LWF

Hello everyone! Just have to thank you all for the lovely reviews! *throws cookies at those who reviewed* And I really enjoyed getting one of the reviews. ANNNNNNDDDD!

I CAN'T BELIEVE IT TOOK ME SO LONG TO UPDATE!!!!!! I'll give you my excuses at the end of the so I can write this faster!!!! Now, back to the reviews!!

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It made me happy that someone would take the extra time to write such a long review for my story! Though most of the stuff they mentioned, I did already know, but I still appreciate it. It means that they really care about my story and is really reading it and wants to help me make this story the best it can be!^^ There was only one thing I didn't really agree with. I don't think that Luffy wouldn't care if he broke a girls heart. He would probably feel bad about it for making someone sad. Because, he might not have cared when he beats the crap out of some bad guy, the bad guy probably did something to deserve it. But if he had hurt someone whos only problem was that they liked Luffy and wanted to be with him(even if they were annoying) he would probably feel guilty.(I know I would) I don't think that Luffy is THAT dense. xD

Omega-Supreme:

thanks! And I'll make sure Sanji gets started on those cookies ASAP!!

Hedgehog B. Rebecca:

thank you! I really appreciate it!(And don't worry, I'm also really hyper most of the time too! XP)

Yeah, I don't own One Piece.......real shocker there. I guess I can only dream......–sigh–

-------Last time on LWF------

"LUFFY!!!" Fiona squealed as she began to throw the horribly cooked meat into his face. "Look! I made you breakfast!!"

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Luffy did the only thing he could think of, run and scream. "EVERYBODY RUNNN!! FOLLOW ME!!"

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"Ugh....where am I?" Luffy groaned.

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"Nami? Are you awake?" Pain wrenched through my body as everything came back to me. The coin, the fall, Luffy!

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Nami's face flushed as she realized what she had thought was cologne(and was so content to sniff xDDDD).....WAS HER CAPTAIN?!?!?!?!

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"I wonder what the others are doing." the two seemed to think at the same time.

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------currently------

Luffy and Nami had been walking for what seemed like an eternity.

"How high does this freaking staircase go?!" Nami thought. Luffy sighed. He was extremely bored. He then began to count how many steps he had gone up.

"1, 2, 3, 4, 5,....10,.....100,...200,......uuhhhhhhh.....Dang-it! I lost count! I hope the others are faring better than we are."

------with the others------

"Ugh...how long is this hallway?!" Usopp groaned, "It feels like my feet are about to fall off and explode! In fact, this one time..." Usopp began one of his many outrageous tales as Chopper listened intently. Eventually, to Choppers dismay,(and the others joy) his tall tale had finally ended. A heavy silence ensued.

Chopper was the first to speak up. "I hope we find them soon."

"Uh-huh." was the only reply the poor little reindeer was rewarded with.

Soon, the group had decided to sit down for a little while to rest their weary feet. Chopper immediately plopped down on his rear and leaned his back against the wall. Suddenly, the area around them disappeared; and they found themselves sliding down a long ramp to who-knows-where. (I do!!!! I know where!!!xD)

------Franky, Brook, Robin------

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!"

"Hm?" Robin looked up from her book.

"What is it Franky?"

"I think I hear something." Robin closed her eyes and listened.....

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!"

"You're right! I hope the others are okay! That scream sounds familiar."

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!" It was getting louder. Suddenly, part of the wall near the entrance slid upwards, as Chopper and the others flew straight out of it.

"Ch-Chopper? Sanji? Zoro? Usopp?!" Franky was very surprised, "What happened?! Why are all of you here?! I thought that you were in the ruins! And where's Nami and Luffy?!"

"We were! But when I leaned on one of the walls, I think I set off a trap and it returned us here! And Nami and Luffy went missing!"

"I hope they're okay. With traps like that, it's best for them to stay together."

