THIS IS NOT A NEW CHAPTER. I just wanted to fix the "Jack watching the sisters" part...I realized it was weak and I realized that the reason for that was that I didn't want to put the song lyrics in here, but I decided to anyway and added Jack commentary on them. So hopefully this is better.

Note, I'll bold the new parts...


Elsa was stunned. This boy, Jack Frost, could control snow, ice and could fly? She looked closer at him. He had snowy white hair, that was lighter than hers, icy blue eyes and a hint of mischeviousness that practically sparkled in his eyes. She stepped out onto the balcony that overlooked her kingdom and failed to see anything around her but the beautiful snow that covered the mountain.

"Who told you about me?" she asked, turning to look at Jack.

"Pitch," Jack answered.

"Pitch? How does he know you?" she asked, furrowing her brows in confusion.

"Well, we go back a ways," Jack answered vaugely.

"Pitch would always visit me as a little girl. The first time he showed up, I tried to throw an icicle at him," she said quietly, unsure why she was sharing it with Jack.

"You did?" he asked excitedly.

"Yeah."

"That's amazing! Did it hit him?"

"No...It was dark though, so I couldn't really see him."

Jack laughed and patted Elsa's shoulder. Elsa took a step back out of habit and wrapped her arms around herself. Jack stopped laughing and looked at Elsa, concerned. Elsa just turned away, not used to someone being concerned for her, besides her family, and jumped when she heard a knock on the "front" door. She headed back into the room the balcony was connected to and listened to the light footsteps, unaware that Jack was behind her.

"Elsa?! It's me, Anna!"

"Anna?" Elsa asked, shocked.

"Who's Anna?" Jack asked.

"My sister. Stay here," Elsa answered before walking out to see her sister.

Anna gasped as she looked at her sister. "Whoa, Elsa, you look...different. It's a good different! And this place...it's amazing!" She looked at the beautiful ice palace that was catching the rays of the sun and giving different sections of the walls a light yellow, almost orangish glow.

"Thank you," Elsa said, looking around as well. "I never knew what I was capable of..."

"I'm so sorry, about what happened," Anna said, starting up the stairs. "If I had known I-"

"No, it's okay," Elsa said, stepping back. "You don't have to apologize..." She turned her head away so her sister wouldn't see the sadness in her eyes. "You should probably go...please."

"But I just got here," Anna said with a slight depreciating laugh.

Elsa stepped back even more and turned to look at her sister.

"You belong down in Arendelle," she told her, a hint of sisterly love in her voice.

"So do you," Anna insisted.

"No, Anna, I belong here. Alone. Where I can be who I am, without hurting anybody."

Elsa couldn't stop herself from looking at her sister's one solid white hair. She had accidentally hit her sister with her powers when they were younger, and that white hair was the effect it left. Luckily, the trolls who fixed Anna had told her and her parents, it wasn't her heart. The mind could be presuaded.

"Actually...about that," Anna stated somewhat nervously.

She didn't get far because a noise, that sounded kind of like a loud six, came from outside.

"Wait, what is that?" Elsa asked nervously, turning to look at the door.

"Hi! I'm Olaf and I like warm hugs!" Olaf yelled as he came running in.

"Olaf?" Elsa asked disbelivingly.

"You built me!" Olaf said happily, then added: "Remember that?"

"You're alive?" she asked.

"Uhm... I think so..." he answered, slightly unsure.

As Elsa stared at her hands awed, Anna knelt by Olaf.

"It's just like the ones we built as kids," she said.

She was right, Elsa absently noted. It had the same round bottom, small middle and slightly misshappen head. The carrot was almost the exact same even.

"Yeah," Elsa said with a little laugh.

"So we were so close...we can be like that again?" Anna said.

Elsa gasped as she had a flashback, and shook her head slightly. She couldn't hurt her sister again.

"No, we can't...Goodbye, Anna," Elsa said, turning to head back into a room. She didn't care which.

"Elsa, wait," Anna said, seeming sorry for having brought up the subject.

"No! I'm just trying to protect you," Elsa said, using a hand gesture that meant stay back as she walked away.

"You don't have to protect me, I'm not afraid! Please don't shut me out again, please don't slam the door. You don't have to keep your distance anymore!"


