Title: Bey City Academy
Author: sky dragon slayer
Genre:
Rating: T (actually I'm not sure. I'm probably going to make it M since any good high school movie is rated R.)
Summary: This is Bey City Academy where beyblading is used to help evaluate students, and they are ready for senior year. I stink at summaries r&r!
The apartment the next day was pretty quiet. Kai got up and left sometime early in the morning, leaving everything in the apartment off, still and quiet; not a thing was stirring except his roommate Tyson who was snoring in his room. Like any normal person, or at least by his logic, Tyson did what he always did on Saturdays and slept in, way in. He tossed and turned in his bed snoring up a storm, and kept sleeping until he turned and tossed himself right off the bed. Rubbing the spot on his head where he fell, Tyson pulled himself up off the floor. He yawned and stretched himself out before looking over at the clock.
"Twelve thirty, it's so…early…" He said through a yawn. He shook it off and figured if he was up already, he might as well stay up and walked out of his room. In the living room Tyson saw everything was off, the TV, the radio, it was like no one else was here.
"Guess Kai already woke up and left. How early does he wake up anyway? It's not normal." He grumbled as he looked around the room and discovered his cell phone on the kitchen counter charging.
"Oh that's where I put it." He mumbled as he reached for it and pulled it free from the chord. He pushed a button on it and found that he had a few messages.
"Why is Hiro texting me…ugh delete." With a tap of the screen he deleted the few messages his older brother, Hiro had sent him. Tyson figured it was the usual generic messages he got from his brother with whom he hadn't really spoken with often. Things like 'what's up' 'how are you' and things of that nature that Tyson deemed unimportant and decided to rid his phone's memory of. Then it hit him.
"Oh that's right! I need to call Hilary." He remembered what his new neighbor Julia had instructed him to do the day before and tapped on his phone until he sent a call through to his friend Hilary.
Hilary meanwhile was out and about like everyone else was on a Saturday afternoon, doing some harmless window shopping with her friends Mariah and Julia. They were admiring a dress in the window of a boutique, dreaming of buying it and making each other jealous like every girl dreams of when Hilary felt her cell phone vibrate in her jeans' pocket.
"Hello." She cheerfully answered while her friends stopped and waited for her to finish. On the other end she heard an incessant yawning and that was all she needed to know who was calling.
"What Tyson?" She asked rolling her eyes while back in his apartment, Tyson was preparing himself some cereal.
"Hey Hill, um Julia came by my place yesterday and said I should call you about some party later...?" Hilary's eyes widened slightly as she remembered 'the plan'.
"Oh yeah, I can text you the address; the place is like a ten minute car ride from the school campus." She explained while Tyson did some scratching on the other end.
"All right cool, but can I ask you something?" He asked as he searched his room for his trademark baseball cap.
"Uh, okay shoot." Hilary was curious to know; Tyson's questions usually were a little out of the ordinary.
"Is Julia into Kai or something? I mean yesterday she came by and insisted that I bring him to this party; am I right, because I usually catch on to these kinds of things." Hilary's eyes widened again and her face became a little red. She darted her eyes at Julia and then back down at the ground.
"Umm…I'll text you later bye." She said quickly before hanging up and ending the conversation with Tyson who held the phone in front of his face when the call ended unexpectedly on him.
"Girls are so weird." He said to himself as he took a bite of leftover pizza and a scoop of cereal one after the other before belching real loud.
"Whew, that was a close one." Hilary closed her phone and put it back in her pocket.
"Who was that?" Mariah observed Hilary's nervous movements during the phone call. Hilary turned to her other friend that was there with her.
"Tyson; what did you tell him yesterday Julia?" She asked walking up to her and Mariah.
"Just about the party and to bring Kai since he's new and can meet more people, why?" Julia shrugged, thinking nothing of her brief conversation with Tyson yesterday.
"Well, Tyson thinks you like Kai and he asked me, but I didn't answer." Hilary explained. Julia raised an eyebrow and folded her arms.
"Oh… w-wonder where he got that from." She said looking down at her polished toes and crinkling them in her sandals, hiding a small smile. All the while Mariah was growing impatient with the stand still that was taking place in front of her with Julia and Hilary.
