Author's Notes:

Hello there,as promised this chapter will be solely(ish) dedicated to responding to the comments that I received.

First of,I just want to say how awesome and spectacular to know that people don't find my writing entirely and utterly space trash,seriously it's good to know.

It stops me from descending deeper and deeper into the abyss I so desperately fear I will end up in,a hole in the ground so dark and soulless where my dreams are basically used as tissues.

Anyway,with a glimpse into my heart out of the way,let's get started with your comments.

-Sapbe

Thanks man,you were the first person to comment on my writing which makes you important,if I ever become a famous actor or something.

Thanks again.

-Nathan

Thank you for letting me know that you like my chapter,even better when I get constructive criticism.

I'll do my best to ensure I'll write with more detail.As for your suggestion,I'll explain later on in this chapter.

-Changingdestiny40

Wow man!Where do I even start with you?Firstly,thank you for writing not one really long and detailed comment,but two really long and detailed comment.

I was blown away by the (probably) long time you took to write those reviews,means a lot that someone would spend a good amount of effort for a review,especially for a story from me.

Though I suspect that is probably your norm as far as reviews go for you.

Yup,my account has two stories which contained the same chapter,Tristan with Sabine.

Let me start by clarifying that the one that has 3 reviews was the first one that I uploaded, it was actually the first time I used fan .

So because of my inexperience and stupidity, I thought I didn't upload anything so I uploaded the same story twice.Then the first one got some comments so I thought yeah,why not let it stay while I continue to develop the second one.

I'll probably delete the first one some day in the future but for now,I'm just too lazy to delete it,honestly speaking,I don't even think I can remember how.

Moving on,thanks ChangingDestiny40 for sending me a detailed suggestion of Mara Jade with Ben.However,and this is nothing personal,I doubt I will flesh out your prompt,not because of the idea but because I have barely read a single expanded universe content,and the ones I do did not contain Mara Jade and Ben Skywalker.

I do know the basic outline of Mara Jade and Ben but honestly,I don't think I'm into them that much,what I know of them anyway.

So I'm real sorry,hope this isn't a dealbreaker.

-Guest(I like how you display the slutty)

Thanks man,I think you're like,the second or so favourite review of

mine.Capturing the heart of my chapters,I think.

-Changingdestiny40(again?cool)

Thanks for the postive feedback,and yeah,I do agree that my smooching and french kiss game needs some work,at least in my writing,I'm a pro at it in real life...sort of...not really...not even close.

Oh and thanks for giving me some lines to help me write kiss scenes better,that's what I like about you,you tell me my stuff is good,you tell me the stuff to work on and some help to work on it.

You're a pretty cool dude,dude.

I kind of like your prompt for the 'what goes around comes around' but I sincerely doubt I'll ever include it in a Mara jade with Ben Skywalker chapter,because you know,but a good idea is a good idea nevertheless and I will try to find a way to incorporate that theme somewhere.

Also,to answer your questions,Padme is the same age as she was in episode 2,24.

Luke on the other hand is aged 19-20(depending on your pick)basically his age in episode 4.

How is that possible you ask?Don't, you won't get an answer,mostly because I don't know.

Oh,and when Padme says she only cares about 'two skywalkers in the house',she's referring to her son and her daughter,Leia,let's just say Leia has been more open to the idea of her mom and brother having the lifestyle that they have.

Sometimes,Leia's also more than a spectator.

So,I'm gonna end this little comments segment but before I do.

I just want to say,send me prompts,that's right,the most dirty,most kinky thing you have in your head about a pairing in the Star wars universe you have,send it my way.

If I like it,I may choose to dedicate a chapter to that specific suggestion you wrote.

Just send me...

-The pairing you want

-The Scenario

And if I'm into it,I'll select it and do my absolute best to write it, fair warning,don't expect it to be good and expect it to take a while,I actually have a life other than writing smut(or do I?)

e.g

-Sabine With Gar Saxon

-Sabine lost the light saber fight on her home world of krownest against Gar Saxon and instead of killing her,he turns her into his own personal...well you get my drift.

And the beauty is?You can send as many as you like,not exceeding social norms.

So write away your suggestions...