Its a bit early for this chapter but a got bored and beside's i had a Brillieant Idea for this, hope you like it :)

and sorry for the spelling errors, when i get time i'll correct it.


Chapter 4- Bad start

It was saturday, the weekend.

The Chipmunks and Chipettes have'nt stopped feeling nervouse ever since they met the competitiors, not one of them had stopped worrying, specialy Brittany. She knew what would happen if the loose.

It was nine thirty and they would have to leave in ten mins to got to the dance studio to practice. They had told Dave that night about the dance off, he wasn't pleased at first but then again he knew how talanted they was so he had told them he'll support them and so would Claire, the family and fans.

At the moment the chipmunks was getting ready as the chipettes was primping, well Brittany was, her sisters was just tidying up...

"C'mon Britt, we leave soon" Eleanor said, the pink clad chipette just sighed.

"ok ok am coming, let me jus-" she began but Eleanor cut her off.

"no now!" she said she dragged her sister.

Brittany glared at her as she pulled her wrist back, the three chipette then hopped to the front door where Dave, Alvin, Simon and Theodore was waiting but none of them looked amused...

"took you long enough" Alvin said, looking directly at Brittany.

"well, you know me...I have to look perfect when it come's to dancing" she smiled, flicking her ponytail back.

"don't I" he finnished, saying it quietly so she wouldn't hear but she did and glared.

Then in the next second, they all then headed to Daves car that was parked in the garage. They climbed in as Dave then reared up the engine and drove down the road, it was a ten minute drive as they parked up infront of a big buliding that had the name 'La-Dance-O studio' in bright colours. They climbed out and entered the building.

Inside, it was beautiful, you could hear back beat music and it had posters of clubs and activites, dances and concerts. The place looked marvelous. The chipettes got all giddy as they looked around the place...

"wow its better than i imagoned" Eleanor said in amazement.

The others just nodded as they then headed down to the studio once Dave had sorted the paperwork out, they headed down the steps that led to a dance room and when they enetered they was gobsmacked, the room was perfect. It had smooth, shiny wooden floors, in one of the corners there was a drum set, there also was a mirror wall and on the ceilin was lights, wiring and a disco ball.

"well i think we should get are tail shaken" Alvin joked, smirking

"make sure you keep off the wireing this time" Simon said looking at him, Alvin just rolled his eyes.

"what-ever" he said walking over to the drum set where Theodore was.

Meanwhile, Brittany had noticd the mirrors so like normel she walked over to the mirror to check herself, her sisters just rolled there eyes. Dave enterd the room and set their stuff down to one side, he smiled as he looked at them...

"ok guys" he said, five of them came but a certain someone was still primping, Dave just side "Brittany?"

"one minute Dave" she said,

Dave just looked at Alvin, giving him the eyes. Alvin understood and crept over, behind her. Brittany didn't notice as she was to busy sorting her hair out. He then sniggered as he then grabbed her by the waist...

"wha- hey!" she shot as soon as she saw who it was.

Alvin hoisted her over his shoulder and headed over to the others. When he reached them he put her on the ground beside him, Brittany just galred at him as she then looked up at Dave...

"ok, you'v got this room for an hour. I'll pick you up at ten fifteen so please...don't wreck anything" he said

"wait, your not stopping with us" Simon asked, Dave shook his head.

"nope, your yound aduts now so have fun" he smiled, the chipmunks and chipettes looked at each other suprise. Dave then left, leaving the six chipmunks alone.

"well ok we need to get ready, Eleanor you get the music out of the bag" Simon said,

Eleanor nodded as she then hopped over to the bag Dave had left. She unzipped it and rumaged through it until she found what she was looking for, she reached in a pulled out a CD with the music on. Once she got it, she then ran back to the others.

"got it" she said as she set it in the middle.

"ok, what shall we dance too?" Simon said looking at the list.

"let me have a look Si" Alvin orderd as he looked "found one..what about 'were them girls at', eh"

They others smiled and nodded, like the choice Alvin suggested. He then hopped over to the CD player that was next the the drum set and put it in, he pressed the number and ran back to the others, to get into position. The music began to play...

Chipmunks: so many girls in here, where do I begin?
I seen this one, I'm about to go in
Then she said, I'm here with my friends
She got me thinking and that's when I said
Where them girls at, girls at?
Where them girls at, girls at?
Where them girls at, girls at?
So go get them, we can all be friends

The music began, the chipmunks double twirld as they land in a fist pow, the chipette twirls once and stopped doing hand moves along with moving hips. The first verse began as the Chipmunk stomped the paws and fipped the Chipette behind them.