Jack frowned at the order but he figured it would stressful enough to see her sister. He waited patiently for about five seconds then tried to think of something else to do. He then looked around the room, noticing it was pretty bare. Either Elsa figured she didn't need anything or she hadn't got around to it before he and Anna interrupted her or she wasn't actually planning on staying.
"No, Anna, I belong here. Alone. Where I can be who I am, without hurting anybody." He heard Elsa say.
That made him frown. Why did she have to worry about hurting people? Did her powers act up randomly? If that was the case, maybe he could help her control it? He panicked when he heard footsteps approaching the room he was in. He quickly flew up to the roof and sighed when Elsa passed with a girl who had red hair, who he assumed was Anna, following after her. He considered following them and shrugged. Why not?
When he finally reached the room, the sisters were on opposite ends.
"Anna," Elsa started. "Please go back home. Your life awaits. Go enjoy the sun and open up the gates."
"Yeah, but-" Anna tried.
"I know, you mean well, but leave me be. Yes, I'm alone but I'm alone and free!" Elsa approached the doors that led to another balcony, Elsa really likes balconies Jack noted, as she said that and turned around before continuing. "Just stay away and you'll be safe from me!"
Anna had followed Elsa and stood a little bit behind her at the doors. Elsa pushed past her before stopping at what her sister said.
"Actually we're not." It was said almost apologetically.
"What do you mean your not?" Elsa asked, turning her torso to face Anna.
"I get the feeling you don't know," Anna said. Jack secretly thought she was stalling.
"And what do I not know?" Elsa pressed.
Jack absently noted Anna wringing her hands as she answered.
"Arendelle's in deep, deep, deep, deep snow..."
"What?" Elsa asked, shocked.
Jack noticed that it was snowing and knew he wasn't causing it. He then noticed that Elsa looked shocked and remembered what happened to him when he was feeling panicky. It also snowed then.
So it's true then, he thought.She really can control snow and ice.
"You kind of set off an eternal winter... Everywhere," Anna told her sister.
"Everywhere?"
"But that's okay! You can just unfreeze it."
"No, I can't. I-I don't know how."
"Sure you can, I know you can. Cause for the first time in forever..."
Jack watched as Anna went on and Elsa overlapped her. He noticed the storm getting worse and quickly tried to fly down to maybe help her, but the wind wasn't cooperating. He ended up being flung against a wall. He sat up and made his way to Elsa, but he was to slow. He watched as the blizzard abruptly stopped and as a glow started forming around Elsa's middle, near her heart. He knew what was about to happen a second before it did, however, he wasn't quick enough to get to Anna to save her. He stood between the sisters, unsure who to help.


He looked over when he saw a guy with blond hair, wearing a snowcap, a slightly large nose and brown eyes rush in and help Anna up. He then looked at Elsa and noticed that she was looking at Anna with fear shown clearly in her eyes. He took a step towards Elsa, wanting to help her since Anna was taken care of. Elsa looked at him and he felt his heart break from seeing the sadness and fear and even lonliness in her eyes.

"Let's get you out of here," he heard the blond hair male say to Anna.

He walked over to Elsa and pulled her into a hug before she could run off. He felt her tense in his arms and just held her tighter. Eventually Elsa relaxed enough to lean against him and sighed.

"It's okay to cry, you know," he told her quietly.

He rested his head on hers as he felt her start to sob quietly. He soothingly rubbed her back and slowly lowered them to the ground, situating her so she could still lean on him and he could hold her tighter. He didn't want to say anything else to ruin the moment and turned his head to watch the sunset that turned the walls of the palace a purple-blue color.

"Jack?" she asked a little while later.

"Yeah?" he replied, turning his attention to her.

"Do you think Anna hates me now?"

"No, she's your sister. She'll always love you," Jack answered honestly.

"Do you think she's afraid?"

"What's there to be afraid of?"

"Me..."

"I doubt she's afraid of you. She just wants to be near you...she's your sister, Elsa. You can't just shut her out. I know, you were doing it to keep her safe, but...imagine how she must have felt, Elsa. Knowing you were there, just behind that door..."

Elsa just let out another sob as an answer.


Later, while Elsa was sleeping peacefully, Jack was attempting to make a bed. He had taken off his hoodie, revealing a white long sleeve shirt and had his hoodie rolled up as a pillow for Elsa. He exclaimed quietly in triumph when he managed to make a small snow bed. He wondered if Elsa would need a blanket, but then shook the thought away.

'If she was able to make a palace entirely out of ice, I doubt she needs a blanket,' he thought.

He carefully picked her up and placed her down on the bed. He sat down on the edge of the bed and looked at her for a minute. He knew, as he brushed a lock of her hair behind her ear, that he would have to protect her, and her sister, at any cost. He knew this little Norwegien kingdom needed girls like Elsa and Anna. Two sisters who loved each other unconditionally no matter what. That wasn't exactly all though... He thought about what she had said earlier, about Pitch and how he would visit her when she was younger...

He wouldn't let Pitch use her as a pawn in whatever he was planning.