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Chapter 4
BPOV
Preface
Love is a very strong thing. It takes over our minds and controls our actions. You have no power. You just do what you have to do. For love.
BPOV
I mentally woke up. My body didn't move, my eyes didn't open. But I was awake.
The pain was still there. It was worse too. If that was even possible!
I wanted to open my month that instant the pain slapped me.
But I didn't.
Well I couldn't
My body wouldn't respond.
Oh my, God! Was this normal? I had no idea!
Then I really looking into it and found out that I was no where. I couldn't hear, see, smell, move, feel (anything but the pain. And I didn't even know where it was coming from!), or anything. I was trapped inside my head with the horrible pain.
If I were able to move I would have been thrashing my body across the bed like I was having a seizure.
Finally I was able to calm myself down and think about what was happening.
Nothing made sense. I mean I knew Edward had changed me, but what was happening to my body?
Of course it was changing. But was it suppose to do this? Was it suppose to hurt this bad?
I must have sat there for hours mentally crying when suddenly I could hear.
It was a huge shock for me. But I was SO happy when it happened.
But that wasn't the only weird part. My hearing was different. I could hear farther than before. It scared me a little, but then I heard breathing. It came slowly in and let slowly out. And it was very close.
I wasn't sure but everything was telling me Edward was next to me.
Farther away, below me I heard Jasper and Emmet.
"There is nothing on!" Emmet complained.
"Well maybe if you didn't flash through the menu so fast and actually read the names of what was on you might find something!" Jasper replied. Wow wondered what made him so mad.
"Yeah, yeah, yeah, Mr. Grumpy pants. Jeez take a chill pill." Emmet laughed.
Oh how wonderful it was to hear! If I could have smiled I would have. And it would have been a huge grin of pure happiness.
The breathing next to me stopped. Instead of breathing, it started to hum. I knew what it was instantly, it was my lullaby and Edward was sitting next to me singing it.
This made the pain slowly go to ease. But just a little bit.
More hours passed.
I was still in pain, but after I started hearing it faded away a little bit. And listening to things made me a little more distracted from the pain too.
Then I started to feel.
I was listening to Edward sing and Alice talk about a new outfit she was putting together for Rose when I felt something under my head, on top of me, and wrapped in my hand.
And the pain lessened.
The thing wrapped in my hand I knew was another hand, but it wasn't cold, so it couldn't have been Edwards. Could it? But who else would be holding my hand?
I lost track of time a long time ago. How long was this going to go on? I wanted to move so bad….
Just when I was about to go crazy, when I couldn't take it anymore.
I woke up. Well my body woke up.
It was so sudden. I was just listening to Edward sing (I guessed he had sung the whole time I was changing) trying to not lose it when my eyes flashed open and my body jerked.
I hadn't told my body to do this. But it did anyway. I didn't care either way, I MOVED!
Yeah this ones a little short, but chapter 5 will be on its way SOON! I promise. it's the weekend so that means extra writing time. When it gets to Monday we have tests in school so I bet the chapters will be a little slower than usual.
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