"Who cares, come on. Are we getting lunch or not, I haven't eaten all day!" Mariah complained. Her friends dragged her out of bed to get their nails done and never had the chance to even poor herself some cereal or grab a cup of coffee or tea. She grabbed Julia's shoulder and tugged her along while the one being pulled frantically reached out and wrapped her fingers around Hilary's hand and pulled her causing a brief stumble into each other.
"Ah, my nails; guess I'm wearing closed shoes tonight." The one who initiated the momentary pile up moaned at her slightly scuffed up toes. The other two giggled as they continued to walk away, leaving Mariah to catch up to them.
Meanwhile in a clearing, near the shore, there stood a tree. Tall and mighty, very old, it housed various squirrels passing by, nesting birds, and a few ants who climbed up and down looking for food; but none were of any concern to what lied under the tree, covered in the shade and feeling the breeze from the nearby bay and completely at peace.
Kai lied down in the shade enjoying the surprisingly peacefulness the nearby park had to offer. No screaming kids, tee-ball games, or loud and obnoxious community functions to bother him, Kai remained still and shut his eyes to take a moment for himself until he heard footsteps that only grew louder and louder until they came to a stop.
"Excuse me…" He heard a male voice pant and opened his eyes to find a somewhat familiar face covered in a thin layer of sweat and a few strands of his black hair, as he dangled a pair of very familiar keys.
"Did you drop these?" The newcomer said again. Kai slowly rose up from the ground and dusted himself off.
"Yeah I did." He said snatching the keys from the passer by. "Thanks."
"I'm sorry I couldn't help but notice the tag on the keys; you're my friend Tyson's new roommate." Kai tilted his head curiously waiting for the guy in front of him to continue.
"Oh, I'm Ray by the way, and is it safe to assume that you're Kai?" Ray introduced himself stretching out a hand. Kai looked at the outstretched hand for a second.
"Yeah." He replied and took Ray's offer and shook hands. "Going for a run I'm guessing…?" Kai asked noticing the attire Ray was in; shorts, sleeve-less tee and his iPod strapped to his arm.
"Huh, oh yeah; it looks like you've already did the same." Ray noted Kai had a very similar outfit on.
"Yeah, not so long ago…" Kai said looking around the landscape. "Did you hear about a party tonight?" He asked sort of out of the blue but Ray didn't mind.
"Uh yeah actually I did. My girlfriend told me after she heard from her friends." Ray answered. Kai looked at Ray curiously.
Maybe he knows… Kai crossed his arms before speaking again.
"Hey can I ask you something?"
"Are you ready yet, you're like a woman!" came the complaint of Max who knocked on the bathroom door of his friend Tyson's apartment, who was still inside getting ready for the party.
"Good things take time buddy." Tyson joked on the other side of the door. Kai meanwhile sat on the couch, growing impatient and rolling his eyes.
"Ugh, I'm waiting outside before he stinks up the place." He sighed as he got up and left the room, leaving Max alone, waiting for Tyson. That wait of his took another ten minutes before he heard the door knob click and saw Tyson finally step out of the bathroom.
"What took you so long, you didn't even do anything!" Max complained even louder than he did before.
"Well mixing breakfast and dinner together wasn't the best idea I've had today." Tyson protested, still drying off his hands.
"You never have a good idea." Argued Max, who began to walk out of the apartment.
"Whatever come on…uh, where's Kai?" Tyson followed before he noticed the absence of his roommate.
"He got tired of waiting and left without us."
"Really?!"
"No not really, he's downstairs come on." Max got to the door and waved Tyson over who grabbed his key and walked out before locking the door behind him. They stepped outside but didn't see Kai.
"Where is he, I thought he was out here." Max scratched his head and looked around the street.
"Well maybe he's…" Tyson began when all of a sudden a jet black convertible pulled up in front of the building.
"Get in losers." They heard Kai call out before he revved the engine loudly. Tyson and Max's jaws dropped.
"Okay, who'd ya borrow this from?" Tyson asked as he scanned the car that looked way too nice for a high school kid to own. Kai smirked and revved the engine again.
"Get in before I leave you here." Tyson and Max looked at each other and smiled widely before hopping in.
"Give me the address." Kai held out his hand that Tyson blinked at for a second or two before he realized what Kai wanted and opened his phone to the text Hilary sent him earlier and handed it to Kai who punched in the info on his on-board navigation system and they were quickly on their way as Kai began driving.
