YO HOWS IT MOTHERFUCKING GOING!
ok first off to the guy that asked me to update soon, im here motherfucker so you can stop the messaging(im joking)
second this message is important for this fanfic so im going to be labeling this one with a WARNING
i have just recently got a beta reader who is my best friend in IRL and you may know him as SjinXephonis, now hes got his own version of my story but played through his POV basically saying while i woke on patch his raggedy was dropped in the middle of atlas
but thats not the important message here
the important message is that he just beta'd and edited the shit of this chapter so it going to look different compared to my stuff and let me tell you i dont like it but im going to go along with it because of one reason and one reason only!
i want to hear from you the reader your thoughts on the matter
basically saying do you want me to either drop Sjin and do the editing myself?
or
do you want him to carry on editing for me?
either way i want to know your thoughts so please drop a review on what you think and if you have questions or thoughts drop them off i dont mind answering some of your concerns
anyway ive kept you waiting for too long so get to the reading
Chapter 4
I groaned as I wondered what the hell happened last night?
"hmmmmm do that thing with your tongue again mmmmm" I heard as I opened my eyes and I craned my neck to the side, I saw a smiling and sleeping Summer clung onto my body. I instantly took notice how she wasn't wearing any clothes and neither was I.
For a minute I just stared at her while I didn't think about anything, heh this is going to sound pretty cheesy but she looks beautiful, im being serious here, she looks exactly like a rose that just bloomed.
After a while of smiling blissfully I settled my head back and I looked up to the ceiling, I took a bit to think about it.
I am having a relationship with Summer Rose. She is the mother of one Ruby Rose, the single most badass little girl since Yuno Gasai, if i'm actually going to be dating Summer and I want this to be for real, how is that going to work for the future? I mean come on i'm basically, just virtually getting rid of the future timeline.
The real question is do I really want to do that? do I really want to move from the usual canon to the unknown territories that is an AU?
This right here is just a lot to think about. Sigh, I guess this would count as one of those times of me actually wanting alcohol to settle my nerves so I could just think a bit clearly.
But I guess for now i'm going to forgo that option by just laying in this bed with my hot ass girlfriend that I actually like and care about.
Yeah that sounds great
"WAKE UP YOU LAZY FUCKER!"
Oh great how could I completely forget today was Saturday?
"Urgh what was that?" I heard Summer wake up, as I gulped
"An old, retired, huntress that just loves to kick guys, in the nuts" I said as I quickly threw the sheets off and jumped out of bed. I got my underwear and pants on as fast as my ass could move. Then I quickly grabbed the first thing that was long and hefty and wasn't my dick
HA! GET IT?
Im joking cause I know that I am going to die. I grabbed the long and hefty thing which was a piece of steel piping, left there for good reasons, and this was a very good reason.
I quickly closed my eyes as I waited and listened
"uh Hamish whats goi-"
*SLAM*
"NOT TODAY YOU WRINKLED OLD BITCH!" I shouted at the top of my lungs whilst I swung downwards and I opened my eyes. I watched in mild horror as the pipes end slammed head first into a scared and confused Qrow. He went down with a thud and I looked down with wide eyes.
"Who are you calling a wrinkled old bitch?" I heard as I looked up and saw the old retired huntress. She stood about my height, had an amazing body with tanned skin, her eyes were green, her long blond hair was done up in a low ponytail and she wore a black track suit jacket over a grey tank top, black capris, white running shoes and a pair of grey combat gloves.
"oh fuck me NOPE!" I yelled at the top of my lungs. I dropped the pipe and shot off towards my only exit, the window. I sprinted towards it at full force, I leapt up and braced myself as I crashed right through it. I landed on the ground with thud and rolled. I was about to jump up and run when I suddenly found a hand had grabbed my shoulder
"and where do think your going, hmmm?" I heard as I froze still in utter fear
"oh son of a bitch" was all I said before I felt the pull. I ended up in the air and I closed my eyes because I was now falling
"I hate vegas" was all I said before I felt the pain and then nothing. I guessed the pain was just too great for my mind to even comprehend. I found myself only seeing black.
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"I fucking hate you" I stated with every ounce of hate I could muster but I was still in so much pain
"oh grow a pair, or in your case grow a bigger pair" said the bitch of my life Casey fucking obsidian, the woman that's supposed to be training me in combat
"but I will say that was a really good swing you did there, if I didn't use that meat shield I believe it would of gotten a slight dent in my aura, so good on you for actually achieving something in your life for once" said Casey. I couldn't help but growl in anger as we stood in the usual training spot which was a basic, big, dirt clearing and that's it.
