Yes I know it's been a long time, but if you were to go to my school and see my idiotic and annoying teachers (and their strange habit of thinking homework is fun, 'cause it's not like we have a flipping LIFE) you would understand why I've spent more time worrying that I would get an F in a subject than that I needed to do this chapter. So I am really really sorry and I know it's annoying I just haven't had time, not that this wasn't bugging me for the past few weeks (which it has).
Anyway, thanks to the few people who think this story is cool, it means a lot to me as I am a budding writer who just wishes that somebody would read my work
So without further-a-do, here is my chapter
When we finally got home from the many encores we got from the people at the park, I was so pooped that I just plopped onto my sofa and almost, just almost, fell asleep.
"So what's up with you and Fang?" I heard my sister ask.
I opened one eye to peer at her. "We're friends." I said.
"Mhmm, I totally believe that." She said rolling her eyes.
"That's good because I don't want to talk; I want to sleep, good night Ella." I said closing my eyes.
"Ap-ba-bup, no no no, you have to talk to me! I want to know everything!" She said.
"How about you tell me that you like Iggy, and then I'll tell you more about my 'relationship' with Fang." That shut her up.
A few minutes later she said "That's totally unfair! I don't like him, we have a lot in common!" she said.
"So do me and Fang, now bug off!" She slouched and walked off to her room.
I also went up to my room and I pulled out my blue laptop. The laptop had clouds on it and it reminded me so much of the air, and I loved the sky.
I turned on the laptop and went to Skype. I wanted to talk to Fang.
( the user name for max is maxisincharge12 and Fang's is toothygrin22, if any further notice is needed I write max's name in italics and fang's is underlined, just the names though)
Maxisincharge12: Hey Fang, you on?
Toothygrin22: Hey Baby, how r u?
Maxisincharge12: Great! Hey, what do I do! Ella is asking about us, and I have never kept anything from her!
Toothygrin22: Why not just tell her?
I thought about that for a second. What would happen if I did tell her? Well she probably would tell mom, and then a whole bunch of other people. Plus she was getting buddy buddy with Nudge, so she might tell her, and then nudge would tell Jamie, who would tell Gazzy, Who would tell Iggy, who would probably tell one of his other friends, and by the time a week had gone by, the whole county would know! No. I am not telling Ella yet.
Maxisincharge12: When it comes to Ella, anything could happen.
Toothygrin22: ha ha, I guess you would know
Maxisincharge12: ya guess I would ;).
Toothygrin22: Hey, there's a carnival next weekend, wanted to know if you and your sister could come with the gang to it (plus there is always the ferris wheel ;))
Maxisincharge12: lol hold on and let me ask, my mom I mean, I already know Ella wants to go.
Toothygrin22: kk
"Mooooooooooooooooom!" I yelled. I knew she was home because I could smell the tasty nachos being made.
"Si hija?" My mother's word for daughter (pronounced ee-ha) always made me smile.
"Mama, Fang said there was going to be a carnival this weekend"
"Mmhm," she said.
"He asked if Ella and I would be able to go with him and the gang… so can I?" I asked her.
"Yeah sure, if you clean your room." I groaned. I HATED cleaning my room. It was such a pain and who cares, it'll just get dirty again! "No clean room, no carnival." She said sternly. Fine if she wanted it clean I would get it there…
So I called Nudge.
"Hey Nudge, wanna come over and clean?" I asked
"Sure!" she said back.
"Great, see ya when ya get here," I said finally.
I closed my phone and waited around the house for Nudge to get here, at one point mom left with Ella in tow to go somewhere.
(Mini line break =D)
Ding Dong
Finally the door went off.
"Finally! You know it's been like an HOUR! What to-" I stopped because when I opened the door, my half brother Ari was standing there.
"Hello lovely sister, I didn't know I was late," he said to me.
I stood, my mouth hanging slightly open, staring at my 1 year older than me brother, who used to be the same height as me and has since sprouted upward.
"No Ari, you're not late for anything… what are you doing here?" I asked, my forehead crinkling in confusion.
"Aren't you happy to see me Max? No matter, our father asked me to take you out to have a fun day with you," Ari said.
Our "father", as he had said, was a jerkwad. When I was younger he had taken me away from my mother, because of their massive divorce, and I hadn't known her for years, as I explained earlier.
I had never once called that man dad, or father, no his name is Jeb and that is what he will be called forever by me, no matter how angry it makes him.
"No Ari, I'm happy to see you, but I can't go anywhere today, I have friends coming over,"
"Hey Max, I'm ready!" speaking of the devil.
