Hi it's me again sorry that the previous chapters most of the were really rushed so I'm going to take my time on this one I'm going to spend at least 18 hours on it, anyway here it is.
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Murtagh
Murtagh woke from his unconscious sleep to a tremendous groan from thorn who had received several broken bones from Eragons spell, the once majestic ruby red dragon, was now lying on the cold ground groaning in pain. "Where are we" Murtagh asked "the spine" Thorn replied, Murtagh groaned, of all the places he could have ended up it just had to be the spine. "We need to find somewhere to shelter" Thorn said "how about that cave over there, that looks ok" "but your injured" Murtagh said Thorn snarled "well, I can still walk can't I". Thorn and Murtagh groggily lumbered towards the cave entrance, it wasn't exactly a marathon but they were still injured from that damned spell. As they reached the caves mouth they heard a strange noise from inside followed by a brilliant white jet of flame, hot enough to melt mountains, "dragons" thorn and Murtagh simultaneously yelled and stumbled inside as fast as their beaten bodies would carry them. What they saw when they stumbled inside was magnificent a great white dragon easily four times the size of shurikan was fighting with a smaller green dragoness , they noticed the intrusion and stopped fighting, turning their heads. "Who are you" the white dragon said coldly "Murtagh, and this is my dragon, Thorn" just as he said that, Thorn collapsed on the floor and groaned in pain "Thorn" Murtagh cried "help, please". A handsome man appeared from behind the white dragon, he had icy cerulean eyes and short brown hair, "heil" he said and Thorn stopped writhing in pain and got back up again. "Now that you know who we are perhaps you could tell us who on earth you are" "yes I could, I am Draumr and this is my dragon, Sachran, this is Ophelia and that golden dragon over there is Deloi and his rider, Kralin."
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Eragon was devastated, he and Ayra had only been together three days and already she had been ripped away from him by that cursed shade Mortai, he was going after her he would not let her be tortured in the dungeons while he was sitting pretty in the Vardens camp, "saphira where are you, we are going to rescue Ayra" 2i am in the dragons keep little one, I shall come to get you. Eragon had flew all the way to Ur'baen without even telling Nasuada, but when they were only a few miles from the city walls there was a loud crash, and everything went black…
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Ok this may seem kind of rushed but I've actually spent three days on it trying to make it as unrushed as possible its just I really needed to use this chapter to get everything where I wanted it otherwise I would have had to make the next four chapters boring filler, BOO anyway PLEASE REVIEW!