Well I wanted to say thank you to
ROCuevas, you wrote very nice comments to me and I just wanted to thank you and if you have any ideas on how I could improve, just tell me. I didn't think I would get any reviews until 3-4 days ago.
From JAG-Loves-Animals.
Chapter 4: Saved By A Bubble!
Blossom's POV:
I was falling and I wouldn't be so worried if it was just me falling but no, I had eighteen people wrapped up in my yo-yo that were hanging just below me, they would hit the ground first and die. What a super hero I am, right? I'm also meant to be the leader of a group of super heroes. I'm not good at my job now am I, well, I am only sixteen urg… there's no excuses for this.
We were all falling and I could see the ground, it was only a couple of inches away, I started praying that at least the eighteen people would survive, it didn't matter to me if I died, although just let the citizens live.
When something blue covered me and stopped us from falling, and instead made us float in thin air. I looked around me in wonder and confusion, while still holding my yo-yo so the people wouldn't fall to their deaths, when I noticed that I was in a big bubble.
"Blossom, are you alright?" Bubbles questioned with concern. She was looking down at me with about five feet of distance between us.
"Yeah, I'm fine, just get the people down safely, would you?" I told her and hoped that my yo-yo that was sticking through the bubble wouldn't make it pop.
I was still confused… she must have used her bubble wand… but… she used it on me… not the people… but they're still safe… I guess my prays came true… thanks to Bubbles.
Bubbles flew to me and popped the bubble around me… wait… WHAT? However I had nothing to fear, just when we started to fall again she grabbed me and with our strength combined, we were strong enough to lift the people.
We carefully lowered the eighteen citizens to the ground and they were very grateful. "Thank you, Power Puff Girls Z, you saved us" A business lady in a nice suit murmured as if we were angels and held a cross in her hands.
"No need to thank us" Me and Bubbles responded in unison.
Just then we heard "CRASHING HAMMER!" When we looked up we saw Buttercup lifting up her giant hammer and smashing the shadow so hard he flew. Fuzzy was sent flying into Townsville National Park.
Buttercup flew down to us "Do we have to get him? Judging by the blow I gave him, he won't be coming back for a while" Buttercup was smiling again "I miss school and PE" She only ever wanted to go to school when there was PE.
"Yeah, leave him where he is" I replied. I got off the ground and flew into the air, I started heading back to school with Buttercup and Bubbles behind me.
Justin's POV:
When the Power Puff Girls Z flew by I had a funny mixture of feelings, I was mad at them and I… kinda… wanted them. We stared after them for what seemed like hours when really it must have been ten minutes. That's when Bu-Jack started making jokes about Jace and Princess.
"Heh… well I guess… you have already found a girlfriend, haven't ya, bro?" Jack inquired tormentingly of Jace.
Jace was turning red, although Jack didn't stop, he just said one thing after another and Jace didn't like it, he looked like he was going to kill him. But it was funny, I started laughing along and making my own jokes, they weren't as good as Jack's jokes and he began to make fun of my jokes because he thought they were silly.
Jace was about to belt us over the head when "Ding Ding Dang" The bell went and thank god... I ran to our next class before he did hit us and when I looked back Jack was doing the same.
Jack had History in room D17, Jace had Maths in room E11 and I had Visual Arts in room C13. So I don't need to worry about Jace coming after me, he would pull on my hair and smack me in the back of the head for the things I said. It had only been a joke and I wasn't that good at it, Jack said you had to be witty to be funny like him and I didn't know what witty was… Was it a code word for something?
When I got to C13 I saw a little old lady at the front of the class, she must be our teacher, and boy was she short. I walked in and sat in the only empty chair there was, it was next to the girl dressed in blue, who was very pretty, she also looked familiar and she was the girl who said her leg was dying. Was her leg really dying? If it was, she needs to go to the hospital and I don't feel like seeing someone's leg die. Is it painful, I hope not? Maybe it was a false alarm and her leg is just sick like when you get a cold.
She said hi and I replied back, she helped me out with understanding what the art teacher was talking about when the old women told us stuff about the tone and texture of the painting. The girl seemed very good at art. She was also very pretty, very pretty…
She had pretty blue eyes, hair the colour of sunshine and a little dimple when she smiled at me. She was so pretty, very pret-
What did the teacher just say?
Kate's POV:
I was in history and fuck… it was boring. I started day dreaming when I felt something tapping my back. I turned around to find the new boy who looked like Butch; he was staring at me with a smirk on his face.
"Hey, Baby, I know you were lying about the I'm going blind thing, are you and your friends that scared of basketball that you make up lame stories to get out of it, heh?" Jack questioned being an ass.
"No, I like basketball and my friends are not scared of the game, so mined your own business" I replied harshly and I wanted to punch that smirk right off his face.
"Well then, why did you and your friends run away from the game like it was a war field?" He askeded with that cocky smirk. Maybe when the teacher turns back to the white board I'll punch his cheek and he won't smirk no more after that.
"We had something very important to do" I answered, well really it wasn't a lie, saving the city is very important.
"Yeah and what's that?" He inquired still smirking at me.
"I can't tell you" I responded and turned back to the teacher who was talking to no one, because… well… nobody was listening.
When I started day dreaming again, I could feel something tapping me on the back. After twenty minutes of being hit in the back, I finally turned back to the little shit doing it with a death glare.
"What now?" I growled to the green thing sitting behind me, smiling at me. He was as disgusting as a bogger and he was he was just as annoying as one of those girls who loved to chew gum as loud as they could, they'd even open their mouths so wide as they chewed that you could see the colour of the gum.
"You know… you look like someone I've seen before…" He told me. God… would he leave me alone… I don't care if he's my brother I want him to shut up.
"Yeah, who do I remind you of" I demanded just to get him to tell me, so I could be left alone.
"The green puff… you know… Butterbutt… and now that I think about it… you and your friends disappeared right before the Power Puff Dorks Z flew passed… and well, you and your friends look like the Power Puff Dorks Z…" He mumbled more to himself than to me.
"You're crazy… we are not… the Power Puff Girls Z" I stuttered and quickly turned around. I was very convicing, sure I was.
Shit… the only person that called me Butterbutt… was… Butch from the Rowdy Ruff Boys… and well he looks like… umm… Butch and his brothers look like the other two Rowdy Ruffs… and only the Rowdy Ruffs called us Power Puff Dorks Z… crap… that means they're back… and the guy behind me… is my enemy and not just that… we also blew them a kiss…
Remind me to never kiss a boy again, nothing good comes from it, it's a waste of time, air and energy, and it's just disgusting kissing your own enermy like we did.
Never do it again. Never, never, never.