"Hey Max, do you know where Ray is? I tried calling but I never got an answer." Tyson looked behind into the back seat towards Max who was playing with the center console, enjoying the luxuries of Kai's car.
"He's with Kenny. He has to get Mariah, Hilary and that Matilda girl then he's meeting us there." Max explained while looking through his phone to second check his information.
"So why's he with Kenny?" Tyson asked again.
"Hey Ray needs some testosterone in there." Max explained while Tyson chuckled.
"Max, a moment for our fallen comrade..." Tyson said before he and Max snapped their wrists making a whipping sound with their mouths to joke that Ray was in fact whipped by Mariah.
"Is he really?" Kai asked while looking at the road.
"No, Mariah's not bad at all. Ray just folds when she asks him to do something." Max said.
"Girls man…" Tyson shook his head as Kai made a turn.
"Yep." The driver said quietly to himself.
Ray and Kenny stood in front of the door to Mariah and Hilary's dorm when the prior reached his hand out and knocked. When his hand made contact with the door, it opened slowly to reveal a mess of clothes sprawled out on what he and Kenny assumed to be Hilary's bed since it was so messy to even tell, despite the number of times Ray had been there.
They both stepped in but as soon as both of Kenny's feet were in the room a hair brush came flying towards them and crashed, hitting the wall next to Kenny's head. Startled, the two guys looked over to where the brush came from and found Hilary, with one foot out of the bathroom.
"It's broken." She growled, scaring the guys even more before turning back into the bathroom when Mariah stepped out. She was wearing a pink blouse and white shorts with her hair down for a change.
"Don't you look nice?" Ray complemented his girlfriend as she walked up and gave him a peck on the cheek.
"Um, what's with Hilary? Isn't she stressing out a little too much over this party?" Kenny asked but was scared senseless when Hilary poked her head out of the bathroom and gave the poor boy an evil stare.
"Let me explain Kenny, you see…" Mariah started before she quietly explained Hilary's 'plan' for the night she concocted with Julia the day before; Ray looked away when he heard Mariah explain while Kenny simply nodded.
"So where's Matilda? She's supposed to be here too right?" Ray asked again.
"Well, why don't you go ask Raul?" Mariah answered again with a question of her own.
"Wait Raul, you mean Julia's brother, Raul?" Ray asked, a bit surprised at the news. Mariah nodded.
"Yep, but to be honest I saw it coming, although Julia still doesn't know." Ray scratched his head. Just then Hilary stepped out. She was in a white skirt and teal blouse.
"Oh you look good Hil!" Mariah cheered when she saw her friend step out, and she was right, Hilary looked very cute. The other two nodded in agreement but they just really wanted to get out of there.
Once they arrived, Ray, Kenny, Mariah, and Hilary took a look around the rented out night club that served as the venue for the party and even they had to admit that kid Enrique really knew how to throw a party. Even though not everyone in the senior class was there, as was expected, the place was still pretty crowded.
"Finally you're here!" Ray heard a familiar voice call out and looked over to find Tyson and Max walking over to him.
"Hey, when did you get here?" He asked the two and noticed something else about them.
"Where did you get those? You're not old enough to drink." Kenny said it for Ray as he spotted the beer bottles as well. Max and Tyson smirked.
"The bar over there..." Max pointed over to the far side of the club to the bar that several others were taking advantage of.
"This is awesome; they didn't card us or anything." Tyson cheered as he took a swig of his drink before noticing the rest that came with Ray and Kenny. He greeted Mariah and Hilary, who looked a little nervous and he decided to walk over to her.
"Hey Hil, what's up? You look on edge or something." He asked her as she looked around in every other direction.
"Do I; oh well, hey have you seen Julia around?" She didn't seem to pay him too much attention as she continued to look. Tyson looked at her a little confused, and extended a hand out.
"She's over there I think." He pointed over to a corner of the room and finally got her attention briefly.
"Hey you look nice…" he said before she walked away from him and towards where he pointed her, without giving any notice. Tyson turned to Mariah and the others and pointed where Hilary had walked off.
"Oh right, you don't know." The pink haired girl smiled and was about to lean in to tell Tyson about Hilary's agenda for the evening when she felt Ray's hand on her shoulder, stopping her.
"About that Mariah, I…" He began, but he couldn't bring himself to say it.
"What is it Ray?" She tilted her head and held the hand he placed on her. He looked down and shook his head.
