Question for you guys; do you think my dialogue for Val and Ygritte is right? I haven't got the books with me at University and I can't help thinking it should be more rustic. I've tried to experiment in this chapter. If you spot it, tell me what you think.
Disclaimer = George R. R. Martin owns 'A Song of Ice and Fire', not me.
Chapter Four
"As you command, princess."
Jon's tease earned a smack on his sweaty back from Val, but there was no force or spite in it and all three lovers simply chuckled.
For a few minutes Jon and Ygritte simply lay together, their sweat and the fluids of their lust mingling. Val left them to pant away their exhaustion whilst she lay on her left side, her arm so her hand was holding up her head. Once again she enjoyed the view of the two of them together. She revelled in the glistening wetness of their backs and their limbs. Not only was the sweat and nakedness arousing, but the way that Jon rested his head on the cushion of Ygritte's small breasts and the way Ygritte cradled her lover's head was an immensely endearing sight.
As endearing as it was however, Val tired of waiting. She also worried that Jon and Ygritte were about to fall asleep on. Val had no intention of finishing herself off tonight, especially after the performance she'd been shown. And in Val's experience with Jarl, there was no reason a youth like Jon should be spent after that simple tumble with Ygritte; fucking her like a southern wife was hardly an endurance test to a woman like Val. And she knew from experience that Ygritte had more lust left in her.
"Are yer gonna keep me waiting all night you two? It's my turn for your cock Jon Snow!"
"Alright alright. I'm coming!" Jon moaned tiredly.
Jon pushed himself up with great effort and against Ygritte's wishes. She tried feebly to keep holding him close to her with her grabbing at his lower back and her legs around his hips. But her strength was spent and he was gone. Eventually Jon was kneeling between her legs with his back straight as he admired the view of his handiwork.
Ygritte was as coated in sweat as he was and still panting like a dog. This meant her hair was plastered to her forehead and her shoulders. Her breasts were rising and falling making them appear even smaller but no less enticing. Both her arms and legs were lying at her sides like weights of lead which Jon took to mean he'd fucked her well. The most beautiful sight of all was her freshly used cunt. The outer pink folds, the red curls around the opening and the white thighs either side were all wet with Ygritte's clear cum and Jon's milky white seed. The sight of Ygritte in all her ravished beauty was enough to make Jon eager for more.
"Go and have a seat Jon Snow."
Following Val's request, Jon crawled over to the head of the bed and lay himself back on the pillows like Val had done so earlier. With his back at a low diagonal he had clear view of Val as she kneeled up and faced him in all her glory.
"Open your legs."
Puzzled by her request, Jon opened his legs and placed his feet flat on the mattress so his legs formed two arches. In this position Jon couldn't help feeling vulnerable under Val's gaze. Having grown up in Winterfell with his brothers and Theon Greyjoy, and then lived among only men on the Wall for months Jon had learnt a few simple rules of male etiquette to follow when in the company of other men. One of those rules was; don't sit with your legs spread too far apart in public.
Back in Winterfell he had learned his lesson the hard way. Theon took whatever opportunity he had to get a hit in Jon's groin during a ball game that Jon was innocently watching. Thinking on this made him think briefly of how the ladies in Winterfell would never do the same in public either. Their dignity wouldn't allow it. Then he thought of Val and what he'd done to her earlier when her legs were spread just like his were now. Jon made a note to be even more grateful when women did it for him in the future.
Coming back from his thoughts to reality Jon noticed that so far Val had done nothing but look between his legs. By the appraising look in her eyes Jon judged she was deciding if she liked what she saw. Jon hardly dared to hope that she contemplating sucking his cock again, even with all of Ygritte's cum and his seed all over it. He hoped she made up her mind soon or else the fluids on his manhood would go dry and he didn't want to think about what he'd need to do then. Even as Lord Commander of the Night's Watch, cleaning water was too rare to use for cleaning one's privates.
"What a pretty little sight. You're all a mess Jon Snow. What shall we do to clean you?"
Val's words came out in a voice like a mother talking to her newborn babe. In a bad mummur's farce. For children. Jon wasn't sure whether Val was mocking him or was trying to arouse him by surprising him. He also wasn't sure how to react. Val took the decision out of his hands.
"It looks good. Good enough to eat."
