Fixed. That is much better now as usual R&R I like to fix wat im doing wrong

September 5 2027 2:34AM

UNSS Vimy

Docking bay

Erik was the first one off the transport and he ran for the washroom, where he emptied the contents of his stomach. He had never seen anything like that, and he had seen a lot of shit. He walked out of the bathroom. He saw his diminished squad, out of 12 members, 3 were dead and 5 were wounded. Hudson and Salinki were alive, and so was he. He walked up to the private he had pulled into the transport. "How in the hell did you punch through the hide of that thing?" he asked, the private took off his glove revealing a robotic hand. "That makes sense" Erik said

September 5, 2027 3:23 AM

UNSS Vimy

Science lab

Dr. Elizabeth Draton hooked up her portable hard drive to the ship computer, as she sighed and sat back in her chair. she looked at the data files on the computer, and to her surprise they started downloading by themselves. She tried to pause the download but the controls were locked. She sat back and realizing she couldn't do at thing started thinking about what just happened. Her entire science team, dead she forced back a sob. She regained her composer and was about to start up the translation software when one of the drop troopers walked in. "oh, I'm sorry I'll come back later." he said in a deep English accent. "No it's ok" she replied "I could use the company.". He grabbed a chair and sat down beside her, and then he noticed her tears. "remembering what happened?" he said. "yes, I still can't believe it". " I can't either" he replied. An electronic chirp signaled the end of the download. She began searching through files. "So why are you here..." she said, searching for a name. Erik, sergeant Erik Black, he said" and "I come here to think, it's quiet here" there was another beep. "Talking to someone?" she looked at the screen. On the screen in large letters "hello" was displayed. She looked at the screen speechless she typed "hello?". "Ah finally could you be so kind as to plug in that holoprojector." she looked behind her and found the bulky machine. She tried to move it but it wasn't going anywhere. "May I" Erik said "sure" she replied. He moved, with some effort, the device into place. She plugged it in and instantly a hologram of a slim attractive woman with long brown hair appeared "whew now we can talk like civilized people now" the hologram said. "Wait... You... Your reclaimers, are you not?" Erik moved to a comm system. "Bridge, this is sergeant black we need the Capitan down here ASAP. "reclaimers?" Elizabeth said. "ah I see" then captain Bauer walked in " this better be important I'm trying to run a working defense here" perhaps I can explain Capitan." the AI said. What the hell? The captain said "I am 084 Tangent Course the AI of keyship 0893." "AI? As in artificial intelligence?" the captain said "yes" was the reply.

September 5 2010 6:00AM local

New York USA

Emergency meeting of the general assembly of the UN

Jean Maurece steeled himself for what was to be his most important speech of his diplomatic Career. He entered the assembly, and noticed the tired faces, he then knew that they had no clue about the crises. He took his seat at the table marked Canada and sorted through his notes. The session started. The secretary general walked up to the podium "ladies and gentlemen, sorry for waking you, but there has been an incident in Canada, from that I will take it to the Canadian ambassador to the UN, jean Maurece. Jean stood up and said "good morning, yesterday at 4:00pm local time we sent a small group into the artifact, which as you remember was found two weeks ago. There we lost contact for eight hours, after which we got this message." a recorder turned on and gunfire was heard with screaming and confused yelling. Then a coherent voice said this is bravo two Charlie...

September 5, 2027 3:36AM

UNSS Vimy

Science lab

Capitan Bauer looked at the AI " So you said you were an AI of a keyship, what is a keyship?" the AI answered " a keyship is a ship with access to installation 00 outside the galaxy." "Do you know anything about the parasite that has killed 3 of my men and hundreds of Canadian soldiers" her answer was... Chilling "The flood? On earth? By the mantle!" "get to the point" Captain Bauer said the AI regained her composer and said " the flood are a race of parasites that, at the time this construct received it's last transmission...

- Yes I'm already hard at work on the next chapter R&R Until then good day