I'm sorry for the mix up but just to let you know AMBER DOESN'T KNOW THE CULLENS SECRET!. Here are some frequently asked questions answered.
Q: Why does Alice have a general idea of what Amber was seeing?
A: Because, as shown in this chapter, Alice has a vision of Amber when she was unconsious. Because Amber doesn't have Bella's power Edward can read her mind, though it is a very confusing place to be, he still could see everything that she was at the moments he was trying to. And also Jasper could sense the chaos that she was at the moment and he was feeling it too.
Q: I liked the second chapter but there was one thing I didn't like. The Dream. It didn't really have a setting and it was very confusing. You also didn't describe what the people looked like. (Not a question I know but brings up important points)
A: Well I was trying to picture it like I was actually there and I know that if I was Amber at that point I would be to worried with saving my self than trying to get sensory details. So Amber also wasn't supposed to know what was going on at the time, it was her first vision and she was freaking out. And you get the details of what the people look like later, remember this was a murder and Amber's dad Charlie is the chief of police, and he's going to tell the deet's.
Q: Why does Amber know about the Cullen's secret.
A: Well I didn't meen it to sound like she knew it when she saw Alice at that point. I was going for a more memior-ish feel for the story. Like Amber was writing it, Not ME, like she remembered it and while she was putting it down on paper she was acknowledgeing the fact that she didn't know it than, but does now. But when I went back and looked at it did sound bizzare and a let down to anyone who isn't me. So I just deleted that part.
So thank you ImagitiveRainbowPenguin for pointing these all out to me, and I will repay you by advertising. Go read her stories DAMNIT she is good. She was my first friend here on Fanfic and she is a kickass writer, wayyyyyy better than me by far! So read or I suck out your soul
Alice's P.O.V (During the first lunchroom scene)
I turned to look at what Jasper and Edward were when I saw it. Amber Rose Swan looking depressed as anyone could ever get before desiding to committ suicide. But that was when a vision came on
I was in the hospital in Carlise's room. And then as I walked in I felt pity. I strolled over to the bed to the screaming paitient. It was Amber Rose Hale.
"No I'm sorry. I'm so sorry. I can't save you!!" She screamed. At first I thought she was talking to me, but then I realized her eyes were closed. Carlise walked in next, with Edward following.
"She's been like that for the past hour. Edward can you tell what she's seeing?" Carlise asked the boy next to him.
Edward looked mortified as he answered. " It's blood mainly, lots and lots of blood. It's very disturbing. But it's centered on death, none of these people in the visions survive at all. And they are only flashes, only there for a second or two and than the vanish replaced with another one just as quick as they appeared." He paused. "No. I can't tell if she's had longer ones. At lunch today I saw basically the same thing, but there were only a couple. I think it gets worse when she sleeps." He answered Carlise's thought.
Carlise shook his head and looked like he was going to cry if he had tears left. "She has a gift you know." He whispered to low for human ears. "If she becomes one of us."
"But what if she's just insane? What if these deaths are just things her mind has made up?" I asked him. He couldn't be serious?
"Insanity my darling. Weren't you pent up for certain visions you had, because people thought you were insane? Besides she has no history of mental illness. She is Charlie Swan's daughter and-" Carlise was cut off.
Edwards face went from pained to worried. "That reminds me I need to talk to you about a certain Swan. Alone." It sounded urgent.
"Okay Alice can you please talk to Mrs. Swan when she gets up. It might be very soon." Carlisle told me. His voice sounded remorsefull.
As I pulled off from the vision I felt exremely gratefull. I was glad that I didn't get visions of death all the time. That would definatly put a damper on shopping. And than I realized what this truely ment. And then I felt guilty for ever thinking that, this girl can barely let herself daydream letalone sleep. Then I turned to Edward and remembered my vision.
Poor Edward, he's seeing what she's seeing too. I thought
And then I turned to see my brother Jasper and felt bad too.
Poor Jasper, he's feeling everything she's seeing. I exclaimed to myself in my mind
And then I turned to Emmett and Rose and sighed. We were the ones with the good end of the stick, I guess I even more than Rose and Emm, at least I know what's going on!
And last but not least I turned to Amber who didn't even know what is going on herself. I sighed again, I would be meeting with her later that was for sure. And something was going to happen that got her sent to Carlise, so I silently watched her the rest of lunch, and followed her through out P.E.
Edward's P.O.V (During the lunchroom scene)
I sat down at my lunch table as usual with my family. I had heard that there was a new girl and spotted her quickly. I listened to those around her;
Wow Bella is so pretty. Oooo Mike is looking hot today! Hey why is Cullen looking over here! I hope he asks me out!!!; Was what Jessica was thinking. I laughed and took note not to go near Jessica Stanley anytime soon.
Angela was next; Wow Bella is really nice! She would be a great edition to our crappy school news paper!
And then last but not least Lauren; OMG Ben thinks she's hot, no Ben is MINE, MINE, MINE, MINE!! Bella must die. *Takes knife and imagine's her stabbing Bella voodoo doll.* X( DIE BELLA DIE!!!! Wow 0.o she is violent!
But as I tried to read Bella's mind but I couldn't hear anything. I kept trying but still nothing, I was about to start obsessing when somebody who's mind was screaming at me walked in.
It was Amber Rose Swan, and her mind was in compleate chaos. It was smeared in blood, and I who had created many gore sceans myself had never seen anything so vile. It wasn't anything any sane human could ever think up by herself. And when she wasn't getting these images she was thinking of how stupid she was for letting herself see them it was sad. It was one of those things that you need to look away from but just can't.
Brrrrringggg
The bell. Lunch was now over. And as I got up to go to class I allowed myself one more look at the wreck that was Amber.
Jasper's P.O.V (Need I say it? Lunch Room scene)
Typical. Was the one word that rang through my mind. The emotional range withing the room was typical, I think that was the only wasy I could describe that day.
Edward was confused, Alice was giddy, Rose was infatuated with herself, and Emm was anxious for a fight to start. And I? I was compleatly bored out of my mind. Untill she walked in. She ruined the whole emotional stature of the room.
Everything that she was feeling I was feeling. So If my heart hadn't already died I would've explained the feeling as if my heart was on fire. It was a pain even more intense that one million burning suns. And the remorse made me want to kill myself. And all I kept feeling that I was sure was my own emotion was amazment.
I kept feeling the nessecity to do all these things that became impossible since I transitioned from human to vampire. Puke, Cry, Kill myself, eat ecessively, and even wet myself.
I tried sending her calm waves, which worked but it seemed only seconds later the bell had rang and caught me off gaurd. And then the emotions started again.
I despratly needed to do something about Amber. For my own sanity.
Emmett's P.O.V
I was confused. Three out of five of my family seemed to be infatuated with this one girl. Amber Rose Swan
Rosalie's P.O.V
I was pissed no one was paying any attention to me. All they were looking at was this Amber Rose Swan girl.
Woohoo finally a long chapie!! I hoped you liked it, And I hoped you got your answers to any questions you may have had in this chapter, that was what it was all about. And I realized that Alice's part is longer than anyone elses, but thats because her power is the easyist to work with. I also know I can't take Edward seriously if you noticed to I know not. But that's why I'm making a jasper love story, because If it was an Edward one there would be no seriousness.
Favorite Reviews:
Lolz Lmao I like this one!
Well, well, well. I have some compitition lolz. I 3 Jazzy~! And my name is Amber! Love it!
~Amberlyn Hale
Yes you do!!! But thank you for even concidering me like that! And by the way... JASPER IS MINE!!!!! I'M WATCHING YOU!! O.O
