Okay,I'm back oh let you kwon my writing this story kinda look bad I really try too so let not be so nasty about and Steelrider your's co is in tell me what you think did I do okay with her?


~ Let meet Goldheart ~

~ Meanwhile ~

Ratchet walked down the halls to the rec. room, in search of his leader. He had already searched the Prime's office, only to find him not there. Due to that the medic decided the rec. room was his next best guess to find the Prime.

Upon reaching the doors, Ratchet heard the normal cheery tone the rec. room had always vibrated in. He then walked through the large doorframe and looked around.

The room was occupied by several of the Autobots on base. In the back corner sat twins on a data-pad, probably planning a prank. The large human like tables were occupied by Brains and Wheelie long with Bee,Sam adding to the rooms busyness.

But the one mech Ratchet was looking for was seated in the the table near the 3 sisters, slowly downing his energon cube.

Maneuvering through the some what chaotic room, Ratchet finally reached his destination," Prime, do you mind if we talk?"

Optimus replied with, "Of course not, old friend."

"I am assuming you know of the human girl the twins came back with?" The medic asked.

"That is correct."

"Well, I have her in the med-bay, and my scans show she had been abused for years. She has a slag load of injuries that were never treated properly. Not only that but she has a lot of restricting medical conditions."

"I was made aware of her beatings from Sideswipe, but I did not know of her other conditions." Optimus spoke.

"How did Sideswipe even know she was abused, his scans shouldn't supply him with that information." Ratchet thought aloud.

"Him and his twin,witnessed a beating first hand. They decided to stop the father, lucky for Margaret. They then contacted me about taking her to base."

"Lucky you have any idea how hard it is going to be for the twins to give her up?"

"Well,about that..."

"Prime... what are you thinking?" Ratchet noticed his strange tone, almost if... "Your not thinking about letting her stay her permanently, are you?"

"I have thought it over, and I have decided that it is ultimately up to Margaret if she wants to stay. We can't just toss her out Ratchet."

Ratchet vented, "I know, it's just I am not sure the twins are going to be the best of 'role models' for Margaret."

"Have you noticed what they are doing right now? Or how they acted around Margaret?" Now it was the Prime who asked the questions.

"I assumed they were planning another one of their stupid pranks. And I have noticed they acted almost protective of her earlier."

"They are looking into, what Margaret will need if she does end up staying here."

"Very well,but if it goes south,know that I told you it might."

"I am glad to have you on my side, old friend." The Prime spoke with honesty.

~Back to little Margaret and the 2 mech ~

Margaret stay quite as she was hugging Jazz's thumb for some reason she like to hug the thumb while they were walking down a vary long hall way,well it was long to Margaret.

Margaret couldn't help to feel the awkwardness taking over and it was bad enough that she was shy,maybe she should speak up and fact she wonder what there leader is like as she open her mouth to talk while her face become red.

"M-Mr. Jazz... Ironhide... I-is your leader sca-scary?" She whispered quietly, her blue turquoise eyes stared at the mech in front of her. She suddenly stopped, her hands balled up into tight fist at her sides. Memories of her father flooded her mind. Her shoulders began to shake and she hugged herself to keep herself from shaking violently. "I-I can't... I can't ha-handle anything s-scary. It was b-bad enough th-that I had to s-sleep in the ba-basement for a-a long time." she turned her head to Jazz, her eyes filled with tears, threatening to leak out.

"Do-Do you know what i-it was li-like to be locked up in a dark basement? With no food or water? Or even a bathroom? I-It's scary!" she covered her face as she began to sob loudly.

Ironhide and Jazz shared a glance. Jazz's optic softened. He set her down as he took a step forward, crouching down to the girl's level. He patted her head carefully, whispering soothing words to calm the girl down.

Jazz grinned as he pulled apart. "There's no need to worry, darlin'! You're safe now." he said, giving a thumbs up.

Ironhide nodded his helm,crossing his arms over his chest.

Margaret look at Jazz and than Ironhide as she felt tears running down her face,Margaret whip the tear with her long sleeve as she ran to Jazz leg and hugging it,but couldn't help to let a sob.

