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Bpov

Ugh. My head is pounding. It feels like someone is taking remember but I come up blank. I stretch and wonder where I am and what time it is.

Suddenly it all comes back to me like a ton of bricks. Sam, Emily, the silver wolf. I try to open my eyes and find out I can. God this is turning into a hellhole.

I look around the room and find it my old room, so I must be at my daddy's. I can hear him in the kitchen, which is never a good thing so I get up and go downstairs.

"Daddy what did I say about cooking in th-" but I cut off as I step in the kitchen. Sue was cooking but my dad was at the kitchen table reading the newspaper in his boxers.

"What are you doing here Sue?" I shot a confused glance at my dad.

I loved Sue and Harry as my second parents but Sue my real mom. My biological mother was like a child that I had to take care of instead of the other way around. But Sue was a real mom that took care of me and helped me when I was having a bad day. Harry was one of my favorite people because he had a good soul. He was so big but gentle and I got to see his soft side.

"Ummm." she trailed off as she looked at my dad that had guilt look on his face. As I looked as Sue I realized she was in her pajamas. Oh my god! No no no no! my dad was a good man he wouldn't cheat and Sue wouldn't either I always looked up to their marriage because it was pure.

"No!" I screamed "Daddy please tell me its not what it looks like," I begged him. But all he did was shake his head with that same look on his face.

"I can't believe you two. Oh my god you both disgust me and never ever speak to me again, I'll live somewhere else" And with that I ran out of the house, trying to forget the looks on their faces.

I ran down the beach and sat by some driftwood. Wondering where I could go or get money to get away from the monsters here. Then I decided I'd go to Forks for right now and get a job. After I earn enough money I will go to a sunny city were they are nothing but unaware humans.

So I started to walk to towards Dorks, making sure that I stay away from the forest and in the middle or the road. As I walked I thought of what game I could play to pass the time. But what game can you play that is one person?

So far I have counted the rocks, my steps, my breaths, the cracks in the road and the trees. I finally got to the "Welcome to Forks" sign when I was on my 78,392 trees. As I walked through the town I looked at the stores and which ones were looking for jobs. By the time I found this Newton's Sport Shop it was 7:55 and it closed at 8.

When I walked in I went to the counter that had a women that looked in her late 30s.

"Excuse me?" I asked politely because she didn't notice me yet.

"Oh, sorry dear. How many I help you?" she came out of her daze.

"It fine, um I was wondering if you still need an employ?" I hoped because I really needed the money and there were barely any stores left.

"Well, actually we do need someone." She started to look through the mess on the counter until she made a small "ahha" sound and handed me an application.

"Here you go honey, just fill this out and give it back to me."

"Thanks" I went over to a chair and started filling it out but then I got to talents and I didn't know what to put. So I put go at filing and math. Then I decided to put down flexible to where ever you put me and with that I was finished.

"Here you go and thanks again." I handed her the completed application.

"No problem dearly" and with that I left the store and started down the now dark road. As I was looking for a hotel I passed an ally when I was grabbed and pulled in.

I opened my mouth to scream but a hand was placed over my mouth.

"Now beautiful we are going to have some fun that will have you begging for more." Tears burned at my eyes when I knew what he was going to do, but I blinked them away and I wouldn't let them fall.

With that he threw me on the ground, and before I had time to get up he was on me. He ripped my shirt done the middle and pulled my bra up. I laid there unmoving as he groped my breast and moaned saying how soft I felt. I was so disgusted at him that I shut down. I wasn't processing anything.

But I did pay attention when a black and white blur came at him too fast to see and knock him against the wall. He lost consensuses but I could tell he was still alive. I curled myself in a protective ball as I watch.

I wanted to scream and pull my hair out when I saw that my savior was not human either and was another monster.

Ok I'm going to stop there. Review please. Who do you think is the black and white blur? Tell me what you think please and review not just story alert plzzz!