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mockingjay47- This is an amazing story and I hope it's a fourtriss one :-)

Awwweee! Thanks! :D And as for the couple in this one, as River Song once said, "Spoiler". (Lol, if you understood this, then I love you!)

Guest- Awesome! This story is really interesting, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Yay! You like it! And I know it's interesting it is me who is writing this story is it not? Nahhh JK! I'm not that kind of person, maybe it's the mix of Amity and Abnegation in me to underestimate myself or maybe Tris's...attitude just rubbed onto me?

Guest- It's great so far. Ps Tobias is a bad ass name. ;)

Really? Awesome! And yes, Tobias is a bad ass name, anyone who disagrees will be shot-no- exterminated by a Dalek. (Lol, sorry, my friends and I are currently on a Netflix Rewatch New Who-athon. Currently, I'm on Season 3 and may I just say, TEN! STOP TALKING ABOUT ROSEEEE! But I ship you with her anyways)

hugabunny12- fourtris is the best because they have so much chemistry and they are litterlly ment to be.

IKR?!

hugabunny12- FOURTRIS is the best!

Hey, you seem familiar ;P.

wolflover- Maybe...but it can't be proved! Maybe I called him Four until the middle of the second book...hehe Tris on peace serum. I laughed hysterically at that! Oooh! Imagine a Tobias P.O.V of the scene! Anyway...I know. There used to be only FourTris stories out there. Now...I don't know. Anyway! I loved the chapter! Aimee-or Amee?-transferred to Erudite! And after the tattoos too! Dun dun dun. Poor people! Anyway-again-I hope you update soon!

Me too! It's like, Tris, all dark and full of grief- is talking to Tobias about being mean! And when I first typed chapter 1, I put Amee, but I ment to put Aimee ya know like Amy, but I guess accidents happen. So now I try to pronounce it Amee, like Ahhh-meee, but sometimes I just give up and say Aimee.

mileyismyhorse- Woohooo I love Skillet! But I love Avenged Sevenfold mooorre!

I've never heard of that band, but I'll go check it out!

triseat0n- Yes! I did call him four for a few chapters! But now to me he's only Tobias. :)

Yup! I think almost everyone did the same, because, the only other time I heard the name Tobias...I don't remember.

DauntlessProdigy4Life- AHHHH - AMEE TRANSFERRED! Love it. Update soon! :D will Fourtris be coming soon?

AHHHH- THANKS FOR REVIEWING! Like I said in the first review reply, "Spoilers"


Chapter 4: The Blue-Eyed Stiff

Tris POV

Erudite. Erudite. Erudite.

I always found it funny how you could be so right but so wrong at the exact same time. Like when you take a test and you're positive you got most the answers right, but there's that one question that you have absolutely no idea what the answer is and you just turn in your test saying, 'It's okay, I'll still get a 97, not shabby' and when you get your test back it turns out to be a 72. That's how feel about Amee's transfer.

I was never Amee's partner-in-crime, hell, we barely even spoke a couple sentences to each other. But, I respected her and though she would make a good Dauntless. Guess I was wrong. I always knew that Amee never actually fit in with the rest of us. She would be the sucked into hidden shadow and never put one foot in front of the other to escape the shadow that. That was even a nickname that Shauna gave her when we were 12; The Hidden Shadow. But I never expected her to transfer. I try to imagine Amee; a ginger haired, amber eyed, tall, curvy girl wearing Erudite blue and fake glasses instead of Dauntless black and piercings. I shudder at the thought and Uriah wraps his long arm around me.

I look out door of the transfer train cart, and stare at each tree, each stone, and each cloud in the sky until my eyes get all watery from the wind blowing in my face and I'm forced to bring my neck and face back into the train.

"Are you all right?" Uriah tilts his head an inch, it's the first time he's opened his mouth since the Choosing Ceremony.

"Yeah, good and jolly" I reply, distinctly.

Uriah sighs and moves his arm away from me and curls up into a ball, looking at the ground. Unlike me, Uriah actually spoke more than 3 sentences to Amee, so even if Zeke didn't transfer, Amee did.

I decide to take a peek at this year's Dauntless initiates. My blue-gray eyes roam the train cart, to see plenty of different colors; black, black and white, red and yellow, and one splosh of blue, but no gray. I can't say I'm not surprised, there hasn't been an Abnegation transfer in decades. (Remember, Four's in the other car with Tori and Amar) Zeke and Shauna are huddled in a corner together, holding hands. Marlene and Lauren are mingling with the other initiates, and Lynn is probably somewhere in the mix of colors, brooding.

My head starts to pound, muffled by so many different thoughts and all I want to do is lay down on my fluffy, warm bed in the Dauntless Compound. But, sadly, that isn't an option so I settle for throwing my head back and resting my poor skull onto Uriah's shoulder. And almost as if it were a natural instinct, he puts his long arm around me.

"I love you, you know. More than any of these other pansycakes." He says, grinning at me.

"Really?" I question him. I never thought anybody would actually love me, unless they were forced to, because of my horrible facial features and height.

"Really" He confirms.

"Always?"

"Always."

"Okay" I give him a toothy grin.

"Okay"

And then I shut my eyes and hope the darkness will swallow me in, because I now know that I will always be loved by Uriah Pedrad.


"They're jumping!"

I groggily open my eyes to see chocolate brown eyes staring deep into my own.

"'Morning sleepy head. They're jumping!" Uriah exclaims, like a three year old when they arrive to the candy shop for the very first time.

