Ok now this is where I got stuck on because I am not sure where to begin so I hope you have some opinions because this story will never get finished if I don't get out of my writers block and I would like to finish this story so I can move on with my life because I hate to know finish a story.

Chapter 4: the stories, the fight and the word

" ummm are you addressing us those names." Kuro said with wonder.

She looks at them in confusion. " why yes child those are ye names."

" umm I think you have us confused with some other people. Because we are defiantly not those names or people you are talking about." Kuro said crossing her arms.

" so ye are saying ye are not them but ye dress and look exactly like them." she said with confusion.

" listen old lady we are not them!" ash said with anger. Kuro but a hand in front of him.

" oh ash, come down we don't need you injuring the poor lady with your temper." Kuro said with a sigh.

" yes we don't need violence, especially since there is no real hospitals around here." Miro said in agreement. Ash growled.

" plus I think she is addressing our reincarnations." Sano said.

" did ye say reincarnations?" she said staring at them intently.

" yes we are looking for our reincarnations that look exactly like us but we haven't got a clue there names. I guess since you had addressed us to those names that those must be them." kuro said with a smile.

" ya we had come to find them to find ourselves even though we hadn't a clue what that means but we came to find them so we can go home to our own time." Shako said jumping on kuro's shoulder.

" I see, come we shall talk inside." The woman said leading them to a little hut to talk more about who they where and any questions everyone had.

The conversation seemed to go on forever but not a lot of information was told because they were afraid the time line would be corrupted. The conversation mostly resulted in details about their reincarnations and small details that weren't described because of the features as you know with ash and shako. The group from the future where amazed at all the stories she told them.

"wow so you are saying that are reincarnations are now trying to find this one called naraku that started this whole thing.' Kuro said laying on her stomach with her legs in the air.

" yes, and they are also looking for the shards of the jewel…"

" shikon no tama." They all said in union.

" ye know it." surprised by their sudden reply.

" ya but only from my grandmother's stories and of course our history books." Kuro said playing with her hair.

" so ye know that it is broken."

" oh ya, miss clutz reincarnation broke it." ash said leaning against the wall with his hands in his sleeves. Kuro stood up suddenly.

" don't blame me its not my fault! And don't call me a clutz stupid!" kuro said in his face.

" I am not blaming you I am only saying your rein what ever did it and that it just happened to past along to you! And don't call me stupid you bitch!" ash said with irriation.

Kuro turned and grabbed a knife in the corner. Miro and sano jumped up in front of her.

" what are you doing kuro are you nuts!" sano said.

" I swear I am going to kill him!" kuro said with rage.

" just try it if that old lady is right I cant die from a puny knife like that." ash huffed.

" oh just shut up ash! You are just pushing yourself deeper into a whole!" sano hissed.

" yes if we let her go you are not going to survive and don't come crying to us when she stabs you a thousand times." Miro said with anger.

" why are you such an idiot?" shako said with a sigh.

Ash growled. " if you don't be quiet I am going to punch you so hard your brains will fall out."

Shako pouted " you wouldn't really do that, would you ash."

" try me" ash hissed.

Kuro screamed in rage. " if you harm him I am going to knock you so hard that you will have amnesia!"

" oh dear ye just cant get along now can ye." Kaede said with a sigh pulling out a necklace.

" well you see lady kaede they don't really see eye to eye with one another. They have a hard time being near each other without fighting." Miro said with frustration.

" yes everytime they are in a room to gether they can do nothing but fight." sano said with a sigh.

" its just ash is so dense he cant agree with her at all. he hates being wrong and that drives kuro ballistic if only she could control him." Shako said shaking his head.

"I see I guess these will help now wont they." Kaede says showing them the beads.

" what are you going to do with those lady kaede." Shako said in wonder.

" pray and help kuro with her problem, but they might bring some agony to ash though." kaede said.

" hey I am up for it to see ash with some discipline I think he needs it." shako said with a smile.

Kaede said a few words and the beads glowed and went flying toward ash in separate directions. Each of them landed gracefully across his neck. Him and kuro looked at them in wonder.

" what the hell!" ash said pulling on the beads to come off.

" oh I am sorry ash but not even you can remove them." kaede said with a smile. " I think its time for you to experience what your reincarnation had to really go though. now kuro say a word to hold his spirit." She said turning to him.

" hold his spirit? Do you mean control him?!" kuro said with a smirk. Ash looked in fear.

" w .. hat ! come on kuro now don't get to hasty with it! you know you cant control me not in a million years." Ash said somewhat nervously because of the look in her eyes.

" oh I know" kuro said looking at his ears. " how about I use the same one as my reincarnation. She would be ."

" oh no you don't." ash said leaping at her. kuro moved slightly.

" sit." She said calmly walking away so proudly like she finally won a battle with confidence.

Ash grunted in pain as his face went full force into the wooden hut floor.

'wow that was so cool! Do it again kuro! Do it again!' shako said with a smile. Kuro walked over to shako, she patted his head.

' no I am sorry shako but I think that is enough until he does something stupid and don't worry that might be not long.' She said sitting down next to kaede. ' thanks kaede for the wonderful beads those will help a lot.'

'ye welcome child.'

'ya thanks for the burden, of having my face plastered to the ground!' ash growled from the big whole he made.

'oh now ash don't get so touchy you deserve it from all the times you wouldn't listen to kuro.' Miro said sitting down next to kuro.

'and should I mention all the punches to shako's head.' Sano chimed in.

'yes I do think you needed an attitude adjustment and to have you plastered hard to the ground is exactly what you needed.' Kuro smirked.

Ok now give me your opinions and make them honest and good because I am not sure where to go from here. Thanks

-phoenix