"Then let's get in there so I can protect my Nami-chan!!!" Sanji turned to enter the ruins again; Only to find that it had collapsed!

"The only question is, is how are we supposed to get back in ero-cook?!"

"NOOO! MY NAMI-CHAN IS TRAPPED!!!" (You can imagine just how pathetic he looked right now.....-_-' Let's just get baCK TO Luffy and Nami...)

------Luffy Nami------

Luffy and Nami were still walking up the steps. Nami had decided to rest her eyes for a little bit as Luffy continued to trudge up the steps.

"Hey Nami!" Luffy sounded excited, "I think I see the exit!"

Namis eyes shot open. "Really?!"

"Yeah!" Nami strained her eyes in the darkness. It was very faint, but she could see a small streak of light coming from up ahead

Luffy's pace sped up. The light was becoming closer and brighter. Now maybe they could finally get out of here! As the two reached the light, the door in front of them immediately slipped away to reveal the entrance to a large labyrinth. There were lighted torches along the walls. Nami was beginning to worry. Whoever had lit those torches might not be very happy that they were trespassing in their ruins.

------Nami POV------

"Luffy."

"Yeah?"

"Let's hurry up and find a way out of here. I don't think this place is safe."

"Okay. But let's rest for a bit. My legs are really tired!" Oh yeah. He did carry me up all those stairs. Any normal human probably would have had trouble without having to carry someone. I still can't believe how he's still able to surprise me today. But if he didn't, then I guess he just wouldn't be Luffy.

"Okay. But not for too long! We still need to find the others!" I sighed. Just how did we get into this mess again? Oh yeah! We were running away from Fiona! Man. That seems to be so far away now. I'm gonna have to teach that girl a lesson the next time I see her! I sighed again.

"Nami?"

"What Luffy?"

"Why do you keep sighing?"

"Because I want out of here Luffy."

"Oh."

-STOMP- -STOMP- -STOMP-

------Normal POV------

"W-what was that?! Luffy?!"

-STOMP- -STOMP- -STOMP-

"I-I have no clue!"

"GRAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!"

"EEEEEEEEEEEEEEKKK!!!!" Nami screamed as the wall in front of them was destroyed and a huge monster appeared.

"NAMI!" Luffy scooped up Nami bridal style as she threw her arms around his neck and ran as fast and as far away from the monster they could get.

Luffy was running as fast as he could through the winding maze. Left, right, right, left. They had no clue where they were going; or where they would end up, but it was better than staying and fighting with that huge monster back there.

"GRAAAAHHH!! WHO DARE TRESPASSES IN MY RUINS?!?!

"EEEEEEKKK! GO FASTER LUFFY!!! FASTER!!!! AAAAAHHHH!!" Nami tightened her grasp on Luffy's neck. They continued running until they had somehow reached an exit. As they rushed through, the monster had finally caught up to them. They had ended up in a huge room.

It was a dead end; no where to run, no where to hide. Who knows how they were going to get out of this one. (I do! I do! xD)

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Yay! Next chappie! And again, thanks so much for the reviews! I enjoy each and every one of them!

Luffy: Uh-huh! Can I have some meat?

Everyone(except Luffy): –sweatdrops–

Me: Read and review ppl! This time I'll give you meat!

Luffy: Can I review!?!?!

Me: No Luffy. No you can't.

Luffy: Why not?!

Me: You're a character. You're not allowed to. And now for my excuses!!

1) My ACT was post-poned because of the cast so I've been studying like a maniac. I really shouldn't be typing this now, but oh well!

2)I've also had to study like a maniac for semester exams. TT_TT

3) The teachers were evil and gave everyone like, THREE end of year projects that count for a large portion of your grade.

4) My cat clawed up one of my projects so I had to re-do THE ENTIRE THING! TT_TTI almost strangled that dang cat too cause it was the day before it was due!

The end of my school year this year has been complete hell. *twitches* at least it's summer and I'll be able to update this more!! YAY!! ^^