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Chapter 4 Capture the flag
2 days later

It all was some kind of routine now. I was trying not to be good in anything except sword fighting. Jake had made my sword and it was a lot better than other swords but it still wasn't not perfectlybalanced. I guess that's because he didn't know it was for a goddess, they probably need something different. I didn't really know. I didn't make any more stuff appear out of nowhere. People here where already watching me and figuring some things out. I was still beating Luke with sword fighting, which was a lot of fun. I became good friends with Annabeth and friends with kind of everyone.

It is today the day of the summer solstice. Mr. D had left for an important meeting.

It is finally time for capture the flag. I heard so much about it. It's the Athena cabin vs. the Ares cabin.

Annabeth says "We have four teams, team one is on defense. Team two and three will be decoys. Team two takes the takes the right flank and team three the middle. Team four are the fastest runners and will leave 5 minutes after team two and three. They will take the left flank."

I am at team 4 because I am good at sword fighting and I could run pretty fast.

We wait five minutes and run over the left flank towards the flag. I'm a bit too motivated and run a little faster then I'm supposed to, not inhumanly fast. I run around the flag with a large circle and just take it. 'well that was easy'. Now I only had to take the flag over the boundary line. Some people who weren't distracted with fighting of the decoys came to fight me. But I'm going a little too fast for them to keep up.

I see a spear coming at me. 'SHIT'. I couldn't stop it because it would be impossible for a demi-god and if I didn't there was a chance I would bleed. I choose to get hit and just hope I won't bleed. The spear sticks straight through my arm. 'SHIT'. 'Well, camp half-blood was fun'. I take the flag to the other side. I pull the spear out of my arm and start bleeding Ichor, the golden blood of the gods.

I pray: 'hi mom, dad, you guys can claim me now'.

Everybody is looking at the Ichor that's flowing out of my arm when suddenly pointed to something above my head. I looked up and see a caduceus, a second later I see a dove flying around the caduceus. I look down and see that I'm wearing some beautiful dress. I rub my eyelid and to my horror I see that my fingers are pink. I never wore make-up. 'MOM!'.

Chiron comes forward and everybody bows down "All hail, Vanessa, daughter of Hermes god of travelers and thieves and Aphrodite goddess of love, the goddess of … uhm?". While everybody is looking to the sky I think: 'Wait, it's raining? … It was raining inside the magical boundaries. That's impossible unless there was something mature going on between Zeus and Poseidon. I knew they were angry but that wouldn't be the first time. This is so wrong.'I say "Not important right now, Chiron and all of you can stand up now."

I walk to Chiron and say "I need a quest."

He says "Of course lady Vanessa, you can visit the Oracle first and you may take two campers with you, if you wish to".

I say "I don't need the Oracle, I know where to go and who to take".

"But the Oracle…"

"No need. Believe me, we're in a hurry. I take Annabeth and Luke and we need to go now."

"If that is what you wish, lady Vanessa." He isn't too happy about all of this.


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