k guys, I know this isn't the right away of getting your attention, buttttt this is the only way I can think of to get you guys to my real account.

Hopefully the url works

u/1713183/Storyreader99

This is where I'm going to be reposting up the story. I will also change the story, well the beginning of it, but I am going to stick with what I originally planned.

I will see if i can get the first chapter(with changes) up this week and chap 2 too. Once the first chapter is posted up, i will delete the old one from here. So keep your eyes open :O