Craxymofo- so I heard my stories were short and undetailed let's try and change that. Remember I love the critiscism I don't want anyone to think I'm angry. I also here it's cute.(: p.s. you have to read the other chapters to understand.

"NO!" I replied, but the tears gave me was it hurting so bad. That memory always hurt but not like this. Was it because she was back? I didn't want to hurt any more, I had to ask. "Raven, did you miss me while you were gone?" I asked. I had to know now. "Beast Boy it pained me everyday not to see you or be near you, those three years I wanted to die because I was gone and you guys were alone without me." she said,"I was alone I couldn't take it, the dark void, the cold, the loneliness. I missed you guys all the time, I was empty."I started bawling my heart out to her after that and I told how the team grew apart and how her loss afffected everyone.

Robin joined the young justice with me, Cyborg who was the second oldest joined the Justice League, Starfire the oldest went back to her home planet. i of course joined the YJ later. I told her kid flash died. She was just staring through me after a while. I felt her magic and then we were gone. Raven teleported us to the graveyard we had her service. she used her magic and pulled out her tomb stone from the ground. It was shrouded in a black aura for a moment unttil it shattered into a million peices. The shards spelled 'no regret's.

She went berserk. She uprooted tombstones, she made cars fly around, and the weather started going haywire. She was at the center of it all though and I had to stop her. She was crying and flailing around but her eyes were the darkest shade of black I've ever seen. I tried to run to her but all sorts of objects started attacking me. Flying debris, objects coming to life, and magic were obstacles. A car tire hit me in the stomach and made me hunch over. A magic orb grazed my shoulder and I felt a searing pain there like a bullet. Tome to go beast.

I transformed into a bat and ducked and weaved my way through everything. That's until the storm brewed up. It was forcing me back and I started getting hit by things. I turned innto a wolf to get some weight. I was howling and jumping over everything. A living tree tried to attack me and my jaws ripped right through it. I was past everything and Raven was still in tears. She got up and started to fight me. This is where it got tough.

` I wnet back into boy form and she kicked me in the groin. next she threw a flurry of punches and kicks at my face. I guess I wasn't bleedig enough because she slammed her heel over my nose and alost broke. I didn't wan't to hurt her but I knew it wasn't going to end unless I brought her back to reality. I turned into a horse and started kicking her like crazy she was doubling back. I then turned into a gorilla and wailed out on her. She was out. i turned backi into a boy and held her. Was she okay?

Craxymofo- hope this chapter was longer and more detailed and interesting. Remember to reveiw and leave a oc hero or message me with the details. Bye (: craxymofo out-