"What took you so long! It's been more than an hour!" I said looking at her past Ari.
"Sorry, geez miss prissy pants, hey, who's that guy?" she asked making no attempt to be polite.
"Nudge, this is my brother Ari. Who was just leaving." I said finally with a glare at him. It wasn't that I hated my brother, but the thing is, he chose Jeb over me, his one and only sister. I loved Ari, but I haven't seen him in YEARS so I didn't know how to react to him showing up out of the blue.
"Nah, I'll just sit on the couch and watch some t.v." he said.
"No, you won't. This isn't your house, it's my moms, so you can go and crawl back to Jeb for your report, I'm not going anywhere with you, especially when I don't know what your definition of 'Fun Day' is."
"Fun day- Day in which you have fun. Fine I won't sit here, I'll be at the park, come there when you are done." Ari said, walking off before I could have a sour remark.
"Ugh, alright come on Nudge, we have a room to clean." I said. We walked to my room and with much complaining, on my part that is, we got to work.
"You ought to get some pink in this room, it's too tomboy-ey." Nudge said to me with disgust on her face.
"Umm, hate to break it to ya sweetie, but I'm a tomboy, it makes sense for my room to be 'tomboy-ey'," I replied matter-of-factly.
"Still think your room needs pink." She said sticking her tongue out at me.
- Line break!-
We had a fun time even though it was cleaning, Nudge complaining every 15 seconds about how I didn't have enough girly things in my room, I didn't care though, I was just happy to have help with cleaning my room. It was so boring to clean it myself, so I was glad she was there.
After we finished Nudge went to sleep after an hour or so of talking, but I couldn't get to sleep so I got back on my laptop.
Maxisincharge12: Are you up?
Toothygrin22: yeah I couldn't sleep, u?
Maxisincharge12: Nope, the room is clean so we can go to the carnival on Sunday
Toothygrin22: :D, Nudge?
Maxisincharge12: you know it.
I fell asleep talking to him, I hope he didn't mind when I fell asleep mid type, and that's when Nudge found me. With his message up and magnified.
Toothygrin22: Good night sweetie, I love you.
Nudge shrieked and started jumping up and down.
"OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGZ! YOU AND FANG ARE TOGETHER! I HAVE TO CALL EVERYONE!" she said. My eyes widened and I looked at the computer screen. I saw the message and quickly shut the lid to the computer.
"Oh no, Nudge you can't tell anyone!" I said, but it was too late, Ella came running in as Nudge dialed Jamie's number.
Ooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhh hhh he** naw! Lol 'nother line break :D
Fang POV
After typing my last message to my, I'm guessing sleeping, Max, I closed my computer and fell asleep to the thought of her, even if that sounds really cheesy. I never thought that I would ever turn into a sap, I looked at other people and thought they looked crazy and stupid for all the things they did, and then I met Max, and I know we haven't known each other for long but I feel like I've known her for a lifetime.
(hope that turns into a quote :P JKJKJK)
I woke up to Iggy cooking, yes he was in my house cooking, because my mom and dad are never home and because he knows where the spare key is.
"'Sup man," he said.
"Not much, you?" I said casually.
"Jus' makin' breakfast. You want bacon?"
"Naw dip," I said.
"No you have dip, it's on the second shelf." I rolled my eyes at him and he snickered.
"So what are we going to do today?" he asked. I honestly didn't know, I didn't want to seem obsessed so I didn't mention Max and the rest of the gang, so I shrugged. I sat down at the table to eat my heavenly breakfast made by the Iggster.
I was wondering what the rest of the flock was doing when I heard my phone starting to buzz. I went to it and saw it was a message from max
Nudge Ella and Jamie know
Ok I know it's a cliffy and it's kinda short and that its stupid because I haven't updated in forever but I wanted the carnival to be in the next chapter and doing what I want to do won't work until that is finished. Hopefully this break I can write more but I don't know because, take a guess… if you guessed homework ding ding ding ding you are correct 10 points for you, if you guessed MATH homework ding ding ding ding ding ding 20 points plus the 10 you already have for homework with a grand total of 30 POINTS! *sigh* I hate school so much.
Ok and because I love these so much, answer these questions, with an opinion on this chappie plz, for an extra long chapter (plus some ideas for me)
What is Fangs reaction?
Will Fang tell the boys?
Will they attempt to keep it secret from others longer?
What song do you think they should duet next?
Should they make a band (or is that too cliché?)?
Will we meet Jeb?
Ok later guys!
Lilli
