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After the dinner, Qui-Gon stayed to help clean up while Anakin, R2, and Padme, went back to see Anakin's protocol droid. Kanon had disappeared with Mearad. Once he finished, he went in search of them. He found the pair on the balcony in whisper conversation.

"They look familiar…" he thought vaguely. He cleared his throat loudly. They hushed quickly and turned on the spot. "Yes… those eyes look familiar in the moon light." He thought. "Is this your daughter? Bastila?" he asked calmly.

"Yes it is. Bastila, this is Qui-Gon Jinn, Jedi Knight." She said, introducing them, and staring at Mearad.

"Qui-Gon? Master, what is he here for?" Mearad thought.

"I'm not sure, I think they are stranded, and from what I remember, Obi-Wan was his apprentice." Kanon replied. Mearad nearly fell over beginning to laugh. Qui-Gon looked confused, and Kanon began to smile.

"May I ask what the laughter is for?" he said.

"You may ask, but you might not get an answer." Mearad replied boldly, turning around and facing away from the two.

"Mearad! We may not be on Coruscant, but you still show respect to other Jedi Masters, you understand?" Mearad nodded, still laughing.

"Sorry about her, she doesn't quite have manners down yet. So do you have an apprentice?" Kanon said, turning back to Qui-Gon.

"Yes, I have a nineteen year old padawan name Obi-Wan Kenobi, who is still on the ship." At the last comment, Mearad started laughing again. Kanon sighed.

"Bastila, go to bed." She called.

"Yes Adi." She replied. And hurried off, lost in memories of the Jedi.

"You allow her to call you by your first name? That's more and more uncommon nowadays." Qui-Gon said aloud.

"Yes, it gives her a sense of adulthood." She replied, tired.

"Even so, in the Jedi, only the best of friends can call each other without saying master, apprentice, or Jedi before. Even then they only sometimes use it." Qui-Gon explained.

"I knew that." she said, and then catching her second mistake.

"How did you know that?" Qui-Gon asked, puzzled.

"I didn't always live on Tatooine."

"Coruscant?" Qui-Gon suggested.

"Dang it, he's catching on" Kanon thought "Yes."

"How long ago?"

"We came to tatooine from Coruscant when Mea-Bastila was about 13, seven years ago."

"Why did you choose Tatooine, of all planets?" Qui-Gon wondered aloud.

"That's our business. But I will tell you this, we are also stranded here. Perhaps we can help each other off this planet."

"Perhaps we can."

"I hope we can." Kanon thought. She said goodnight and followed Mearad into their room. She lay awake for hours in thought and meditation until tiredness finally consumed her.

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