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Fate Has Reasons
Chapter 4: "The Evil Has Begun"
Normal pov
Hinata made her way to the secret hide-out where Hanabi and Neji are located. The hide-out was a cave with a boulder in front of it. If you find the secret door and push it open then you would see that at the end of the cave there is light. Hinata went inside, walked toward the light, and made it out to an open meadow. She looks frantically around the area for her last remaining family members. She finally felt devastated that she decided to scream there names.
"Neji! Hanabi!" No response so she tried again.
"Neji! Hanabi!"
But still no answer so she started to cry. She was freaking out over where they could be. They were suppose to meet here after they escaped from the vampire that killed her parents.
'What happened to them? Why aren't they here?' Hinata thought.
Hinata stood up and headed for the cherry blossom tree that is on her left. In the tree is a hole filled with vampire hunting weapons. She dug in with her hand and took out a backpack, two guns, three packs of vampire bullets, money, food, and a knife. She then took out a flashlight, tent, sleeping-bag, and first-aid kit. It only took her twenty minutes to pack up. After that she walked out of the secret hiding place and took off. She was going to find her sister and cousin, even if it's the last thing she'll do. Hinata also knows that if she is going to save them, she needs to kick some vampire ass.
Shino's pov
Who is this guy and why is he here? Is he here for the future leader of the vampire? Probably is.
"Hey you! Who are you?"
"My name is Naruto Uzamaki. I'm here to escort Prince Sasuke."
"Go ahead, take him away. Come on Kiba, we need to fix the door."
"Good riddance blood-suckers!" I heard Kiba say. He must still be frustrated about Hinata.
I don't know, but that vampire is giving off a bad aura. It might be because he's a vampire, or he maybe evil. I hope my second reason isn't true. I see the vampire carry the prince bridal-style and disappear in an instant.
I wonder how Hinata's doing. I hope she hasn't gotten into trouble. When I see her I'll ask her what happened between her and the Uchiha vampire.
Sasuke's pov: dreaming
I saw this beautiful angel on the edge of a cliff and saw that she was crying. I ran to her as fast as I could and stopped her from jumping. She turns around showing me that she is Hinata. She says my name in a whisper adding the -kun suffix. When I heard her say that is was like music to my ears. I pull her closer to me and embrace her. She stops crying, sighs, and returns the embrace with force. I then hear the words that I always wanted to hear, sh said I love you. That was the trigger that made me grab her face and give her a passionate kiss. She moaned as my tongue licked the roof of her mouth. One of her hands went to my hair and the other one was pulling my neck down to deepen the kiss. One of my hands went from her waist to her butt lifting her up to deepen the kiss more. After a few more minutes we parted. Our eyes met and we stayed there embracing each other.
Naruto's pov
"You idiot! You weren't supposed to let her get away!" I yelled at one of my henchmen.
"Sorry master, it's just that the Uchiha got in the way!"
"Whatever you sorry excuse for a vampire! Leave!"
I've waited many years to put my plan in action and then the idiot messes uo the first step of the plan. I've grew an army over the years to take over the vampire race and to get the woman I love by my side. I had everything planned since the day I laid eyes on her. Now first step of my plan was ruined by my rival, Sasuke. He thinks we are best friends, but that's just me faking to be his best friend. You know the saying 'keep your friends close, and keep your enemies even closer'. That is exactly what I'm doing, and then I surprise attack Sasuke and destroy him.
"Hinata, Hinata, Hinata....." I say in a whisper.
I love her so much and I need her so much. That is why I created this plan. The henchman was suppose to capture her, knock her out, and bring her to me. Then when she waked up I would have told her that I saved her and that I mean no harm. Then I'd gain her trust and make her fall in love with me. Of course she would never know about what he did to gain rule over the vampires, that she didn't need to know. I would have had her and the power. If the first step would have gone perfectly then I would have been one step closer to completing my dreams. I guess I'll have to rethink my plan since the first step has gone bad.
End of Chapter 4
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