"Y-You guys are the kindest people I've ever met, even though you're not from this planet. Thank you for being nice to me. Nicer than any bully and my dad. said Margaret as let go of Jazz and ran to Ironhide hugging his while sneezing on him.

Ironhide was in tends first,but grunt just as respond and ignoring the snot on him lge while Jazz had that carefree grin.

"Sorry Mr. Ironhide I didn't mean to sneeze on you." As Margaret whip the snot off him with her sleeve and look up at them with a big beautiful blue turquoise eyes

as she touch her lip with one of finger tilting her head,make her really adorable and innocent.

"Os,Does this mean that you are my uncle and can I call you Uncle Hidey and Jazzy?" She ask in much adorable and innocent way.

They both stare at her that wasn't unlit Jazz crack a smile while Ironhide remain quite it.

"Sure gurl I don't care bing call Unlce Jazzy or either does Unlce hidey." Said Jazz as Ironhide grunt as respond clearly did not like the nickname bing call Hidey.

"Daddy,big brother Jazzy?" said the Five year old girl with black hair as Ironhide and Jazz look over to see Goldheart walk up to her dad and hide behind his leg as she peek over to Margaret.

Ironhide and Jazz than look at back at Margaret who clearly having a nerves rack as she was looking down while fidget with her short.

Margaret blush was she ugly did that little girl didn't like her as she felt insecure and did the same thing but instead of run to Ironhide she run to Jazz and hided behind his leg,this cause Jazz crack up laughing while Ironhide just smirk and move his leg from where Goldheart was and getting down and crouching down to the Goldheart's leve.

"Goldheart this is Margaret she going through what you going through why don't say hello?"

Goldheart blink a few time while tilting her head and she smile lightly as she nod her head.

Goldheart ran to where Margaret was as Jazz move his leg,Margaret look at jazz as he just nod his helm while Ironhide smile and getting up off the floor to stand his full high now.

The girls look at each other for a minute until Goldheart said "Me Goldheart. You?" Goldheart hug Margaret as she smile and hug her.

"my name is Margaret,but you can call me Butters,Goldheart could we be friends?"

Goldheart smile big and hug even more as Margaret giggle and hug her tight.

This cause the 2 mech spark to softened, but of course Ironhide won't admit that softened his spark while Jazz recode the precious moments the girl were having.

But,the girls moment were broke by Ironhide clearing his voices as he said " Alright we still need to go to Prime."

The girls nod there head as they ran to 2 mech in front of them as they both getting down and crouching down and putting there hand out,Margaret got on jazz hand while Goldheart did the same with Ironhide.

They both getting up off the floor to stand here full high and walk to where Prime would be they kwon he in the rec. room with the other because they weren't in to long age. The door happen to be the door on the right as they pass the other doors,but before they could interned the rec. room, Ironhide and jazz were were hit on helm by Ratchet famous tool cause the Margaret to cry as she claim down from Jazz hand to his leg and run to the close thing that near her who happen to be Prime.

Prime down to see the youngling clinging on to his leg than look over too see Ratchet yell at Ironhide and Jazz bring his's patient out of his may-bey while Goldheart giggling and before he could rant some more,Jazz interrupt him as he rub his now dent helm.

"Okay,First we didn't take yo patient out of your may-bey and second you scared the poor sparkling out my hand."said Jazz as Ironhide nodded his helm while rubbing it and putting Goldheart on his shoulder.

"Yeah,The sparkling came running to us and in fact she run into me." said Ironhide as he point to Margaret who now in Prime hand.


Did I do okay ? Is my writing bad ? I try this lists part was all me I the one who wort it Anyway I hope you like this ch because I hold it right unlit I think of something I kinda stuck on this part I don't kwon what to do with ratchet on the next line or should it be Prime let me kwon what you think who I should be on the next let MP me or put in your review. I have to go now I'm getting tried,but I do hope you like this I fix what could fix this was my third time delete my story because I wake look good for you guy to read. So what do you think?