Title: 50 Shades : SasuSaku Version
Summary : Haruno Sakura is just a typical college girl. What will happen to her life after she meets the hot sexy billionaire Uchiha Sasuke? Based on 50 Shades Trilogy : SasuSaku revamp.
Rated : M [Strong Language]
A/N : Part 13! Tadaa! Probably the longest I have written in my life LOL When you read this, it will sound similar to the book (because I did it based on the book), hope you guys won't kill me. I do add in their own special characteristic instead of copy and paste from the book. Well, you see, my last update, I received the longest review in my life. The reply to the reviews will be below because it's very long. To those of you who is interested, go ahead and read it :)
Warning: This part is beta'd XD Cheers to Nat! and Amber? LOL. I love both of you 3
QUESTION : Who do you think should be Mrs. Robinson ? I need suggestion! I still can't think who will fit her from Naruto. Help!
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto or the characters in any logical sense. All of them belongs to Masashi Kishimoto. I do not own 50 Shades Trilogy either. They belong to E.L. James. I only owned a illegal version of the books in my phone. [LOL]
~Part 13~
The first thing I realized was that I felt sick. My head was pounding terribly. I slowly opened my eyes and realized I wasn't home. The blanket that was covering me was really comfortable and felt nice against my skin.
Wait, skin?
I gasped and got up immediately. I'm wasn't wearing any clothes except my undies. I looked around and realized I'm in a hotel room, a suite to be exact. What the hell happened?
I remembered being at a party with Ino and then Sai came...and Sasuke!
"You're awake now?" I turned wards the source of the voice.
"Sasuke...what happened?" Ugh, my head hurt.
"You were drunk and you called me up. I went there and ended up finding you in the most intriguing situation. You were almost being kissed by your photographer friend and well, I saved you. You puked by the drain and passed out after." His voice was tinged with sarcasm.
I hit my head with my hand. The hangover pounding in my head was not helping at all. He walked towards the bedside table and grabbed something along with a glass of water.
"Here, aspirin." He said as he handed me the tiny white pill and a glass of water. He went to the chair across the bed and sat down with the Sunday paper.
I took the aspirin and laid back down on the bed. "Uhm Sasuke?" He looked at me from his newspaper.
"Hn?"
"Uhm, we didn't do..anything right?" I asked nervously. He chuckled.
"You passes out Sakura. I don't do necrophilia and neither do I have the interest of raping girls in their sleep."
I let out a huge sigh.
"You puked remember? And you did get some on your dress and I didn't want my bed to smell like puke so I took off your dress. Besides, I like my girls to respond." He smirked. I blushed at least another 50 shades of red.
"I'm sorry, about that question." I murmured.
"It's nothing. It's was certainly a very interesting evening. Not one that I'll forget for a while."
He's laughing. Fuck my life.
"You know you don't have to track me down with whatever gadgets you're developing or own." I look at him.
He chuckled and said, "Firstly, the technology to track phones is all over the Internet. Secondly, my company does not manufacture or have anything to do with sort of technology. And lastly, if I didn't come and get you, you'd probably end with that photographer in bed now. And you weren't exactly happy when he did that either."
I stared at Sasuke and bit my lip – a habit of mine whenever I'm nervous or scared.
"You know Sakura, I wish you'd stop biting your lip or I'll do it for you if you don't stop , so I repeat. Stop doing it. It's annoying." He wants to bit my lip!? Oh god.
"By the way, did you eat last night Sakura?" I shook my head. He runs his hands through his hair and sighs. "No wonder you got drunk that quickly. It's drinking rule number one that you must eat before you drink."
I bite my bottom lip again. He's scolding me. I can feel it in the tone of his. Damn.
"You need to eat Sakura. No wonder you puked until you had nothing in you." He sighed again.
"Are you going to continue to scold me?"
"Is that what I am doing?"
"I think so."
"Well, you're damn lucky that I'm just scolding you.
I stared at him. "What do you mean?"
"Well, if you were mine, after that stunt you pulled last night, you probably wouldn't be able to walk or sit down for a week." He smirked as I gasped. "You didn't eat, you got drunk and you almost got yourself raped." He said casually.
"I was going to be alright. I was with Ino."
"And what about the photographer!?" He snapped at me.
I bite my lip again. Damn, Sai...I sighed.
"He's just well, drunk like me you know." I shrugged.
"Well maybe next time he gets drunk, someone needs to put a chain around him so he won't go around raping girls."
"You're quite a disciplinarian Uchiha." I hissed at him.
"Oh Sakura, you have no idea." He stares into my eyes and grins wickedly. One moment, I was so angry at him for saying that about Sai and the next, I can't stop staring at his gorgeous smile.
