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SPOV
"Where are you taking me then?"
"Well, I've always loved this place, and I wanted to know what you would think of it."
I started getting nervous to tell her where we were going after here. He didn't usually think of her as the type that would go to a strip club, and if she hated it, he might cry. His goal in life had become to please this girl in front of him. He really loved her.
He was interrupted from his mental dilemma by the check and fortune cookies being dropped off. He paid the check and grabbed a fortune cookie. He didn't open it yet. He was still full from the gigantic meal.
"Cmon Claire, time to go to your surprise."
He was lucky she didn't know the town, or she would've guessed as soon as he pulled up, and he wanted to see if she liked it so her dragging him away from the door wouldn't work.
CPOV
He pulled up in front of a plain building that she didn't recognize. She waited for him to get out of the car, and then followed. He hesitated at the door as if he were nervous. She was surprised, Shane Collins didn't get nervous.
"Shane?"
"Huh?"
"Are we just gonna stand here?"
"Oh, uh no"
He opened the door, and she followed him inside. She was surprised at what she saw. He had taken her to a strip club. Well, she decided that he wasn't gonna be watching any other girls.
SPOV
"Hey Shane, I'm gonna go to the bathroom."
"Okay, don't get lost and be back soon"
"Of course mother"
"Oh I'm not your mother, if I was I couldn't do this"
With no other warning he scooped her up and kissed her.
" Now go to the bathroom Claire Bear."
He smiled, and went to wait for her to come out, he tried not to watch the stage, because he didn't know if she would like it very much if he were watching other girls. He saw a couple friends that he chatted with, but he didn't even remember his part of the conversation right after he said it. His eyes wandered, and suddenly he saw someone on stage. She was gorgeous, with hair that sparkled gold even in the dim light. He couldn't see her face, but he certainly wanted to know her. She had curves, but not huge. B, maybe C cup breasts although she was very thin. He watched mesmerized as she moved shyly to the beat.
Who could this beauty be? See next time. I'm gonna aim for 3 new reviews. You guys can do that right? Remember if you don't like this chapter to tell me and give me new ideas. Thanks again all reviewers and favoriters. I love you guys. I could use a beta, because I have never written before, and I want this perfect for you guys. Remember to share the love. And if you all like this chapter there will be a lemon next chapter. Review Review Review!
