Hey guys! I was given a note on this correct use of dialogue, hope this is better! :)
"Happy birthday Biana!" said Linh and Tam, giving her a huge.
"Hey, Sophie!" they said hugging her as well.
"Thanks for coming guys!" Biana said with a huge grin.
Sophie smirked as she said, "Told you they'd be here first." Biana rolled her eyes and grinned as the four of the walked inside.
"Uh, this is from me." Tam said, handing Biana a small box. Biana beamed back at him and thanked him.
Linh chimed in with, "And here's mine!" and handed Biana and oddly shaped present.
Biana put her presents on the delicate table in her room, when Sophie said, "I guess I should probably give you my present now. Here you go!" And she pulled out a medium size box from the bag she had packed.
"Sophie...is this what I think it is?" Biana asked with excitement.
Sophie grinned. "You'll never know until you open it. But, that'll have to wait until everyone is here."
Linh smiled and said, "That should be soon; I just heard a knock on the door." The four kids rushed downstairs to see Alden and Della welcoming Keefe, Dex, and Fitz inside.
"Happy birthday sis!" Fitz said, giving Biana a hug.
"Happy birthday, sis!" Keefe mimicked Fitz perfectly, and gave Biana a huge hug, causing her to blush a little. Everyone laughed.
Dex handed Biana his present and said, "Yeah, happy birthday!"
Biana smiled as she said, "Thanks guys! Let's go eat, I'm starving."
"Same!" everyone else replied at the same time, ending in more laughter. They headed into the dining room, where Della had prepared a delicious meal. Everyone ate hungrily in silence, until Sophie's laugh filled the air.
"What?" FItz asked, smiling.
"Oh, I just don't think I've ever heard us be this quiet before; the food sure is good! Della, you did a fantastic job." Sophie replied, and everyone agreed. After everyone finished, Dex asked everyone what they should do next.
Biana, Sophie, Fitz, and Keefe looked at each other with grins and said, "BASE QUEST!" and everyone laughed.
"So, how are we going to split up teams?" Tam asked.
Good question Tam, good question. Hope you're all enjoying so far! Plot twist coming up real soon.
