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Hope you guys enjoy the second chapter!
"Why don't we then?" Cinderkit mewed with a mischievous glint in her eyes.
Hawkkit opened his jaws to reply, "Okay!"
They were about to sneak off, when Featherkit interrupted.
"You can't!" She mewed shrilly, "Willowstorm told us to stay with them, plus I think they're trying to be nice!"
"We can explore ourselves if we want!" Cinderkit hissed. Who does she think she is?! Bossing us around like that!
"No you can't, I'll tell Willowstorm," Featherkit said, matter of factly.
Cinderkit shuddered at the thought of Willowstorm getting angry at them.
"Okay, fine, we'll stay!" Hawkkit muttered, clearly thinking the same thing as Cinderkit.
"Are you coming or not?!" Came Blossomkit's irritated mew.
"We're coming!" Featherkit mewed sweetly, as if the argument had never happened.
Cinderkit rolled her eyes and padded after her sister, still wishing she could explore herself.
"That's the apprentice's den" Dustkit pointed his tail towards a bramble thicket, "We'll be sleeping there in two moons," he added smugly.
As he finished speaking, a brown apprentice appeared at the entrance of the den.
"Hey Brownpaw!" Blossomkit meowed.
Brownpaw flicked his ears in reply.
"Watcha doing today?" Featherkit asked, as if Brownpaw was just an old friend.
"Leafblossom's taking me fishing," he grunted, as he padded towards the fresh-kill pile.
He sure is grumpy!
"Is he always like that?!" asked Cinderkit.
"Most of the time!" laughed Dustkit as he lead them towards a huge rock. It towered over the floor, creating a looming shadow.
"That's the leaders den," Blossomkit informed them, "Amberstar leaps on top of it to give Clan meetings,"
"Cool," Cinderkit meowed blandly, still wishing she could explore herself.
"That'll cheer you up," Dustkit whispered in her ear.
Cinderkit jumped, startled to hear a voice.
Cinderkit looked up to see where Dustkit was pointing to with his tail.
"Amberstar?!" Cinderkit squeaked.
"Yup, that's me!" Amberstar chuckled as she turned to face the kits. "You must be Willowstorm's kits," she said fondly.
"Yes," Hawkkit replied, clearly not fazed, "I'm Hawkkit, and those are my sisters Cinderkit and Featherkit,"
"Yes, I've heard," purred Amberstar, "Well, don't let me interrupt your tour, and remember to stay with Blossomkit and Dustkit!"
"Yes, Amberstar," Cinderkit trembled and backed away. Now she was glad she had listened to Featherkit and stayed. Not like I had and option anyways. Cinderkit quickly pushed the thought out of her mind.
Hope that wasn't too short! I have the next chapter written, I just need to edit it now! Thank you for reviewing! I honestly didn't expect a review so soon! Please continue any constructive criticism and just reviews to let me know you are enjoying it!
If you have any ideas on adventures for Cinderkit and her littermates, feel free to tell me!
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