And here's the next chapter!
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This chapter is re-rewritten. XD
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We saw the Halberd in Halberd's hangar.
There is 1 person there. He has a grey mask, not showing his real face. He has yellow eyes and it can change by his mood. He has a purple cape and has a sword named Galaxia. Everything except those things are armor. He's also the owner of the Halberd.
Meta Knight
When the Halberd was destroyed by the big fight against Ganondorf and Bowser, Meta Knight started making a new Halberd immediately. It's a lot of work, so Meta Knight is still busy making a new Halberd. Kirby asked if he could help, but Meta Knight wanted to do it alone, because it's his ship. Now he was taking a break, outside, but he didn't know that the Ancient Commander was inside.
"This will be too easy!" thought The Ancient Commander.
When Meta Knight came back, the Halberd was still there, because The Ancient Commander was searching for the key to start the Halberd, but Meta Knight had it. Meta Knight was now making the control room, where The Ancient Commander was at that moment. When Meta Knight came in and saw The Ancient Commander, he said extremely calm: "Hmph, what are you doing in my ship?"
"I'm just following my-" The Ancient Commander was interrupted by Meta Knight slicing him with his sword.
"Grrr, minions!" shouted The Ancient Commander.
A Dark Fox and a Dark Falco appeared.
"Fox, Falco! What are you doing there together with that guy!" shouted Meta Knight surprised.
"Who's Fox? I'm Dark Fox." said Dark Fox.
"Who's Falco? I'm Dark Falco." said Dark Falco.
Meta Knight sweatdropped at this and he realised these were not the real Fox and Falco, because just then the dark aura came around them.
"Where are the real Fox and Falco?" asked Meta Knight.
"I will not tell you!" responded The Ancient Commander, "Attack minions!"
Dark Fox and Dark Falco listened to his orders and attacked. Both of them used their blasters, but Meta Knight dodged it with his Dimensional Cape. He used Shuttle Loop to get close to them and gave several hits with his sword.
"Hmph, you're weak." said Meta Knight.
"That's what you think!" shouted Dark Fox using Dark Fox Illusion on Meta Knight causing him to stagger.
"Dark Fox's right." told Dark Falco using Dark Falco Phantasm on Meta Knight causing him to fall on the ground, but Meta Knight didn't gave up and used his Drill Rush as it got both Dark Fox and Dark Falco, it caused them to stagger for a moment, but only for a few seconds.
"You'll pay for that!" shouted Dark Fox using Fire Dark Fox on Meta Knight, but he missed.
"Yeah! You'll pay for that!" shouted Dark Falco using Fire Dark Bird on Meta Knight and he didn't miss.
"Say, why are you imitating me?" asked Dark Fox annoyed to Dark Falco.
"What do you mean, imitating you?" asked Dark Falco having no clue what Dark Fox was talking about.
"Yes, you were imitating me! When I used my Blaster, you used your Blaster. When I used my Dark Fox Illusion, you used your Dark Falco Phantasm. When I used my Fire Dark Fox, you used your Fire Dark Bird. And you also said the same sentence, but just with a 'yeah' before it when I said 'You'll pay for that."" explained Dark Fox shouting.
"No, you were imitating me!" shouted Dark Falco back.
"You imitated me!" shouted Dark Fox.
"No, you imitated me!" shouted Dark Falco.
Then we see a cloud of dust, because they begun fighting with each other and Meta Knight (who was out of the cloud of dust) sweatdropped again.
"Fools! You have to fight Meta Knight, not each other!" shouted The Ancient Commander.
"Well, it's already too late!" said Meta Knight using Galaxia to finish Dark Fox and Dark Falco as they changed back into Shadow Bugs.
"Where are the original Fox and Falco!" shouted Meta Knight.
"I won't tell you!" repeated the Ancient Commander.
"Then, I'll have to kill you!" told Meta Knight putting his sword to The Ancient Commander's neck.
"If I tell you, my lord will kill me. If I don't tell you you're going to kill me. I don't know what to do!" shouted The Ancient Commander almost going crazy.
"Well, I think your lord would finish you in one short hit. I would finish you by hitting you a lot of times, giving you a painful death, so tell me!" shouted Meta Knight.
"Well, ok, I will. They're in subspace together with all the other kidnapped smashers so far." explained The Ancient Commander.
"Other smashers?" asked Meta Knight losing his grip on Galaxia, "Do you mean you're kidnapping all the smashers?"
"Yes." said The Ancient Commander.
"And the kidnapped smashers so far are, who?" asked Meta Knight putting his sword away.
"I said enough already." told The Ancient Commander trying to get away.
"No, you're not going away, till you told me everything!" shouted Meta Knight grabbing The Ancient Commander taking his sword again.
"And why would I do that?" asked the Ancient Commander.
Meta Knight pointed to his sword Galaxia.
"Ok, fine." said the Ancient Commander before taking a long breath about to reveal everything we have to know: "The smashers we captured so far are Fox, Falco, Bowser, DK, the Pokémon Trainer but not his Charizard, Pikachu and Jigglypuff. We tried to kidnap Lucario, Lucas, the Pokémon trainer's Charizard, Diddy Kong, Peach, Mario and Luigi, but failed. My name is The Ancient Commander and my lord his name is-" The Ancient Commander was interrupted just when he was about to reveal the name of the leader by a very loud and deep voice: "EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEENNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!"
A portal appeared right next to The Ancient Commander and 2 white arms with each only 3 "fingers" came out, those arms grabbed The Ancient Commander.
"YOU ARE COMING WITH ME!" shouted the voice from before revealing to be the owner of the arms.
"No, my lord!" begged The Ancient Commander before he turned to Meta Knight, "If I can't be rescued you have to know what my lord his name is, he is also the one grabbing me now, his name is-" the Ancient Commander disappeared into the portal.
Meta Knight tried to grab the Ancient Commander before he disappeared, but he failed.
"No!!" yelled Meta Knight falling on the ground.
Not much later in subspace.
"WHAT DID YOU THINK YOU WAS DOING?!" shouted the lord.
"I'm sorry, my lord!" said The Ancient Commander, "He said he was going to kill me if I didn't!"
"THAT IS NO EXCUSE! YOU WILL HAVE TO STAY IN JAIL FOREVER! THIS WAS YOUR LAST CHANCE!" shouted the lord.
"Please no!" begged the Ancient Commander before he was taken away by a few primids.
"Hmph, I'll have to search for someone new. And I think I know the right person." thought the lord looking at his collection trophy's so far in his globe.
Hope you liked it!
Will we ever see the Ancient Commander back? If so, will it take long before we see him back? Is he turning good? Will our heroes be able to help him escape from the jail? When will we get more tips about the leader? Who is it?! You'll see next time!
Preview of the next chapter:
"I can't let you do that!" said a voice. "Who's there?" asked Ness. "Me." said the voice.
Kidnapped smashers:
Fox, Falco, Bowser, DK, Pokémon Trainer (with Squirtle and Ivysaur), Jigglypuff, Pikachu.
Smashers:
Mario, Peach/ Luigi, Diddy/ Lucas, Lucario, Charizard/ Meta Knight
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