Sorry! Important Author's Note:
Just to let everyone know in case you haven't already read, I'm taking this story in a different direction. It's easier to list it. I want everyone to know what they're getting.
1.) If anyone has read 'Buried Amongst The Begonias' by Durty Nelly (an AMAZING fanfic pulled from the site in the Great FF Story Migration of 2010- those bastards at the Literate Union will pay...-) then the rest of the story should be kind of familiar. The story is actually an EdwardXBella fic with the pack as the bad guys. For some reason, I couldn't stop reading it, even though the pack was dogged out so badly. Then I realized that it was just plain good writing. (And what Jacob and c/o did was pretty damn evil, even I have to admit that...) DurtyNelly is now doing some recon on the story, but it's still posted other places if you want to take a look. So this is one of the few EdwardXBella recommendations I will whole-heartedly endorse.
1.5.) Seriously, try it. Its one of the few Bella fics that doesn't make me dry heave at her corniness. She actually has a reason for being the way she is in the fic. And the story made me embrace my kinky, dark, BDSM-y side, so kudos to Durty Nelly.
2.) If you have read the story, you know that Jacob and the pack are the villains and are taken down. THIS WILL NOT HAPPEN! But I will include some elements of this idea. The Cullens will be in this too, just not as villains. I've decided that the Cullens (even Bella... every now and then) are pretty cool (thanks to my cousin) but of course, I will always be Team Jacob, cause no one can compare to my pack.
3.) The antagonists in this story will probably be the Volturi, or the Denali coven. I haven't decided yet. I do know that the pack and the vamps will join sides and relations will not be as animalistic between them as in many stories I read. In fact, it might be friendly, or even -GASP- family-like! OH THE HORRORS!
4.) Jacob will not be as Sadistic as Masen Cullen. To be honest with myself, even I can't achieve that. He will be sort of villainous, (Jacob in a leather jacket, protecting the girl he loves... SQUEALS UNLEASHED!) but with a playful and humorous flavor.
5.) Leah and Jacob and the rest of the crew (Cullens included) will have different personalities and pasts that will be explained at the appropriate times. There may be a few hints, so if you get them Kudos to you!
6.) Since I am doing something like this, it might take a bit longer to update, but since I am so excited about this, I may be diligent in giving everyone what they want.
This is my first time doing something like this, but my motto is 'Practice Makes Perfect!' Because I've never dealt with this subject matter before, some facts may be wrong, but I'll try to make it as accurate as I can. If you see anything weird, just PM me or review, and I'll do my best to fix it.
DISCLAIMER: I am in NO way trying to copy the brilliant work of Durty Nelly, or other awesome DarkFic writers in the FF universe. But I can try my hand at becoming the best Dark Jacob writer can't I?
And since y'all have been reading this so diligently, I'll give you a little of what I'm working on for the next chapter.
I started to look down at the petite figure, annoyed at the interruption. Ready to tell her to fuck off and leave me to my own damn business. I was torn between charming her, or plunging my Swiss Army knife deep into her chest so quickly, she wouldn't even have time to scream. Maybe doing a combo of both...
That was when I saw her face and my world tilted on its axis.
She had a cute little button nose, smiling pink lips, and gorgeous, hazel-brown eyes. I wondered how what expression she have when she was on her knees in front of me. How her lips would look wrapped around my cock.
Her hair was in a loose bun with tendrils covering her face, but I could tell it was long and silky. I wondered what sounds she would make if I tugged on it hard enough. How hard I could kiss her until I bruised those gorgeous lips.
She had small, delicate looking hands and wrists, the nails painted a demure, innocent light pink. I wondered how it would feel to have those hands running through my hair. How she would react if I squeezed her wrists hard enough.
A knee-length floral print skirt covered her legs, and she had on a flattering purple tank top.I wondered what she would look like naked and the sounds she would make as I drove into her. How she would yell for me to move faster, plead for me to push harder...
I realized that she was still waiting for my answer. And I didn't even know her name yet...
SOOOOOO? Whaddya think? Not Durty Nelly material, but not too shabby, eh-eh?
