(Hey guys! Finally I'm back to the review.)

Chatter NEIN Teh Evil Tigger (Tigger LOL)and holY(Holy...)
I SAID NO FLAMES! YOUR JUST JELOS (I don't know what is a jello, so I can't give you.)YOUR GOING 2 HEL L(I trust Jesus. I'm already saved!) JESS IS OYUR SAVER (Truth but it's Jesus not Jess)

"Ohno its HolyLeaf!" yelled FireStra (Firestra? Isn't is Firestar?) he ranned (Poor grammar)away. SandStrom wnet aftre him.

StarGlaem locked up.(Who?) HolyLeaf was stnding their and their was anodder chat with hr.

"OMIGOSH ITS TIGGERSTAR!(Yay! It's Tiggerstar! *Dies of laughter*)" she hossed.(Hossed.) "WHTA WIL WE DO!"

"we figt.(Only figt. Can you perform it once in front of us, Jayfeather.)" saud Jayfeathre and he ran at HollyLeaf. StarGlema washed (Washed? How?) as HolyLefa locked at JayFather and kiled him with one shot. (No! Don't die Jayfeather!)

"YOU KILDED MY FTHER! (Oh my StarClan.)she yelled and she attcked HolyLeaf. HollyPaw gut out of the way (Dodged.) and StarPaw attaked TiggerSar. (So?)

"U killed TigerStra!" (Probably Mary-Sueness!)uelled FiresStar he locked happy. "You are speshil!" (It's your job, Firestar!)

StarGleam was sooo happy, she didng notse as HollyLea grabbed Firestar and took him way. (Kidnapping! Go Stargleam! Show your mary-sueness again!)

"OH NO" yelled StarKit. "WE HAVE TO SAVE HIM! (We all know it.)

a cilf hunger1!111! see im a god riter (No. You say you are a christian but now you say you are a God writer? You have offended the Ten Commandments!)i no what thta id thx f4r the good revweiws (Oh…! It's a Stargleam's friend!)JzzPaw && everon else WHOSE NIT A FALMER (What are you saying?)