Hello everyone!

Sooo. This is kinda of an update/chapter I suppose

I wanted to say that I took a little break from editing and so so.

Now i'm back and hoping to post more chapters.

I read the reviews and I very much appreciate the support and tips, tho one review kinda perplexed me

. "Yust a little correction . If naruto atteined a magekyou sharingan then his left eye is eternal mangekyou not normal since shisui also had the magekyou."

Now I don't want to sound like a jerk but...what? I don't know what you mean man.

Well I can begin on his left eye, how would he have the eternal mangekyou? How does that make any sense? Look man, it's my story so let me write it ok? Lol

Anyway I will attempt to explain why his eyes are just the normal stage of the mangekyou and not the eternal version. And don't get me started on your grammar, I don't have the best of course, but did you write that on your phone or? For the record Shisui is not Naruto's blood brother, I mentioned that as a hint* meaning that even tho he gave Naruto his eye, doesn't make it eternal. Did you also notice that I said "Madara's mangekyou sharingan" not eternal. Ok?

Now onto the story, if you have any tips for me. Please pm/review and I will look over them for sure!

Naruto stood in the Uchiha library, pondering on what he next action should be. As he thought about it he decided he needed to get stronger, stronger to find Madara. Naruto looked around and noticed he left clutter of scrolls and books. He started to put them back and once he finished he walked to the doors leading outside of the dreary building. Naruto leaned against the wall of the library and started to think what made people strong, Kage strong. Naruto thought about his 'father' and what made him strong, the flying thunder god technique. Naruto thought about trying to learn it but then remembered his 'father' didn't even let Kushina near the family library. Naruto cursed his 'father' once again. Naruto decided it was time to head home when he noticed it was dark and the sun had gone down. Naruto hopped from roof to roof, making no sound as he did. Then it hit Naruto, his 'father's' teammates knew the flying thunder god! He would just have to find them and who they were, he knew his 'father' kept a picture of them on his desk in his office within the estate they lived in. as he approached the estate, he could see people everywhere around the estate. Thats right… his parents were having a party for Naruko, since it was her birthday. It was his birthday too but they had never celebrated it, much less acknowledged it. Naruto walked past the gates and made his way through the crowd. He could see the ninja and civilian council sitting and talking amongst themselves. Naruto kept his head down as he passed them to get to his 'father's' office. He was still covered in semi fresh blood from when he fought Danzo's men, and was still in his gear. Naruto was passing Naruko's room in the hallway when he bumped into THE last person he would ever want to meet right now. Naruto looked up, his eyes locked with Danzo's and they stared at one another. This was the man who killed his brother and he couldn't even kill him right now because of the party, he would be seen as guilty since he knew Danzo had a high position and Danz knew that. At this moment Naruko and her friends who were talking in her room walked out when her brother was glaring at this old man. Her friend's present were, Sasuke Uchiha, Hinata Hyuga, Sakura Haruno, Ino Yamanaka, Shikamaru, Choji, and Kiba. They all stood in the hallway not being noticed by the two ninja. "I should kill you right now dammit!' spoke Naruto in an enraged whisper. " Now, now Naruto-kun, don't be hasty" said Danzo "Get ot of my way before I do something I regret!" whispered Naruto Danzo glared at the ki- no not kid, man, Naruto proved to him that he was not to be taken lightly. "Naruto-san do not threaten me, I have resources" said a smirking Danzo "Well then, it won't have to come to that if you stay away from me, and the Uchiha!" said Naruto still in his enraged whisper "Now out of my way" grumbled Naruto as he pushed past the old fart. Naruto didn't acknowledge his younger sister or her friends as he also pushed past them, he headed for his father's office...nothing would stop him now.