"I'm going to shower. Or do you want to go first?" He stood up and placed his paper on the coffee table. When he stood up, I finally see that he was wearing, a tight T–shirt, revealing all his toned muscles and a pair of skinny jeans.
Suddenly, I can feel my heartbeat pounding at a rate so fast I that don't know if I'm going to survive. I was hyperventilating. He noticed my sudden state of breathlessness and his eyes widen in shock. He quickly rushed to my side and whispered, "Breathe, Sakura, breathe." I look up and see his hands caressing the side of my face, his thumb slowly running across my cheek and over my lower I finally calm down, Sasuke steps back and walks towards the bathroom.
"Breakfast will be here soon. You must be hungry." He mutters as he leaves me to my own thoughts.
I gave him a nod, the moment he closes the door, I let out another big sigh.
Why is he so damn attractive?
I just have the urge to join him in the shower now. In the 22 years of my life, I have never felt anything like this before. My hormones were racing, my heartbeat was uneven and my face was continuously blushing different shades of red. My skin tingles where his thumb traced over my cheeks and lips. I have the sudden urge for something, and the need is weird, it's very...uncomfortable. It feels like desire.
'If you were mine...' His words were still ringing in my head. What does he mean by that?
One moment he gives me all these types of ridiculous warnings, the next moment he sends me bracelets worth thousands, then he tracks me down like a stalker. And after all that, he rescues me, brings me to his thousands dollar suite to spend the night, and nursing my incredibly painful hangover the following morning. I feel safe, protected and yet conflicted and confused. He's like my knight in white shiny armour but mysterious.
I get up from the bed and search for my clothes. As he suddenly emerges from the shower, wet, with just a towel lightly slung around his hips. And here I am, half naked with only my underwear.
I can feel his stares as his eyes rake my semi-naked body, I can feel my body turning several shades darker. Oh God Why? I wonder.
"If you're looking for your clothes, I've sent them to the laundry." I stared at him, into his dark obsidian orbs, so full of mystery. "Your clothes were covered with your puke, remember?" He answered lightly.
"Oh." I blushed. "Thanks."
"I had taken the liberty of ordering Yue to get you a set of clothes. They are over there in that bag." He said and he motioned towards a paper bag perched on the ridiculously big arm chair. He got me clean clothes. Wow.
"Uhm, then, I'll go shower." I mutter. "Thanks a lot." I grabbed the bag from the chair and hurry into the bathroom slamming the door in my wake. In the bathroom, it was all steamy and hot from where he's been showering. I strip off my clothes as I step under the light spray of warm water.
I want Uchiha Sasuke. For the first time in my life, I want a guy. I want him on the bed with me. I want to feel his hand all over me. He has told me he likes a responsive woman. But he hasn't made a pass at me yet. What does that mean ? Doesn't he want me?
Sakura, you slept on his bed and he didn't touch you at all. You do the math. My inner voice whispered to me. I ignored her. Other thoughts clouding my mind.
"Breakfast is here Sakura." He he says and his insistent knock startle me from my reverie.
"Okay! I'm coming." I yell through the door.
I quickly finished my shower and put on the clothes he got for me. Yue had gotten me a new pair of Levi's jeans, Acne's blouse, a pair of pink Converse and lastly a pair of undies. All of them fitting perfectly. How does he knows my size anyway? Creepy stalker.
I found a hairbrush in the shower room and brushed my hair with it, pulling out all the tangles and extra water. I tied up my hair with a black hair tie and fixed my shoes properly. I took a deep breathe, time to face him.
I found the bedroom empty. I search for my purse - but it's not there. I should have known. I walked toward the living room and it's huge. I gasped in awe. There's so many things and it's...beautiful. Sasuke is sitting on the dining table across the living room. There's also a table of pool by the side. Hmm, I should go play with Ino sometime soon. Ino!
"Shit, Ino." I mutter. Sasuke looks up from his Sunday paper and reply, "She knows you're here and still alive. I've called Shikamaru." He says with a trace of humor all too obvious is in voice.
I have a feeling Ino found a new target. Not that I'm worry or anything but...Who is Shikamaru anyways?
I walked towards the dining table and sat down. I glanced up at him, as he raised an eyebrow at me. "Uh, if you don't mind me asking, who is Shikamaru?"
He chuckled. "He's a good friend of mine. He followed me here for some business. Nara Shikamaru. I think you've heard of his surname before." He smirked.
Nara, Nara, Nara... Oh! "You mean that Nara, that builds different kinds of amazing building and also invents different kinds of devices?!"He nodded and I gasped. Ino had caught a big fish.
