thank you for overwhelming reviews! SOMEONE asked for a back story of why Tris hates Eric and Peter... I think that would be interesting to do so I will plan it and do a thing for that separately! And everyone wants fluff and I do too.. Don't get me wrong I love the fluff but I want to make sure its a good reason and it slowly turned over for them to fluff XD Now here you goo...
Tris POV, Next day.
I wake up by a loud thud off the bed, I rolled over and see its Christina's dog. Once he sees me he runs off and into the other parts of the house. I sit myself up and look around while rubbing the sleep out of my eyes. Then I spot Cristina, She looks wide awake!
"Morning!" She smiled and indicated to the clock, seeing my confused face. It was 11:00am, shit.
"Hey.. Umm when's the party?" She smiles and lands all the cloths on to the other side of the bed and that's where I see one of those Victoria Secrets lacy bras.
"3 hours guest will start to arrive." She replied.
"Why is this here?" I ask while dangling the bra and panties on my index finger.
"I was planning to play hardcore truth or dare.. And if you want to do all the dares be my guest, But you won't. I know you. So once you undress you have to look hot!" She says like its classified and I should've already known.
"Umm no-" she cuts me off
"Yes Tris! Tobias will be here and I know you like him.. I think everyone could realize I they had eyes!" She shoved the clothes on to me.
"Now go take a shower, put your hair in a towel, Get the dress, Bra, and panties on then come out here for me to make you pretty!" She demanded.
Tobias POV
I sit on a stool has I balance my lunch plate on my hands, currently Uriah and Zeke are dressing and I am waiting for them to come out for me to be able. Almost on command both of them come out of each of their rooms with a fancy tuck and red tie. Honestly this is the must mature the brothers looked since there Father's funeral.
"Your turn man" Zeke said, Stepping out to give me room as I walk past him and into the room. I close the door behind myself and take a quick shower, dry my hair, then get dressed in my own tucks. It is black and has a blue tie instead of red, like Zeke and Uriah's. I step outside and is greeted by Zeke and Uriah deciding on if they should be what they called; "Fashionably late" or "Fashionably early" I wake between them, with my presence they stop bickering.
"How about we go on time?" I suggest, hoping a they will agree.
"Fine.. Tobias I have to say I never seen you dress fancy!" Zeke said punching me playfully on the shoulder.
I don't respond but give a punch to hard to be real but not light enough that it is playful on the shoulder.
"Fine, Fine man let's go!" Zeke said, throwing his hands up in surrender.
"But stop by Party City for hair spray!" Uriah chipped in with a evil grin, oh great.
We all nodded in agreement to Uriah's suggestion and soon piled up on to our motorcycles and dashed into Main Street and towards Party City.
Tris POV, After getting Dressed.
I stand up once Christina was done putting makeup and doing my hair. I faced the mirror for the first time after seating in the chair for an hour while Christina did my stuff. I gasp in shock, I was pretty with the tight black dress.. Even if Caleb would have yelled at me and said I looked like a slut. He just doesn't get us Dauntless. Then my eye shadow had a Smokey type effect and red lip-stick. I also had black mascara and eyeliner. Then my blonde hair was in big curls in the ends.
"I love it, Christina! Thank you!" I smiled, I would've hugged her but she was busy doing her own makeup.
"Just happy you like a dress for once Tris!" She joked, still doing her makeup by the mirror.
I smiled and waited patiently on the bed until Christina which only took 30 minutes, That's pretty fast compared to me which took 2 hours.
"Now time to set the food out, decorate, and safety proof the place!" She smiled and ran out and I soon followed.
Tobias POV, 30 minutes later.
I park my motorcycle next to Zeke and Uriah, and the other partiers cars before following the brothers inside. The normal lights now had different color light bulbs like red, blue, green, yellow, pink, purple, and orange. The tables were already covered in empty and filled beer cans and sometimes dots of soda. I looked around until I spotted Tris. I think I gasped in shock. I don't know but she was wearing a dress... And more importantly she looked beautiful.
"Hey Tris!" shouted past the screaming music and ran to her.
"Hey!" She smiled, I caught her eye scanning me up and down and smirking in satisfaction.
"What?" I asked her.
"Your wearing a tuck, that's the first!" She that's the first.
I laughed and thought of something to say. And ended up with, "Well you're wearing a dress.. But you look beautiful."
She blushed and tried to hide it by looking down at the wooden ground. "Hey.. Tris I know you think you're not but you are."
She lifted up her head and smiled at that. "Thanks... Well I guess you look handsome" She teased.
I thought, She looked like dancing flames with her dress and makeup combined. And even without that she looked stunning. Yea, I do like he-. My thoughts were interrupted by a Christina coming beside Tris and saying...
"Come to the basement now, We are playing Truth Or Dare with others" She smiled and dashed off.
Tris had a expression, showing she already knew about this and was waiting for it.
"Lets go!" She laughed and dashed off with me following.
Need 35 reviews for Chapter five! I know I was gonna play truth or dare in this chapter but it was getting long and I planned for it going for one whole big chapter and not being split! I am working up some good dares and stuff. Oh yea, I mostly likely can't update till Sunday since I am going to my dads ( parents divorced ) and I don't wanna type this out on that but I may! Btw review, review, review! BTW please give me suggestions!