"Really?" I say sarcastically "As if I hadn't heard you the first time!"

Uriah ignores my little comment and pulls me to my feet, practically dragging me towards the door because apparently we moved.

"C'mon. Let's show these bastards who's boss! Or for a better term of vocabulary, let's show these bastards who's dauntless!" Uriah says,

I let out a chuckle and properly walk to the door, shoving people left and right, it goes to a success, until I bump into a blue-clad boy with long, dark hair.

"Watch it" He growls, shoving me lightly.

I scowl at him and continue my way to the front, because, somehow, I lost Uriah and I really don't feel like getting into a fight today. And between myself and body figure, the Nose would probably win. Unlike Amee who would've punched him right when that Nose opened his mouth...

Eventually I do get to the front, my small body having the advantage of squeezing through small spaces and I meet up with Uriah.

"Ready?" He asks, taking a hold of my small hand.

"Ready" I nod at him.

"Is this a new thing of yours? Repeating everything I say?" And we jump.

Uriah lands perfectly on his feet and stands up, brushing invisible dust off his jeans. I, on the other hand, tumble and roll and when I do manage to come to a halt, I'm panting and coughing while Uriah laughs and helps me to my feet...again.

"Really?"

"Really"

"Oh don't start this again" And we share a laugh.

We head off to the stairs near the ledge where the initiates are supposed to jump because we aren't allowed to jump until we reach 16 and are initiates. But Uriah, Lynn, Marlene, and I always secretly watch who the jumpers are, first to last. Speaking of Lynn and Marlene...

"Hey guys" Marlene breathlessly pants, running towards us.

I give Marlene and acknowledging nod and Lynn a small smile.

"Hello" Lynn says slowly and carefully, also giving a small nod.

"Mar! Lynn!" Uriah shouts giving each of them a bear hug. Lynn rolls her eyes and hugs Uriah back, but Marlene hugs him back like it's been years since she last saw me and I feel projectile jealousy vomit rising up my throat.

"That's enough" I snap at the two of them and they immediately break apart, blushing.

We start going down the stairs in an awkward sclience and I twine Uriah's fingers with mine.

"Well well well," Uriah smirks

"Oh don't start" I mumble

"I didn't think you were the jealous type"

"Oh really?" I look him amused.

"Seriously, you, Tris Prior, need to stop that." Uriah looks at me with mock seriousness.

"And if I don't?" I tease a sly smile on my face.

"Then I'm gonna have to teach you a lesson," Uriah growls and kisses my cheek "Because I think you are in desperate-" Uriah get cut off by Lynn butting in.

"Oh will you two stop it," Lynn hisses "I think I'm getting a migraine just from listening to your guys horrible flirting"

"Like you could do better" Uriah says, poking Lynn on the arm and she grabs Uriah's hand and twists it around. Lynn opens her mouth to say something, but now she gets cut off by Marlene butting in.

"We're here," Marlene says "And just by the looks of it, we're ready for the last jumper."

It's true. All the initiates are lined, like every year, from first jumper to last jumper and somehow, Zeke is at the very front of the line. First jumper I presume. Uriah looks so proud of his older brother and I can't blame him. I would feel the same if Caleb was first jumper. Uriah waves and whispers shouts to him, "Zeke! Zeke!" from our little hiding spot which is a pile of boxes that haven't moved for God knows how long. When Zeke never sees him Uriah gives up and rolls his eyes muttering, "Deaf idiot" and shakes his head. I even stiffle a chuckle just for him.

"I wonder what poor pansycake has to be last jumper" Uriah says, looking at the three of us.

"Who knows," Marlene starts "Probably some sorry, innocent, new piece of fresh-kill for the factionless"

And right when Marlene finishes her sentence, a loud SNAP was heard behind us and the four of us zip around and almost gasp in shock at him.

'He' is the young man that is currently rolling off the net with some help from Max...wearing gray. I can't hear what he says to the Stiff, but I kmow it's Dauntless enough to make him flinch. And when the other initiates and Max start to walk toward the tunnel, the Stiff stays a moment to look around the room like he's analyzing it. But as fate somehow catches us, the Stiff catches my eye.

To be honest, saying that he isn't attractive has to be the lie of the century. I stare at his dark blue eyes and take in as much of him as I can. His olive skin, hooked nose, full lower lip and spare upper lip, and his eyes. His dark blue eyes that shine like the midnight sky.

We stare at each other for about 30 more seconds until Amar comes crashing down onto the net and we break contact to look at him. When Amar starts to jump down the net, the Stiff looks at me one more time before running off to his fellow initiates, leaving me bewildered and bemused with my emotions.

"Well that was quite at surprised, wasn't it?" Uriah croaks with a twinkle in his eye.

And I say the only word I could think of at the moment.

"Really?"


A/N: Hello my fellow reader! I'm so very sorry that I don't have any good excuse for not updating sooner other than two words...Doctor Who-athon. Yeah...I know. Also, I just started reading TFIOS and I though Uriah and Tris deserve they're very own word like 'Okay'. And honestly, I hate this chapter so please bear with me on this one... Bleh. I don't know what to say. There's nothing much to say...

QOTC: Have you guys seen Insurgent? If show, how was is?

AOTC: I atually haven't. I've heard many reviews saying that's it's worse than Divergent and that it's nothing like the book, so I've been holding off on it.

I think that's it! Hope you guys atually like and enjoy my story!

-Mel