Without further ado, Val lay down on her front, wrapped her hands and wrists around the top of Jon's thighs and engulfed the tip of his cock with her mouth.
All the breath in Jon's lungs came rushing up all at once and was released in the form of the loudest guttural moan. He was powerless to do anything but to watch and feel Val bob her head up and down his already soaked manhood and used her wicked tongue to wipe him clean of woman's cum. Once again Val moaned whilst she did her wicked work, the vibrations on Jon's cock bringing him back to full hardness. For a minute or so Val sucked and licked and practically tried to swallow Jon's entire cock whole, all the while moaning her enjoyment. Her mouth released Jon with a loud pop so she could speak.
"Gods that tastes fucking good. Your cum on a man's cock Ygritte, what could go better together?"
"No idea Val."
Ygritte still sounded tired from her pleasure earlier but she was no longer panting. So engulfed by the pleasure that Val had given him, Jon hadn't noticed that Ygritte had sat up and was now watching Val suck Jon off. She had the same look in her eyes that she had had when Val first took Jon in her hands and mouth; desire, enjoyment and entertainment.
"You want a little taste?" Val asked.
"Fuck yes! Move over!" Ygritte squealed with excitement.
Val shuffled over to her left while Ygritte crawled in front of Jon and kneeled a small distance from him. Rather than lie on her front like Val, she kept her knees still while she lowered her body down so her face was hovering above the wet tip of Jon's manhood. Only pausing to lick her lips Ygritte practically swallowed Jon's throbbing tip and wasted no time in bobbing her head up and down his shaft. She made even louder moans than Val and very loud wet slurps as she spat on Jon's cock on the way down, and suck up her cum on the way up.
Val didn't remain idle through this and neither did Jon. After giving herself a few moments to enjoy the sight and sounds of Ygritte 'Lady's Kiss', Val crawled up her body and kneeled behind her. She was greeted with the sight of Ygritte's pert little arse. A even more endearing sight was the wet slit in the nest of fiery curls between her legs. Many times Val had found herself presented with this sight and each time she knew what to do to make her love scream. Before she could get to work though, Jon had caught the attention of both his women.
While Ygritte had sucked and slurped away, Jon's lust crushed his caution and he pushed his fingers through Ygritte's hair. When she didn't protest this, Jon felt emboldened enough to buck his hips gently upwards into her mouth and push his hands down. Ygritte seemed to gasp, even with her mouth full, and Jon moved his fingers away to allow her to move. But when she took her mouth off of him she looked him the eyes with one of her most feral looks.
"Do that again Jon."
"You mean . . ?"
"You still know nothing?! Do it! Whatever it was . . . do it!"
"Yes Jon, fuck her mouth."
Both Jon and Ygritte looked over to Val in surprise. She looked at the two of them with incredulity in her eyes before giggling lightly.
"You both know nothing! Trust me Ygritte, my dear, fierce, beautiful Ygritte, let our handsome, stupid bear Jon fuck your mouth. Don't tell me you don't mind that."
"Aye, I quite fancy it actually."
Ygritte's voice seemed held back and even a little nervous, like a child being asked to do something their elders did for the first time. It was one of the many things that endeared Val to her, her comparable innocence when it came to bed and bedding them. It made her wonder for a moment whether they should have shared a man between them before tonight so she'd be ready for Jon Snow. But Ygritte had proved a quick learner, and it felt nice for Val to teach her young lover the art of making men helpless in her hands.
"Then let Jon Snow do what he needs doing. I'm sure he knows what it is, don't yer Jon?"
Jon could only nod his head eagerly in response, earning another giggle from Val before she went back to admiring Ygritte's rear. Turning his attention to Ygritte, Jon sought reassurance in her eyes. It was strange, frightening and sweet to see her more vulnerable like this, and it was also increasingly arousing. Ygritte's consent was given by her opening her mouth and allowing the end of her tongue to rest on the cliff of her bottom lip.
Taking his chance Jon guided the tip of his cock past her lips with his right hand whilst he held her head still with his left. With his manhood's tip completely enveloped by Ygritte's mouth, Jon began to slowly buck his hips upwards whilst steadying her head with both hands. At first she only gave her three or four inches, not wanting to chock her. But when Ygritte' closed her eyes and gave one of her loudest moans - a moan like a child savouring the sweetest cake - Jon threw restraint away and began to shove his entire shaft through Ygritte's gaping gob.