"Here, eat." He placed down his paper once again and pushed the tray of food towards me. "I don't know what you like so I ordered the basic breakfast. Hope you don't mind."
"Oh no, I don't mind at all. Thanks for doing all of this." I murmur. I ate quietly.
"Tea?" He asked.
"Yes, please." I'm happy that he remembers my favourite tea, Earl Grey.
He poured me a cup and continues to read his paper.
"You hair is still damp." He scolds.
"I couldn't find the hair dryer." I mutter defensively.
He presses his mouth into a hard line, and keeps quiet.
"Thanks for the clothes again."
"You're welcome Sakura. That colour suits you." I couldn't help but blush.
"I should pay you back for them." He glares at me like I have offended him or something.
"You have already given me those bracelets, which I need to return later, because there's no way I'll accept something as expensive as that. But these clothes...at least let me pay, please?" I pleaded.
"Sakura, trust me, I can afford it."
"That's not the problem Sasuke. Why should you buy these for me?"
"Because I can."
"Just because you can, doesn't mean you have to spend your money on me." I replied quietly. "Why did you send me those bracelets?" My voice is soft. He puts down his paper and stares at me intently, his eyes show some emotion that I couldn't grasp quite well.
"Well, when you fell on me in the elevator the other day, you stared at me, you were like 'kiss me, kiss me Sasuke' all over your face," he pause for a while, "I felt like I owed you an apology or at least a warning." He says as he ruffles his hair.
"Sakura, I'm not a hearts and flowers guy. I have a special taste for women. You shouldn't stay too near to me." He sighed. "There's something about you Sakura, that I don't know what it is, and because of that, I find it impossible to stay away from you. But I think you know about that already. "
My eyes widen. He can't stay away from me!
"Then don't." I whisper.
He gasps, his eyes widen.
"You have no idea what are you're talking about Sakura."
"Enlighten me, then."
Suddenly, we were just quiet, I didn't touch my food, neither did he continue to read his paper.
"You're not celibate right?" I asked.
He smirked at me.
"No Sakura, I'm not celibate." He pauses, just long enough for me to let this information sink in and I flushed scarlet as I realised the meaning of his words. I just didn't say that out loud.
"Do you have any plans for the next few days?" He asked, his voice low.
I tapped my fingers on the table, "Well, today is my last day at Inuzuka's. I'm working from midday. By the way, what's the time?"
"It just after ten. I think you can make it. What about tomorrow?" He says as he rests his chin on his elbows that are perched on the table.
"Ino and I are going to start packing. We're moving to Seattle next I'm free."
"You have a place in Seattle already?"
"Yes."
"Where?"
"I don't really remember the address. It's in the Pike Market District."
"Not far from me." His lips formed a small smile. "So where are you going to work in Seattle?"
"I've applied for some internships. I'm still waiting for reply."
"Have you applied to my company as I suggested?"
"Um..no."
"And what's wrong with my company?"
"Your company or YOUR Company?" I smirk. He smiles slightly.
"Are you smirking at me, Ms. Haruno?" He cocks his head to one side, and I think he looks amused but it's hard to tell. I flush and glance down my at unfinished breakfast. I can't look at him at all who when he uses that tone.
"I'd seriously like to bite those lips of yours." He whispers darkly.
Fuck. I'm completely unaware I'm biting my lower lip. Again.
"Then,Why don't you?" I challenged.
"Because I'm not going to touch you Sakura - not until I have your written consent to do so."
Wait what?
"What does that mean?"
"Exactly what I'm saying." He sighs. "I need to show you. What time do you finish work this evening?"
"About eight."
"Well, we could go to Seattle this evening or next week Saturday for dinner at my place and I'll tell you. The choice is yours."
"Why can't you tell me now?"
"Because I'm enjoying my morning now with you. Once you're enlightened, you probably won't want to see me again."
Holy fuck. What does that mean?
"Tonight."
He seems even more amused than before.
"Like Eve, you're so eager to eat from the tree of knowledge." He smirks.
"Are you smirking at me, Mr. Uchiha?" I asked sweetly.
He narrows his eyes at me and picks up his iPhone. He presses something.
"Yue. I'm going to need Sharingan."
Who the fuck is Sharingan?
"From Portland...No, standby at Escala...All night."
All night?
"Yes. On call tomorrow morning. I'll pilot from Portland to Seattle."
Pilot?
"Standby pilot at Portland Hangar." He puts the phone down. No please or thank you.
"Do people always do whatever you tell them?"
"Usually, if they still want their jobs." He says, smirking. "Oh Sakura, finish up your breakfast. And then I'll drop you home. I'll pick you up at Inuzuka's tonight at eight when you finish. We'll fly to Seattle."
