For the guest reviewer - yes I facepalmed when I saw that as well xD that was my old entry. I'll try to watch my tenses as well. Sometimes it feels wrong and sometimes it feels so wrong ;-; or maybe it's because I always write them late evening. Anyway thank you~!
Re-written
Akane's POV
It's school day again, and I still have to wear these clothes Shampoo and Ukyo bought for me. At least I'll be walking with Ranma today. And I won't forget the leggings this time!
I sighed as I start getting ready for school. I went downstairs to eat with my sisters and father.
"So Akane, what's with the change of outfit?" Nabiki asked
"Oh could it be?" Kasumi said looking at me and smiling. I blinked a few times and Nabiki looked at her "Do you have a boyfriend now Akane?"
"What?" Dad suddenly looks at me putting down the newspaper he was reading earlier "My baby girl is growing up so fast!" he said like he was about to cry
"N-No!" I said and remembered what happened yesterday. I feel a little warm on my face. I look down and continue eating my breakfast... Stupid Ranma...
"But Akane, you're blushing" you just have to continue it don't you Nabiki?
"Oh, my... Is it true then?" Kasumi said. They're still looking at me when someone knocked on the door. Ah my saviour!
"I wonder who it is?" Kasumi said as she got up and went to the front door
I hear footsteps coming back and we all look at who our early visitor is
"Yo! Akane you ready yet?" Ranma said as he walked inside and sat beside me "Goodmorning!" He said to all of us. Of course just feel at home like always.
"So what Kasumi said is true then?" Nabiki suddenly asked while looking at Ranma
"No! Nabiki!" I quickly said as I finish my breakfast
"If it is Ranma then I don't mind..." Dad started and I get up pulling a confused Ranma with me "We're going now, we don't want to be late!" I shouted as we get out the door
Remember what I said about my saviour? Scratch that! Now they think Ranma is my boyfriend!
"What was that about Akane?"
"It's nothing! Let's go!"
We walked to school neither of us saying anything. I guess we both don't know what to say about the pretending thing... Idiot.
Ranma going out with Akane... It does have a good sound but I never thought of us like that. I mean he's been my best friend since we were kids And they used to tease us all the time we just got used to it.
Suddenly I feel Ranma's hand around my shoulder. I look at him and he just points in front of us. I see... there's a crowd waiting. Must be waiting to see if the rumors are true.
Right. Just pretend. Get a grip Akane! Why am I feeling like this...
It's lunch time again. My favorite subject! Okay, I know it's not really a subject. But I just love eating!
"Uh-Oh... Trouble's here" Ukyo said as she points behind us. We all look to see what she's talking about. It's Mikael.
"You're all invited to my party tonight" He said and winked at me. I ignored him and was about to continue eating when I felt Ranma put his arms around me. Is he hugging me or what? I just froze and looked at him
"We're going. Right Akane?" He asked as he turns his head to look at me and I can feel his hot breath on my cheek. I just nodded. Stupid speechless Akane. Talk at least!
Ranma's POV
"Let's go?" I said as I tugged on Akane's hand. She just nodded and we started walking home.
I wonder if I did something wrong? She's been quiet since lunch break. Is she mad?
"So... Do you have something to wear for tonight?" She nods
"I guess... I'll pick you up then?" She nods again
I sighed. What can I do to make you speak?
"A-are you...mad?" She stops walking and finally looks at me "N-No, why would you think that?"
I smile and holds her hand "I finally hear your voice again"
She raised an eyebrow "Is that what this is about?"
"No. Usually you're troubled when you're that quiet. So what's up?
She looks down and took a deep breath "It's nothing" she said and she starts walking again
I pulled her hand lightly so she would stop and she did. "Tell me"
"It's... Do you have to hug me back there?"
I blinked and keeps on looking at her. Is that it?
"It's bothering you that much?" I step closer to her so she would look at me
"Why? Do you want more Akane?" She just kept on staring at me... She's blushing... She looks... Cute...
I started to lean my head closer to hers, my forehead rests on hers and I ask once more "Well Akane? Do you?"
We stayed like that for a few more seconds. More like a minute. I don't really know. Why am I doing this?
She steps back "W-What are you talking about? It's just pretending! Right?" She smiles at me... That smile.
I sighed and started to walk again "Yeah... Let's go" I just said without looking back at her. Why do I feel... Rejected?
Ukyo's POV
Music is loud, alot of people are here. Of course, this is Mikael's party after all.
"Oh you made it" I look at Mikael to see who he's talking to. It's Ranma and Akane.
Ranma leaves I think I heard him say he's going to get them a drink. Is he sure it's safe to leave Akane with Mikael? That idiot. I tug Ryoga's shirt "There they are, come on"
Before we could get to where Akane is standing, we see Mikael put his arms around Akane. What does he think he's doing?! I was about to run to them and I think Akane was about to hit him but Ranma came in, he quickly holds Mikael's wrist and he's glaring at him. Uh-oh... This is not good.
"R-Ranma...?" The shocked Akane said
I think all of us are looking at the scene that's going on here. The music even went off now there's a complete silence, all of us waiting what will happen next.
"I thought I told you to stay away from her..." Ranma said with a cold voice "You try and do that again and you're dead..."
"You didn't" Mikael smirked "How about you show me?"
"What?"
"Show me how much you mean your threat"
We all look at Ranma who seems to be thinking. Well you just keep on getting yourself in trouble. Suddenly he pulls Akane into a... Kiss?!
Everyone in the room gasps at what Ranma did. I pull out my phone quickly and took a photo. Of course this might come in handy! Especially to tease them.
Ranma finally broke the kiss and glares back at Mikael "She's mine! Ya heard that? There's nothing you can do to get her away from me!"
Interesting...
So... Yeah tell me I mispelled some words or... Yeah. You know.