"Never mind, let's go find someplace to sit." He suggested, leading her and the rest of the small group of friends to the nearest open seats he could find.
Hilary meanwhile walked over where Tyson had directed her but when she arrived found no trace of Julia.
"Oh, Mariam hey, where's Julia?" She asked, finding her team captain sitting in a booth.
"Getting some drinks, as for me, well look over there." The bluenette nodded her head, signaling Hilary to turn around and when she did, she found the younger twin of her friend Julia, Raul with her other friend Matilda sitting together at another table, talking laughing and holding hands.
"Wow, does Julia know about that?" Hilary turned back to Mariam.
"I don't know but I hope she doesn't." Mariam shrugged and shifted in her seat to allow Hilary to climb in.
"Wait, why?" Hilary raised an eyebrow at Mariam as she stood in front of the table.
"Because it'd be soooo funny when she does." The blue haired girl explained since she and Hilary both had an idea of how Julia would react to her little brother of two minutes trying to court one of her best friends. The shouting and complaining that would surely ensue.
"What would be funny?" The fun stopped as they heard Julia ask as she walked up to the table with two glasses in hand. Mariam and Hilary looked at each other and stuttered.
"Uh, uh nothing Julia…" Hilary stammered.
"My brother and Matilda…?" She guessed as she surprised the other two clearly as the both went wide eyed.
"B-but how did you…?" Mariam spat; nobody had said anything about Raul asking Mathilda out, at least not to Julia, so how did she know?
"We're twins; we know everything about each other. I thought that was obvious." She said bluntly as she placed the drinks down on the table with Mariam taking one for herself.
"Oh, well…how long have you two been here?" Hilary asked them both; Mariam took another sip of her drink and Julia craned her neck above the crowd.
"About ten minutes, and Hilary…" Julia said in a sing-song tone, grabbing her friend's shoulders to turn her around. "Look who I just found…" She turned Hilary around but it took the latter a few seconds to get her eyes to focus on what she was supposed to be looking at. It was Kai leaning against the wall next to Tala, talking his ear off about something Kai didn't find too interesting as he took a swig of the beer in his hand.
"So, are you going to up to him? He looks like he needs some help over there." Julia asked with Hilary turning back around.
"I-I don't know, um look Julia I…" She mumbled. Julia leaned in closer.
"I said to relax! Look if you're too nervous to go up to him, then I'll go get him for you." She stormed off, past Hilary who tried her best to stop Julia, but to no avail.
The two-toned brunette walked past a few huddles of people to get to her destination. Kai stood against the wall, arms crossed, eyes shut, trying to drown out the progressively annoying Tala who was complaining about his roommate, or at least he thought so, he wasn't paying any real attention; but that's when he opened his eyes to find a pleasant surprise.
"So, that's why you shou…hey!" Kai heard Tala bark at him when he walked away from the one way conversation and towards the approaching Julia.
"Hey, Kai!" He heard her call out his name and walked up to her.
"Julia…" He said bearing the same smirk she saw in class the previous day. That was the second time she had seen him smile.
"Kai listen can you…" She began, turning her head to find Hilary sitting at the table with Mariam talking about something, fidgeting her fingers, reminding Julia of her mission.
"Hang on for a second…" Kai cut her off to turn back to Tala. "Hey Tala, before I go, promise me you'll get that stick out of your ass." He said, leaving Tala dumbfounded before turning back to Julia.
"What's that about?" Julia asked raising an eyebrow at the guy in front of her. With her heels on, she was just about the same height as him so looking him in the eye was a little easier.
"Nothing, that guy is just wound up tight. Now, you wanted to ask me something?" He looked over at her, making eye contact. They both stopped moving for a brief second until Julia spoke up.
"Oh right, let's sit down somewhere." She said, taking the lead heading back to her booth to set 'the plan' in motion.
"Hey Ray…?" Mariah looked up at her boyfriend as he ordered a couple of drinks from the bar.
"What's up?" He asked with his usual smile.
"What did you want to tell me earlier, when we came here?" She inquired. Ray instinctively gulped.
"Hmm, oh nothing…hey did you see Kevin around?" He brushed it off the best he could but Mariah knew him way to well to let him off the hook.
"Ray…!" She raised her voice, knowing he was trying to change the subject.