Hey, bring it on baby, all your friends
You're the shit and I love that body
You wanna ball, let's mix it, I swear you're good, I won't tell nobody
You got a BFF, I wanna see that girl, it's all women invited
Hair do's and nails, that Louis, Chanel all up in the body
President's in my wallet, no rules I'm about it
Blow the whistle for the hotties
I got it, shawty, it's never too much, can't be doing too much
10 to one of me, I can handle that love
Outta of my reach, we can all get buzz
Holla cause I'm free, to whatever it's no rush

The verse stopped and now it was the Chipettes turn. The music changed as the the girls did a sexy cat walk pasted the boys and twirled, the boys fell to their knees as they curved ther backs, pumping their chests. The girls moved their feet, bring their hips foreward, waving their tails. The girls threw their heads back as the chorus started...

So many boys in here where do I begin?
I see this one, I'm about to go in
Than he said I'm here with my friends
He got to thinking, then that's when he said
Where them girls at, girls at?
Where them girls at, girls at?
Where them girls at, girls at?
So go get them, we can all be friends

Brittanys bit was coming, everyone got into their positon, she was a front, Simon and Janette was at the side whilst Alvin, Theodore and Eleanor was at the back. At birds eye veiw, they was shaped as a pyramid. The byspectical Chipmunks looked at each other and smiled as the got ready to throw the pink clad Chipette up.

peebe, peebe, who's Peabo Bryson?
Two years ago I renewed my license

They grabbed her by the hips and threw her up in the air as she twirld, but a bit to hard..

Anyway, why'd I start my verse like thaaaaaaaaaaaahhhh

They all watched as Brittany went flying into the wires, getting her jacket stuck on a hook. Jeanette and Simon covered their moves as they realised what they did, both of them looked at each other in guilt.

"aaahhh, help!...I'm stuck" she shouted, as she tried to reach behind her.

Eleanor and Theodore couldn't help but snigger as they watched her, she looked a bitt silly as she hung there, Alvin on the other hand glared at them as he then looked baack up at his girlfriend who was just hanging there.

"hang on Britts, we'll get you down" Alvin shouted, realising what he said. Eleanor and Theodore bursted out laughing at what he said.

"IS THAT SUPPOSE TO BE A JOKE!" she shouted, narrowing her eyes.

"don't worry Brittany. We'' think of something!" Jeanette shouted

"WELL HURRY, IT HURTS HANGING LIKE THIS...PLUSS MY, I THINK MY JACKETS RIPPING" she shouted looking down at them "ITS YOURS AND SIMONS FAULT I'M UP HERE"

Simon and Jeanette looked around as they was trying to figure a plan to get her down, Alvin, Theodore and Eleanor at the moment was trying tocalm her down. Jeanette looked and got an Idea as she noticed a blanket in the corner...

"i got it" she said as they all looked at her

She ran over to the corner and grabbed it as she then ran back to the others, Simon realised her plan as he smiled at her, nodding as he grabbed one end.

"Theodore, Eleanor you grab the other" she orderd, they nodded. "Brittany, your gonna have to try and slip out of the jacket" she suggested, Brittany didn't like the idea.

"ARE YOU KIDDING ME, THIS JACKET COSTED FORTU-" she bagan but the all cut her off.

"BRITTANY!" they all shouted.

"FINE BUT YOU OW ME A NEW ONE" she said as she then slowely tried to get out of it "HERE GOE'S NOTHING"

Then in the next second, she slipt out of the jacket, falling twenty foot high, aiming straight down to the blanket but the four chipmunks was holding it tight which made it boucy. Brittany lannded in it but didn't stop as she then went flying, heading Alvins way.

The aurban Chipette flew right into him, sending both of them into the drumset. Simon, Jeanette, Theodore and Eleanor looked in horror as they watched their older siblings go tumbling into the drumset, they all then rushed over to them to see if they was alright. Simon was the first one there as he saw Alvin climbing out of a drum soon followed by Brittany, the both red furred chipmunks rubbed their heads, walking towards them...

"you two ok?" he asked, both of them nodded.

"well least your down" Jeanette smiled walking over to them. Brittany just glared...

"yeah but my jacket isn't, its the only one I have" she shot, rubbing her arms were it hurt.

"we'll get you a new one...for now just wear your black one" she suggested, Brittany sighed as she rubbed her face.

"cheer up Britts, it could be worse...it could be your shirt up there instead" Alvin smirked as he looked at her, Brittany just glared at him but kept her mouth shut.

"lets just forget whats happend and carry on shall we" Eleanor suggested,

They all nodded as they then put the music from the beginning and started all over, only this time they didn't chuck Brittany so high this time, the song ended successfully as they finnished. Dave came back later that morning and picked them up, they mananged to get her jacket back but it was ripped so it was useless.

This was harder than they thought...


ok, another crap ending but i hope you liked it. Its all i could do.

Sorry about you Simonette and Theonor fans but trust me their will be plenty of fluff in this story for them, trust me :)

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