I blink at him. Still not comprehending his instructions.
"Fly?"
"Yes. I have a helicopter."
Okay. I will have my second date with Uchiha oh–so–mysterious Sasuke. From breakfast to helicopter rides. How awesome.
"We'll go to Seattle by helicopter?"
"Yes."
"Why?" I ask dumbly
He grins. "Because I can. Finish your breakfast."
How can I eat after knowing I'm going to Seattle tonight by a helicopter with Uchiha Sasuke? And he wants to fucking bite my lips...I'm getting hotter by that thought.
"Eat." He says with a stern tone. "I have issues with wasted food Sakura. Eat."
"I can't finish all of this." I look at my tray of food.
"Eat whatever that's left on your plate. If you had eaten properly yesterday, you wouldn't even be here in the first place. And I doubt you'd want me to scold you." He says his mouth set in a grim line. He looks angry. Really angry.
I finish whatever I could on that plate. As fast as I could.
"Good girl. I'll take you home after you've dried your hair. I don't want you to be ill."
I give him a small nod as I leave the table. I walk into the bedroom. A thought stops me.
"Where did you sleep last night?" I turn to him.
"In my bed." He says simply.
"Oh."
"Yes, it was quite an experience to me." He smiles.
"Not having...sex." Okay. I did it. I said the word. I blushed from the tips of my ears to the tips of my toes.
"No." He shakes his head and frowns as if recalling something uncomfortable. "Sleeping with someone." He picks up his paper and continues reading as if I hadn't said anything in the first place.
What does he mean by that? He has never slept with anyone? Is he a virgin? I found it ridiculous if he had never slept with anyone.
I found the hairdryer in the bedroom and start to dry my hair. I head to the bedroom and found Sasuke's toothbrush. Water droplets are still dripping from the toothbrush. He must have used it just now. Out of character, I use his toothbrush to brush my teeth. I feel so naughty.
Grabbing my bra and panties from yesterday, I place them in the paper bag that held the new clothes. I walked out of the bedroom after packing up.
He's on the phone with someone and talking about something I couldn't quite understand. He sees me and after a few seconds, he hangs up. "Ready?"
I nodded. He slips on his blazer, picks up his car key and heads for the door.
"After you, Ms. Haruno." he murmurs, opening the door for me. l whispers a small thanks.
We walk in silence down the corridor towards the elevator. I dissn't quite understand him. I slept with him last night and after that I throw all my guts up,and he's still here. What's more, he wants to take me to Seattle.
Why me? There's something about you – his words replay in my head and I'm determined to find out.
The elevator arrives and we step in. We're alone. Suddenly, for some odd reason, I think it's because we are alone in such an enclosed space, the atmosphere between us changes,like it's charged with electric, exhilarating anticipation. My breathing quickens as my heart races. His turn towards me, his eyes darken. I bite my lip. Again.
"Oh, fuck the paperwork." He growls as he lunges at me, pushing me against the wall of the elevator. Before I know it, he's got both my hands in his grip above my head and he's pinning me to the wall with his hips. Fuck. His other hand grabs my hair and yanks down, bringing my face up and his lips are on mine. My brain can't function, what is going on. I moan into his mouth, giving his tongue an opening. He takes full advantage of it, his tongue exploring my mouth. I have never been kissed like this before. My tongue and his end up in a battle of dominance. I lose of course. After a while, that seems like eternity, we finally break apart.
I'm helpless, my hands pinned, my face held, and his hips restraining me. I can feel his erection against me. Oh my god...He wants me. The Uchiha Sasuke, the multi–billionaire, the infamous bachelor, wants me. And I want him, here, in the fucking elevator.
"You. Are. So. Sweet" He whispers into my ear. My legs feel like jello as he holds me in place.
Suddenly, the elevator stops, the doors open and he pushes away from me in the blink of an eye, leaving me hanging. Three men in business suits look at us and walk in. My heart rate is beating at a speed which makes me think I'm going to die any second now.
I glance up at him. He looks so cool, like nothing had even happened. Is he totally unaffected by my presence? He glances at me out of the corner of his eye, and he gently blows out a deep breath. Oh, he's affected. The men exit at second floor. We have one more floor to go.
"You've brushed your teeth." He says.
"I used your toothbrush." I breathe. He smiles.
"Oh, Haruno Sakura, what am I going to do with you?"
The doors open on the first floor, and he takes my hand and pulls me out.
"What is it about elevators?" He mutters, more to himself as he strides across the lobby. He escort me into his car as he drives me back to my house.