"…Okay, I didn't want to say anything earlier but, I think that Hilary's not gonna have such a good night." Ray sighed and said with concern draped on his face.
"What makes you say that Ray?"
"Where did they go? I just left them…" Julia looked at the empty booth she had walked over from earlier with two empty glasses on the table and handbags on the seats.
"Something wrong?" Kai walked up behind her and looked over her shoulder. Julia shook her head and stepped forward.
"I just left my friends here, I wonder where they went. Whatever, come on sit down." Julia shrugged as she took a seat with Kai following as they sat across from each other.
"So how are you liking the new school so far Kai?" Julia decided to initiate small talk in order to kill time until Hilary got back. Lucky for her, Kai played along.
"So far so good, I'm trying to decide if math or writing is my favorite class." Kai answered before taking another sip of his beer.
"Math, really? Because I caught you sleeping for a good five minutes yesterday." Julia raised a brow at the young man sitting in front of her. Kai smirked in response as Julia let out a giggle. He did it again.
"That's why I like it." He continued while Julia picked the other glass she left on the table and found it to be empty. After hearing a low grumble from Julia who put the empty glass back on the table Kai sat back in his seat.
"So which of your friends are you trying to pawn me off to?" He asked crossing his arms. Damn he was good, catching on to the true nature behind the idle chit chat. Julia was caught in the act.
"…All right you got me." Julia began with a sigh. "One of my friends, Hilary, has a crush on you but was too shy to go up to you so…"
"You did it for her." Kai finished Julia's sentence, looking a little upset.
"Right…but trust me, she's really nice and cute, I…" Julia started to make a case for her friend.
"I know she sits in front of me in social studies." Kai confirmed what Julia described of Hilary, which put the green eyed girl at ease.
"Oh yeah that's right. So you know who I'm talking about?"
"Yeah I do…" Kai said, but he sounded distracted, as if he wanted to say something more and Julia caught on.
"Yeah but…?" She asked the same way he answered, leaving it up in the air for Kai to answer.
"I…already like someone else." He hesitated, looking away from the girl sitting in front of him.
"Really…? Maybe I know who." Julia propped her hands on the table and leaned in closer, her interest peaking. Who was this mystery girl Kai spoke of? Maybe she knew who this girl was and could help Kai out. Or maybe not, however, her questions would soon be answered.
"I think you know her pretty well." Kai said rather quietly, bringing his gaze back to the conversation, back at Julia, looking her directly on her dazzling green eyes. The message Kai sent was quite clear, but Julia didn't know how to respond.
"Oh…this isn't supposed to happen." She mumbled and yet through the loud music being played, Kai had caught what she said.
"What?" He snapped, causing her to snap out of her little trance.
"N-nothing!" She shook her head. "I mean, I'm supposed to introduce you to my friend and..." Kai relaxed himself, or at least a little bit.
"You still could…" he reassured her, but that's not all he had to say. "If you're free any time next week, that is." She raised a brow at him again.
"Are you asking me out?" She asked him as a small smile found its way across her face.
"Maybe." He smirked back. Julia had seen Kai smile a few times already and she had to admit she liked how it looked on him. Before she could say more she saw someone approach them from the corner of her eye.
"Hey there you are! What happened to Mariam?" Julia asked as she looked up from her seat at Hilary who was walking over to her and Kai.
"She didn't make it, look." Hilary nodded her head in the direction towards the bar where Mariam was being used as an arm rest for a drunken Johnny. And boy did Mariam look upset, squirming around as Johnny put his arm across her shoulders.
Kai rose from his seat and stood in front of Hilary, catching the brown eyed girl's attention.
"Oh right, where are my manner's, this is…" Julia began to introduce the two to each other but she was cut off.
"Kai, and you must be…" He said holding out his hand. A little pink in the face Hilary shook off any embarrassment.
"Oh, I'm Hilary, hi." She introduced herself and gently shook his hand, trying her best to keep her blush in check, but a little pink showed.
"I was about to go get a refill, wanna come with?" He asked Hilary, holding up his empty bottle. She saw Julia wave and mouth 'go' from behind Kai.
"Sure, let's go." She said cheerfully before she walked away with Kai. As Hilary turned to walk away, Kai looked behind him, back at Julia with the same smirk he had given her before and winked before walking away to join Hilary. Julia rolled her eyes in response as she watched the two leave.
