur; blue-green eyes
Elders
(NONE)
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~Night