Hey, so here is chapter 4, enjoy and review please about if it was good, bad, or if I could improve, thanks
Two-Bit POV
Sodapop put down the phone and yelled that an ambulance was on its way. I still had no idea what was going on but I knew that it was bad.
"What happened?" I asked him.
He just ran towards the door and told me to come with him. He yelled back that he would explain everything later, and so I followed him. I regretted it, in a way.
There was a crying Johnny, what looked like a scared/sad/angry Darry, an ambulance, and a few feet away, a pile of blood. Knowing that something happened to Ponyboy, I guessed that the pile of blood belonged to him. I felt sick at the thought of it. Whatever happened had to of been really bad due to all the blood. Whatever happened, if someone did it, I wanted to know about it.
I tried to think of away to cheer someone up, anyone, even myself, but you don't just do stuff like that in a situation like this.
No one can hurt my friend and get away with it just like that. Then I also thought about stuff like, if someone did this to him, how did they feel? How could someone do something like this to an innocent fourteen year old kid? Sooner or later I would get my answers, just not the ones I wanted.
Johnny POV
As soon as Darry laid Ponyboy on the ground, an ambulance pulled up and four men got out. Three of them attended to Ponyboy and put him in the ambulance while the fourth one spoke with Darry. I was too upset and shocked to pay attention about what they were talking about. But I noticed one thing, and it's something I probably won't forget for a while.
Darry looked like he was about to cry. In that moment I knew nothing would ever be the same again. And, I mean, Darry's nickname was superman. I guess people expected him to be the strong one. But what people didn't notice was that Darry was like anyone else. Just human.
That's when I felt hot tears make their way down my own face. I guess I was crying too, and I didn't even notice.
I heard a pair of running footsteps and turned around to see Soda and Two-Bit. Soda looked like crying too, and Two-Bit looked too shocked to do anything. That's part of what told me that he didn't really know what was going on. Everyone who did who didn't work for the hospital was crying, even Darry now was crying. Two-Bit cares for Ponyboy as if he was his own brother, so I knew that Two-Bit would be crying too if he knew what happened.
I have a feeling that he didn't really want to know. I now wish that I didn't know what happened here either, but I did, and now it was bothering me.
Darry POV
Three of the men from the ambulance put Ponyboy in the ambulance while a fourth one talked to me. He just asked what happened, and I told him. He didn't say anything helpful, all he really said was that we would have to follow in our own vehicle to the hospital. I felt tears stream down my face. The last time I cried was when Ponyboy and Johnny were up in Windrixville. That's when Soda and Two-Bit showed up.
I cried a little harder at the thought of Ponyboy. How could I have let this happen? I knew the socs wanted him dead, but I let him walk with Johnny. And for all I know, right now, he could be dead, in the ambulance. For all I know, I was now helpless to help.
When the guy returned to the ambulance I turned to Soda and told him to get the car. I tried not to show the hurt and pain in my voice, but I guess I failed, because Soda ran to me and threw his arms around me, sobbing. "Is he really okay Dar?" he asked between sobs.
I had no idea on how to answer him, so I just told him the truth, that I didn't know.
He turned and whimpered out, "Lets go, Two-Bit."
Two-Bit followed him as the ambulance drove off, and they were gone once again, except I knew that Soda and Two-Bit would be back. Ponyboy, I'm not so sure. And that was the thought that was killing me.
Hi, fyi I am working on chapter 5 right now. enjoy, review, and Stay Gold