"I think I'll go mess with Raul now." Julia grinned, getting up from her seat to find her younger brother of two minutes to tease him.
"Oh poor Hilary, the guy she likes is interested in one of her best friends instead." Mariah slouched in her seat after hearing what Ray had to say as they still sat together.
"Yeah I was a little surprised when Kai asked me about Julia...hey all hope isn't lost for her after all, look over there." Ray pointed towards the bar where Hilary and Kai where standing. He also was able to catch some entertainment as he looked from his seat.
"I said get…OFF!" Ray, Mariah and everyone else heard Mariam grunt before she made a fist and drove it into the gut of Johnny who toppled over in pain. With a huff, Mariam blew a strand of hair out of her face and walked away.
"Okay, that was hot." Tyson admitted before he took another sip from his bottle. He leaned against the wall, trying to look cool with his pals Max and Kenny as they witnessed the blue haired girl kick some ass.
"Y-yeah she is huh?" Max mumbled as his eyes stayed fixed on Mariam, watching her walk with an angry swagger that looked awfully good on her. It was almost painful looking at her, she looked so good he thought.
"Oh would you just go up to her already man, you're driving us crazy!" Tyson complained with his hands in the air. Those complaints fell on deaf ears as Max was still distracted by the fighting girl. Tyson pushed on one of Max's shoulders, finally getting his attention.
"Wha- oh, I don't know, I mean…" Max fiddled with the bottle in his hands.
"Well, if you think about it Max, the chances that you have with Mariam are actually pretty good." Kenny added before he drank from his water bottle, staying stone cold sober.
"What do you mean Kenny?" Max turned to his other friend, who could detect the alcohol on his breath.
"Just think about it; she's captain of your mother's soccer team, so getting approval should be no problem, and Mariam must hear nothing but good things about you, after all you are a top ten beyblader in school." Kenny elaborated.
"But so is she." Max threw in.
"Argh, would you just grow a pair and go up to her al…!" Tyson was letting Max have a piece of his mind until an unsettling feeling came about in his stomach. Hunched over, arms over his stomach a green faced Tyson turned from his friends.
"I think I'm gonna be sick…" He grumbled as he scurried away, trying to find the nearest bathroom.
"Tch, idiots." Tala grumbled, watching the antics of the trio from afar in an elevated section of the room that required climbing steps to get to. The VIP section if you will, was currently being occupied by the wild haired Tala along with a few others.
"What's irritating you know Tala? I think the new guy was right, you need to lighten up." Robert Jurgen, another Rank A student in Bey City Academy spoke up as he stirred a glass of wine in his hand. Tala growled looking over his shoulder.
"Oh can it will you." He snapped back.
"Where is this new kid anyways? If he can mouth off to Tala like that, I'd like to meet him." Said Garland who was sitting next to Robert on the couch; Tala glared over to him.
"Well he's over there if you wanna take a look." Tala said, crossing his arms and leaning back in his chair.
"Hiwatari, where have I heard that name before…?" Robert held his chin and pondered for a bit. "Enrique, any ideas?" He called to the host of the party, who was sitting on the couch behind him with a couple of girls around him. Robert saw his host was a little 'busy' so he decided to drop the question.
"What do you think?" Garland turned around as well to ask the guy looking out the tinted window. The redhead slowly turned around.
"Like I care?" said the number two beyblader in the school, Brooklyn Masefield who smirked as he ran a hand through his wild hair.
"Hm, you always say that." Garland said before turning back around to pour himself some more drink. "I hope i get to face him at the next beyblade test at school though. I'm a little curious to see what beyblader number three has to offer, hopefully something good." Garland finished.
Brooklyn meanwhile, walked over to the edge of the balcony to look out onto the rest of the party.
His eyes caught sight of Kai who was currently sitting alone at the bar but seemed to be looking intently at something. Brooklyn followed Kai's gaze and found Julia sitting and talking with Hilary, who Brooklyn didn't know too well. He then darted his eyes back to Kai but lost him for a second until he found him heading towards Tyson, Max and Kenny.
He didn't care who this new guy was but...
"But I do wonder what he's up to." Brooklyn said to himself as his gaze sharpened on Kai.
Well here it is finally! Tell me what you think…
This one was hard to do but after some help I managed to fix this chapter the best I could.
Hopefully the next chapter comes much faster.