Ygritte released her grip on Jon's legs to allow him to do as he pleased. She simply lay on her front, steadying herself with her arms flat on the bed and allowed her love to fuck her mouth. Ygritte had was quickly learning to appreciate the taste of Jon's cock, especially when it held the traces of her own pleasure on it. The feeling of Jon's shaft pumping in and out of her wet gob was more arousing than pleasurable but Ygritte loved it.
She loved the feeling of Jon showing complete dominance over her like any other man of the free folk. Yet when Jon did it, like when he'd fucked her earlier, he'd still managed to make her wet and make her feel like a proper southern lady, rather than just grunting with each forced, clumsy thrust. She goaded Jon on to thrust harder and faster into her mouth with more and more loud, wanton moans. Suddenly Ygritte felt a new intrusion that was even more pleasurable.
Whilst Jon fucked Ygritte's mouth Val enjoyed the view of Ygritte's pert behind and growing wetness . Seeing the force with which Jon's cock was shafting into Ygritte and the noises she was making, Val felt like it was time to hurry up and make her cum so she could have her way with Jon before he finished. Taking each of her fingers in her mouth, one at a time, she sucked and licked them until they were as wet as Jon's cock. Then without warning she thrust her forefinger straight into Ygritte's cunt. After a few thrusts Val added her second, then her third finger to the warm, wet, kissed-by-fire heat between the girl's legs.
Ygritte's reaction to Val's intrusion was instant, as Jon could tell. Her lips and throat loosened around his cock and she release another even louder moan, along with a little whimper. Her eyes also shot open and she looked up at Jon. Her eyes seemed to say one thing; I feel so fucking good! As if to return the favour, she began to massage Jon's cock with her tongue as it stabbed into into her mouth.
So Jon continued to fuck Ygritte's mouth whilst Val fucked her cunt with her fingers. For Ygritte it was almost too much to take but it was some sought of dream come true, to be fucked from two ways at once. As she felt Jon's thick fleshy shaft pump in and out of her mouth, she looked up at the face of her old lover. It was one of the most arousing things she had experienced all night, as the look of lust and virile confidence in Jon's eyes.
As Jon continued to fuck Ygritte he began to fell his balls tighten. Not wanting to finish before he'd had a chance with Val he slowed his thrusts until his hips were still. He then pulled his cock from Ygritte's eager mouth. She seemed eager to complain at the loss of his cock but Val was still busy pumping his fingers in and out of her.
"Enough of that Val. It's time."
Val looked up at Jon with surprise. Her surprise was later replaced with s smirk.
"Time for what, Jon Snow?"
Jon didn't bother answering. He simply scrambled over to her, grabbed her by the shoulders and roughly kissed like he had done when he first entered the room. To his relief Val asked no more questions and neither did Ygritte. As Val removed her fingers from her cunt, she simply collapsed on her front before heaving herself over so she was lying on her back and watching the passionate kiss before her.
Jon pulled away to look at Val who had lost her smirk. Her face now displayed her heightening lust and as if to prove it, she put the fingers wet from fucking Ygritte in her mouth and proceeded to suck and lick the fluids off, all the while moaning and slurping loudly. At one point she offered the fingers to Jon, who gladly cleaned her fingers with his own lips and tongue.
Without a word Val pulled away from Jon's grip on her. She turned around on her knees and lay herself down so she was resting on her hands and knees. From his position Jon could see her then suck two of the fingers on her right hand before reaching down her body and use them to rub her cunt.
"I'm already wet for you Jon. But I need more, I need to be dripping to be ready for a man as good as you. Can you do that for me?"
Ever the obedient lover Jon bent down, bringing his face in line with Val's cunt. The position was constrained his neck but the sight of Val's cunt, just begging to be tasted quickly kept him wanting. Realising his position was impractical he flipped onto his back and shuffled so that his face was directly beneath Val's glistening wet folds.
"Sit on my face." He gruffly demanded.
Val obliged and slowly lowered herself until her womanhood's lips met Jon's. As soon as they met Jon stuck his tongue out and began to greedily lick and suck away at the woman above him. Val's strength seemed to give way under Jon's oral assault as her legs buckled and collapsed so that she was practically laying on Jon's face, with her legs laying flat on the fronts and her forearms were holding up the rest of her body. Jon made sure she stayed that way by grasping both of her arse cheeks and pushing her hips closer to his face as he buried his lips and tongue in her folds.