Naruto entered the cluttered office and closed the sliding door behind him. Naruto approached the desk and scanned for any picture frames, he noticed one at the edge of the desk, next to a picture of his 'family' only problem with that was the fact it didn't have him in it, just his mother father and sister. Naruto grunted and tried to put it past him. He grabbed the photo and saw three people in it. Their names etched at the bottom, bingo. Naruto had the names of the shinobi and all that was left was to find them. Before he left he noticed a scroll that was left unrolled, Naruto peeked at it and saw that it was a patrol schedule for the west gate, it was his luck that he read the names of the ninja he was hunting on the partoll list, set to pass by soon. Back at the party, Naruko and her friends didn't understand what just took place, so they just decided to worry about it later, since this wasn't the exactly best place to have a discussion. Naruto sneaked out of the party, carefull not to seen suspicious. Once far enough from everybody, he leaped to a nearby building and continued till he came across a store that sold anbu style mask, Naruto decided to pick one up, the owner was not present so he just snatched a plain white one and took off to where the patrol would pass. He would have to hit them fast and hard, he knew another patrol will pass them soon. Naruto Jumped from rooftop to rooftop, not making a sound. Naruto avoided Anbu patrols that were unlucky and stationed at the gates rather the estate where his family was having the party. He crept in the trees by the gate, masking his chakra. He heard sounds of low chatter, and the swoosh of the patrol. Naruto readied himself and slowly climbed down the tree he was on, he wanted to do this quick with no problems at all. Naruto created two shadow clones, he intended to take advantage of their knowledge transfer and the fact they could use the power of the sharingan and invade the minds of the ninja made the jutsu perfect for this situation. Him and the two clones dropped out of the cover of the trees and stood in the path of the patrol. "Stop! What are you doing here, and state your name!" said one of the ninja who pulled out his sword. Naruto didn't respond, he just kept his eyes closed and prepared to enter their minds to forcefully extract the information he wanted. The patrol started to move forward with the intent to knock him out so they could interrogate him. Naruto and his clones could sense their chakra coming close, this was it. All three Naruto's flashed their eyes open and peered into the ninja's eyes, they got caught in his visual prowess. "Damn it!" yelled one of the ninja who was the first to fall to the ground from the trees. The others soon followed as they were harder to force the information out of their minds. He knew the Uchiha's would be blamed for this… but it was necessary. Naruto let his two clones dispel, he quickly stumbled to his knee as the information was a great deal. After he recovered he stood up and was about to take off when he heard something wizing towards him, he dodged to the right as a flurry of kunai landed where he previously was standing. Naruto's pair of sharingan met, surprisingly met another pair of sharingan. Naruto bolted to the estate, hoping to lose the Anbu team in the had put some distance between the Anbu team, distracting them with clones. He tossed his mask off and his chuunin vest in a nearby bush, he would destroy them later. He entered the house and froze when he saw the Anbu team that was chasing him talking to his 'father'. Naruto walked fast to the stairs hoping to evade them again when, he bumped into the Anbu who had the pair of sharingan. The two stared at one another for a second and they moved past each other. Naruto walked up the stairs slowly, his wounds still sore. He opened his bedroom door and tossed himself on his bed, processing the information on his father's jutsu. In the mourning he walked down stairs and could see, once again his 'family' eating without him, he couldn't care right now, he had more important things to do, like the next part of his plan. Naruto decided he would set off to find Madara Uchiha, but he didn't want the village hunting him down so he came up with a idea to make a division like the hunter nins but not really, the division would be a elite force that was on call when they were in and out of the village, he would use Shisui's kotoamatsukami to make his dad sign the papers that were needed. Naruto left the house and went to a BBQ restaurant and ate a heavy meal of pork. Naruto wasted time around the village so his 'father' could arrive at his office. Naruto walked past the secretary and opened the door to the Hokage's office and could see his father sitting there doing paper work. Minato looked at his son with curiosity, "shouldn't you be at the academy?" spoke Minato "I'm a Chuunin" said Naruto with a monotone voice. Minato looked shocked. "Here sign this" said Naruto as he handed Minato a piece of paper with the details of the division he wanted to create. Before Minato could reject the outrageous idea he looked at Naruto and could see that one eye was closed and the other... Minato signed the papers and put them to the side so he could address it with the council later. Naruto had just used kotoamatsukami and it drained him fast, he would have to work with it some more. He had made Minato think he signed the paper of his own free will, he also made him forget that he saw Naruto there, and made him think the division was his idea, not Naruto's. Naruto was ordered back to the Hokage's office later to go out and do his job, now that he managed to make it clear to the council that this was happening. Naruto went home to pack some stuff, he didn't notice Naruko see him. As Naruto passed the northern gate guards, he started to dash his way through the forest, now faced with his true goal and leader of the new division, the manhunters, he set out to find Madara Uchiha.

Phew! lol sorry that took me a little to long, wanted to make a longer chapter with more details.

hope you enjoyed reading, catch you next chapter where lots cool stuff is waiting for your brain!

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