"W-W-WHAT!" Keitaro asked in shock.

"Yes, a girl's dorm." the girl with the auburn hair said.

"But this was an inn." Keitaro said, still not believing the girl. She was about to say something in reply but was in erupted by people coming up the steps.

"What's that noise?" came a familiar voice that the three girls and Keitaro recognized almost immediately.

"House Mother! We caught this peeping tom!"exclaimed the auburn haired girl. She came off as very intelligent to Keitaro, but with a major attitude.

"Calm down Naru." Haruka said.

"A-A-Aunt Haruka? Is it really you?"Just as he said that she walked up to Keitaro and smacked him upside the head.

"It's just Haruka... Aunt makes me sound old!"

A little later, after Keitaro gets dresses, they all sat down to talk. "So this is the story, Keitaro here got kicked out of his house and thought it would be a good idea to come here and see if he could stay." explained Haruka.

"Ohhhh noooo! This is a girl's dorm!" exclaimed Naru.

"But I have no place to go..." pleaded Keitaro.

"So what? You're a perverted guy. This is a girl's dorm. So the answer is NO!" Naru yelled, scaring Keitaro.

"Hey, Keitaro, what about your friend, um Ki I think is his name, right?" Haruka asked.

"Oh yeah. He's a smooth talker."Keitaro said with hope in his voice. Just the Ki entered the room with Su and Shinobu behind him.

"And this is the living room. Oh, hiyas everybody." said Su as she waved at the other girls.

"Ki! Where have you been?" asked Keitaro.

"I got a tour by these two." replied Ki. Suddenly, the girl holding the long sword walked up to Ki and threatened,

"If you did anything to these two, I'll kill you where you stand."

"Empty threats." Ki said calmly.

"What? Empty threats?" echoed the girl with the sword. She then drew her sword and started to attack. As her sword came down about to crash on his head, she was too slow for Ki's moves, he actually spun around and hit across a pressure point on her side, that stopped her mid-air and knocked her out for good, before she could do any harm to him with her weapon. When she woke up a few hours later on the couch, she heard a voice without any emotion say,

"Awake I see." She looked at Ki and as soon as she did she felt a bit surprised that she wasn't angry at him,but somewhat attracted to him.

"How long have I been out?" she asked in a daze.

"For a little over two hours." replied Ki.

"I'll go tell the others that you're awake." Ki then left the room and almost immediately Naru came into the room.

"Motoko... you OK?" Naru asked worriedly. "Cause if that guy hurt you, I'll hurt him!" "Actually I don't feel any pain where he hit me." she answered in amazement. The girls all came in and were talking to Motoko and asking how she was when Su finally said,

"Now can we all have lunch?"

"I'll get started right away." Shinobu said walking out of the room.

"Let me rest a bit more." replied Motoko.

"Okies." Su said, also leaving. After about a half hour, lunch was ready. Everybody came and sat at the table, except Keitaro, who was tied to a chair in the manager's room.

"So... your name is Ki, huh? Asked Naru.

"Correct." replied Ki.

"Do you like bananas?" asked Su.

"Yes." answered Ki.

"Where did you learn to fight?" Motoko asked, wanting to know what fighting style he used.

"I made the style when I was taught Martial Arts." replied Ki. "Dokugaku (no)" finished Ki. Motoko sulked her head in disappointment, not knowing what kind of style it was.

Lunch finally arrived. "I hope you will all enjoy your food." aid Shinobu with a blush in her cheeks.

"I am a little hungry from my trip." replied Ki. Su challenged Ki to an eating contest during lunch where bowls of rice, fish, and edatamami. Ki had won the eating contest against Su. (SCORE: Ki- 18 servings/ Su- 15 servings). The girls were all talking about Ki.

"He's got the looks, the strength, and the money." Kitsune said.

"What makes you think he has money?" asked Naru in a huffed voice.

"Well for one I saw his wallet- It's full to the max!" Kitsune replied.

"Alright. But is he smart?" Naru asked.

"Does it matter if he's smart... as long has he has money right?' thought Kitsune to herself. The out loud,

"Well I'm going to my room is anyone needs me."

In the manager's room, Keitaro was trying to free himself. "Man these girls can tie a knot!" Keitaro said. The door opened just enough to reveal Ki.

"Tied up I see." Ki said emotionlessly.

"Just untie me!" Keitaro yelled. Ki said nothing as he untied the ropes.

"Thanks Ki." said Keitaro. Just then Haruka walked in and said,

"So Ki untied you, huh?"

"Yeah. I think I'll have to explain our situation to everybody. Aunt Haruka, would you mind getting the girls?" asked Keitaro. SMACK!

"It's Haruka. Just Haruka!" she exclaimed.

"Yes, I'll go get them."

When everyone was seated, Keitaro and Ki told the girls just the dilemma the were in."So there you go! That's why we are here." Keitaro finished saying.

"No way! I'm not letting men stay here!" Naru said.

"But but... my grandmother owns..." Keitaro was saying as he was interrupted by Naru.

"I don't care if your grandmother owns this dorm... You're not staying here and that's final!"

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Written by: The Great Everett! Age: 14( Not my idea! Everett)

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