Where have all my reviewers gone:(

Hopefully this longer chapter will win you back ;)


"Ok so who wants to hear a story?" Rose asked kindly.

"Us!" The class squealed excitedly.

"Ok" She smiled "Well today were going to read 'Little Red Riding Hood'"

"That sucks" Sawyer complained loudly.

"Does not!" Charlie shouted "Its gotta big bad wolf!"

"Does he eat stuffs?" Sawyer asked.

"Yeah" Charlie exclaimed.

"Cool" Sawyer said sitting down excitedly, he liked the sound of this story already.

"Ok settle down everyone" Rose said taking the book from the shelf behind her.

When the class had sat in front of her, all eager to hear the story, she began.

"Once upon a time, there was a little girl called Little Red Riding Hood who lived in a big house by the forest. One morning Little Red Riding Hood asked her mother if she could go to visit her grandmother. Her mother said yes and they packed a nice basket for Little Red Riding Hood to take with her" Rose read clearly.

""Remember, go straight to Grandma's house," her mother cautioned. "Don't dawdle along the way and please don't talk to strangers! The woods are dangerous."

"Don't worry, mommy," said Little Red Riding Hood, "I'll be careful.""

"Yeah but she wasn't careful cause the wolf gotted her!" Charlie shouted.

"Aw Charlie!" Jack shouted "You ruined it for us now!"

"Charlie" Rose said breaking up the argument "You might have read the story before but other people haven't, so lets be quiet and not spoil the ending for them ok?"

"Ok" Charlie nodded.

"Good" Rose said before continuing "Little Red Riding Hood saw some pretty flowers on her way and forgot her promise, she stopped to pick some to add to the basket. Suddenly, a wolf appeared beside her. "What are you doing out here, little girl?" the wolf asked in a friendly voice.

"I'm on my way to see my Grandma who lives through the forest, near the brook," said Little Red Riding Hood. Little Red Riding hood then carried on the way to her Grandmothers, but so did the wolf"

"The wolf ran all the way to the Grandmothers house."Oh thank goodness dear! Come in, come in! I was worried sick that something had happened to you in the forest," said Grandma thinking that the knock was her Little Red Riding Hood.

The wolf let himself in. Poor Granny did not have time to say another word, before the wolf gobbled her up!"

"Oh no!" Claire squealed looking very scared.

"Its ok Claire its just a story" Charlie smiled friendlily.

"The wolf quickly put on the Grandmothers clothes. A few minutes later, Red Riding Hood knocked on the door. The wolf jumped into bed and pulled the covers over his nose. "Who is it?" he called in a crackly voice. "It's me, Little Red Riding Hood."

"Oh how lovely! Do come in, my dear," said the wolf.""

"Little Red Riding Hood came into the house, but what she saw didn't look like her Grandmother at all!"But Grandmother! What big ears you have," said Little Red Riding Hood as she edged closer to the bed. "The better to hear you with, my dear," replied the wolf. "But Grandmother! What big eyes you have," said Little Red Riding Hood. "The better to see you with, my dear," replied the wolf. "But Grandmother! What big teeth you have," said Little Red Riding Hood her voice quivering slightly. "The better to eat you with, my dear," roared the wolf and he leapt out of the bed and began to chase the little girl."

"No!" Claire squealed again hiding behind her doll.

"She ran across the room and through the door, shouting, "Help! Wolf!" as loudly as she could.

A woodsman who was chopping logs nearby heard her shout and ran towards the cottage as fast as he could.

He grabbed the wolf and chopped him in half and her Grandma jumped out"

"Yay" Claire giggled happily.

""Oh Grandma, I was so scared!" said Little Red Riding Hood, "I'll never speak to strangers or walk in the forest again."

"Its ok. You've learned an important lesson. Thank goodness you shouted loud enough for this kind woodsman to hear you!" Little Red Riding Hood and her Grandmother had a nice lunch and a long chat."

"Happily ever after?" Claire asked cautiously.

"Yes dear, happily ever after" Rose smiled.

"I liked that story but I didn't like the wolf" Claire said.

"I liked her big read coat and when I get home I'm gonna ask my daddy to buy me one" Shannon announced.

"I felt the story taught everyone an important lesson" John said.

The other children stared at him, rather freaked out.

"Its just a story Baldie" Sawyer said, backing away slightly.

"I liked it cause the baddy got killed at the end" Kate said "But I didn't like it when he eated the grandma" She added wrinkling her nose.

"Well she got saved in the end too" Jack smiled "So it was all happy-"

"ROAR!" Sawyer screamed cutting Jack off.

"Ahh!" Kate squealed hiding behind Jack.

"I'm a big bad wolf" Sawyer announced happily smirking "You can be Little Red Riding Hood if you want Freckles" He said to Kate kindly "And you can be the Grandma Jacko" He added smirking.

"I want to be the Woodcutter!" Jack complained "Cause he's the hero"

"Ok, ok" Sawyer said.

"Ill be the Grandma" Claire offered "Look after Aaron Charlie" She said putting the doll in Charlie's arms "Keep him safe!"

"I will" He said sitting down as carefully as he could with the doll in his arms.

"Ok" Jack said, clearly organising everyone "Kate you gotta walk down here" He said pointing to an imaginary path on the floor "And then Sawyer will see you and then he will eat Claire-"

"I don't want to get eated!" Claire said nervously, she didn't want to be the grandmother anymore.

"Don't worry Claire you wont really get eated" Jack said kindly.

"Oh ok" She replied smiling again.

"Good lets start" Jack said.

Kate walked across the floor and Sawyer jumped out behind her.

"Hey Freckles" He grinned.

"Its Little Red Riding Hood not Freckles!" She whispered.

"Oh yeah, hey Little Red Riding Hood, what are you doing out here?" He said.

"Going to my Grandmas" She said.

"Can I come?" Sawyer asked.

"No that's not it! Your meant to run there yourself!" Kate said rolling her eyes.

"Oh ok" Sawyer said and raced across to where Claire had sat down.

"ROAR! I'm going to eat you!" He shouted in her face.

Claire was definitely sure she didn't like this game anymore and ran back to Charlie and Aaron.

Sawyer grinned happily and sat himself in Claire's chair.

Kate then came and knocked on the 'door'.

"Hello Grandma" She said.

"Hello Little Red Riding Hood" Sawyer said in a squeaky voice that made Kate giggle.

"What?" He growled defensively.

"You sound funny" She giggled.

"I was tryin ta be the grandma" He mumbled.

"Well your not very good at it" She smirked.

"Yeah I'm better at being… the big bad wolf" He grinned evilly and started to chase her.

Kate screamed and ran around in circles with Sawyer chasing her.

"Ill save you!" Jack shouted and joined in the chase.

Suddenly Sawyer turned round.

"ROAR!" He shouted at Jack and began to 'eat' him.

"What are you doing?" Jack shouted.

"Eating you" Sawyer said simply.

"Your not meant to eat me!" Jack complained "I'm the woodcutter, that's not how the story goes!"

"But its how my story goes" Sawyer said before turning to Kate and grinning "Guess this means I can eat you now Freckles"

"No!" She shouted "You gotta catch me first!" She teased.

Sawyer chased her around the room and finally caught her, he tickled her until she was shrieking and then pretended to bite her.

"Hey Freckles" Sawyer said after he had let her go and she was walking back to the other children.

"Yeah?" She said.

"You taste like strawberries" He smirked.


I really love writing this fic I love writing the little cutie losties and I hope you like reading about them too :)

Any ideas for things our little losties could do? Just let me know:)