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Merope's Echo:
Let's start off with a hi and thank you for reviewing shall we? :) This is very interesting as this would be the longest and most pleasant review I'll ever receive. No matter what, I need to reply to all my reviews and certainly, I won't miss out yours. ;) I won't go like some others by saying things like 'fuck off bitch' or 'get the fuck off my story if you don't like it' . Instead, I will try to explain everything to you as simple as possible, but since you have written for me such a long review, I might as well write you a long reply. I think my readers won't mind. :)
Firstly, you have said my sentences were staccato, well, I can't help but simply agree about it. Yes, I'm that kind of person who does that. I can't give you a sarcastic answer because I myself admit that fault. There's nothing else I can say.
Next, about the time, yes. The original trilogy which consists of three books which in time flow in the story only take about 3 months plus. From how Anastasia meets Christian, to all the drama and conflicts, to them getting married and the final plot of Anastasia getting kidnapped, all of them happens in a short period of time. To most romance novels, it's too fast. But hey, there's no harm trying something new. Something that will change most people's minds. I'm not a reader. I don not own many books. Heck, I haven't even bought books for so long time now. It took me a month to finish the book Breaking Dawn which I borrowed from a friend and yet it took me 36 hours to finish the trilogy. I think i put up quite an impressive record. So what I'm saying is that I don't read much novels. I mostly only read stories online. Fanfiction to be precise.
Ok, about my characters, I was Skyping with my beta who is often absent (she has her own life too[Beta: Yes i do, Thank You very Much]) when I came across your review and she also read it. She did agree a bit on what you've said about Sasuke. Well, I only can say this, I'm only at chapter 6 of the original trilogy, so I have a long long way to go. I pretty much have a lot to explain. Well, I'm pretty sure you have finished the trilogy (or perhaps you didn't finish it, I have no idea) and the characters are not being built yet. You get what I'm trying to say? The Uchiha Sasuke in my story has not been described properly yet. And anyways, I tend to follow whatever personality that the original Uchiha Sasuke owns instead of adding something weird to him. I do realize there are authors that do OOC but I don't. I rather enjoy reading them but I don't write them.
I do hope you realize that I'm not fully writing based on the trilogy. The biodata of the characters have changed accordingly to suit SasuSaku. I have only taken the basic plot from the story. In the beginning yes, things may seemed like they have been copied from the story directly story because I wanted it that way. You should have realized (If you read the actual trilogy finished) that I skipped a lot of scenes and squeezed some in. I Do Not like detailed stuff. I only write it detail when I know I need too. I just want to cut everything, so that it is short and simple. And my beta has given me some ideas on improving the Sasuke character and you don't have to worry.( Beta: Yes i Have )
About my beta, she is sorry for being often absent (Beta: I am Sorry). But you have to understand we have life. We have things to handle and to settle. I work on a daily basis. I'm a 15 year old girl who helps her family to run a business. I do not have the time to sit down and write for hours on end. I have another beta too but she's also busy because she has exams coming up soon so I don't want to bother her too much. I hope you do realize the last two chapters I published is because I don't want to upset my other readers. I know how it feels, to wait for a fic to update. It is not a pleasant feeling.
Lastly, there's no wrong in writing a fanfic based on fanfic isn't it? I don't want to sound rude but.../sigh. I understand where are you coming from. You and Paint have the same concept, writing a fic based of my own original ideas. I do appreciate your concerns but my answer will remain the same, I just simply can't. Don't ask my why, because even I myself don't know why, and trust me, I tried but failed in the end. I know what kind of person I am, I understand myself better than anyone and I know I can't do it properly. What's the point of doing it if I know that I can't, and will probably fail in the end? I don't want to upset the readers, that's what I know. I don't want to be able to write a good fic and after awhile, I lose interest in writing it. I...don't like that. Not from the point of a reader.
As a closure for your review, I would like to say thank you. Thank you for taking your time to write such a long review. Many thanks for making me realize what should I do and what I should not. But no matter what, I have already started the story, there's no going back now. I'll probably upset those who actually liked my story if I delete it. What I'd like to say is that, thanks for your concern but nothing can really change my mind now. And by the way, I'm not going to write BDSM, not when has strict rules about M rated stories. Like I said in my past replies, I will only imply it, not by writing it out in detailed scenes. Just no. But I will try to improve the plot as time goes by, I don't know how but, maybe with adding scenes that doesn't exist? I will try, that's all I can say. Thank you once again. Looking forward to your next review, if you wish to drop one.
Note from Beta : I'm sorry if you have had to put up with grammatical errors and such, So as of now I will start beta'ing the previous chapters as fast as possible. Thank you for putting up and excusing my absence.
Once again, Very Very Sorry. :(