With her lower body trapped in such a way Val was in bliss. The roughness of Jon's mouth on her cunt paralysed her with pleasure. Her pleasure heightened when Jon kneed her arse cheeks like dough. The sensation of Jon's rough hands fondling the soft flesh of her backside, coupled with the feel of his lips and tongue in her cunt as his hands' actions pushed his mouth deeper into her mouth, meant it wasn't long before she detected her climax approaching.
"Yes . . . yes . . . YES! FUCKING GODS JON, EAT ME! Make me cum!"
In response to her words, Jon shocked and enraged her by leaving her arse alone to push her hips off his face so he could hurriedly shuffle out from under her.
"Where do you think you're fucking going Jon Snow?! You ain't fin . . "
"Shut it Val. The only way you're going to cum this time is on my cock."
Val was now silent. She simply raised her hips off the bed and stabled herself on her knees, waiting for Jon. Jon looked over at Ygritte to see she had pushed herself up the bed so that she now had the same view Val had had when Ygritte had been fucked. Jon smiled at her and it was returned by her own smile which, rather than lustful or humorous, seemed to beam with affection. On Ygritte's part, the sight of watching the two loves of her life preparing to fuck one another was beautiful.
"Don't keep her waiting Jon. Fuck her like a free man fucks his woman."
With those words Jon grinned back and then turned his attention to Val. She had grown impatient already and had reached between her legs to stoke and prod her sopping cunt. Not wanting to be outdone by her hand before his cock could have a chance, Jon crawled over so his cock was inches from her opening. Grasping himself with his right hand and grasping her arse with the other, Jon pushed his hips forward so the tip of his cock poked Val's fingers.
Getting the message Val quickly retracted her hand to hold herself up on both, looking over her shoulder at Jon. He didn't meet her gaze, instead focusing on her cunt as he moved his hips forward. His tip reached her folds and he moved it up and down to feel how ready she was. Jon felt and heard how ready Val was, with her cunt juices dripping onto his tip and Val making a noise like a whimpering dog. Not wasting another second and with his tip securely lodged in her fold, Jon grabbed her other arse and slammed his entire length into her.
He gave Val only a few moments to brace herself and take in the sudden intrusion but she didn't need it.
"Is that all Jon Sow? Have you spent yourself on your darling spearwife? Nothing left for meOH? Ohhhhhhh!"
Jon didn't let her finish as he pulled back and slammed back in. He immediately began to thrust into Val with only a little restraint and short pauses. He wanted to make her scream for him, but first he wanted to savour the feel of a new cunt on his cock. Meanwhile his hands left her arse to get a firmer grip on the bony crook between her thighs and waist. With their new position and grip Jon's hands began to pull Val's body back against his hips with each thrust.
As Jon slowly but firmly thrust himself into her Val allowed herself to submit to the feel of each inch of his cock sliding in and out of her folds. With each rub of his raw flesh against her inner core the delicious friction made Val ache with ecstasy. Her last words had descended into a series of long moans and whimpers, as she savoured the feeling of Jon inside her.
It had been too long since Jarl for her to feel any guilt or sense of betrayal. At her very core Val, like Ygritte, was a woman of the flesh and the earth. For her everything was touch, smell, pressure, and warmth. Before long Jon's slow pace became too little for Val.
"Jon . . uh . . . Joonnn. That's so fucking good but . . please . . . fuck me! . . . . Faster!"
"About time." Jon's husky voice sent another shiver through her.
Pausing in his movements for a moment Jon took deep breaths, bracing himself for the test of his stamina. Although he'd already finished once that night Ygritte was quickly learning how to push him over the edge with her whip-like tongue and her sucking lips. He took in the sight of Val's smooth back slightly arched. Like his body and Ygritte's it was coated with sweat and yet he'd only just started fucking her. And he was about to fuck her like a bull.
This chapter was getting long, I was desperate to publish and I like to give you cliff-hangers. That's why this fuck session ends here.
Revision for university exams is the bane of my life. My first is on Wednesday and my second and last is on Friday 10 May. So now you at least know when I'll be free to devote myself to satisfying you all with my sad little scribbles.
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