"Ok kid other than the usual morning insults, let's get to the training, shall we? 'Cause after around about 1, big, old sheriff is going to come over and you'll be going to the shooting portion of this weekend, so with that in mind we're just going to jump right into the combat so catch!" she said as she dropped a duffle bag and threw me a wooden katana. I caught it and grumbled as I gave it a quick swing test making sure she didn't do anything to the sword itself.
Which thankfully she didn't this time, last time she threw me one of these, it was filled with lead making the damn thing almost impossible for me to swing, that is until I got a bit of momentum to it, still she kicked my ass though.
"ok so what's the training this time?" I asked and she grinned at me
"Isn't it obvious, we are going to be sparring" she said. I gulped at her grin
"Constant sparring" she said shooting forwards. She held her sword up in a stab motion. I barely had a chance to pull my sword up in time to block and deflect her attack. I quickly jumped back and held my sword up
"Oh yeah that's the look you need for this training" she said as I shot forwards and swung my blade downwards. I watched as Casey effortlessly spun around dodging my strike. She swung her blade and slammed it into my side. I was sent tumbling to the ground. I rolled back onto my knees and gritted my teeth in pain
"Who said you could stop!" I heard as I quickly put my sword up and I blocked the downwards attack. We were at a stand still and I gritted my teeth and looked up at Casey while she grinned down at me and her eyes showed that she was enjoying this, blood bitch!
I pulled back and rolled to the side as far and as fast as I could. I quickly got back up onto my feet and held my sword up. Casey just gave me a grin as she leaned forwards and shot into an instant sprint. She held her sword outwards in her right hand. I narrowed my eyes and watched as she quickly skidded a couple metres in front of me and swiped her right foot dragging the dirt along up with her.
I gritted my teeth while I covered my eyes as I felt the dust hit my arm. Then I felt the piercing jab of Casey's sword in my right lung. I felt myself get pushed off into the air backwards. I hit the ground with a thud and I felt myself unable to breath as I tried to suck in air but could not.
My chest burned in pain and I gritted my teeth from the pain and tried to get my breathing back, but I just couldn't do it.
I felt myself slowly dying as my eyes started to slowly fade into the deep dark abyss.
God damn it, Casey you knocked me out again!
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"Sigh, Casey was going a bit rough again I see" I heard the sheriff state as I sat up with my legs folded as my back was leaning against one of the trees as I tended to my training wounds, which included my arms legs, hands, feet basically anywhere you would count as important was badly bruised and looked like I had just been through the worst beating you could ever go through.
I wished I had my aura unlocked then my wounds could be healing around about now and I wouldn't have to deal with the pain I was feeling right now.
"Rough!? that bloody bitch knocked me out after the first 30 seconds into training and right after that she woke up and started to spar with me more and more until at this point in time, if I have a concussion then that still wouldn't stop her, by the way there may be a chance of me having some serious brain damage" I said. I heard thud and I looked in front of me to see my gun there.
"Well come on kid less of the dilly dallying and more onto the training" he said as I rolled my eyes and winced, while I slowly, managed to push myself up and grab my gun. It felt almost like it was too light, I know this had some weight to it but for some reason it just doesn't feel right.
"Did you remove the ammunition?" I asked and the sheriff grinned at me
"That I did, hmmm i'm surprised that you could tell" he said as I grunted and slowly pulled my gun up and leaned it against my sore shoulders
"My muscles are super sensitive so the weight felt just too light for the gun" I stated as it was true on that fact as sheriff just grinned at me.
"well good that means you don't need to do much today then" sheriff said. I blinked at him in surprise.
"What are you talking about?" I asked and he grinned at me
"It's just a small exercise I was going to have you do but considering you're practically already gone through it and you gave me the right answer I can officially say for today I got nothing to teach you" he said. I blinked at him
"If that's so i'm going back to town" I said. I was about to walk off
"Hahaha yeah, about that, I said todays lesson was done, but tomorrows lesson can be handled today" he said and I groaned knowing this was going to be a very long day.
"Sigh, what are you going to teach me?" I asked as he grinned at me
"Oh that's easy it's called drawing" he said and I saw the glint in his eyes
"Son of a bitch" was all I could mutter. That glint in his eye was the basic warning telling me this was going to go south and I mean arctic pole south.
Just now I realised that both the sheriff and Casey were both a bunch of sadistic old people that just loved to fuck with me.
"Now than shall we?" he asked as he slowly unbuckled his holster and I gulped
"b-but I don't have any bullets" I stated, he just grinned at me
"Oh I know, that's why I scattered six bullets along this clearing and your job is to find said bullets and try and shoot me, while I take pot shots at ya" he said. His eyes narrowed at me, his mouth widened and opened to show his grinning white teeth in my direction. I gulped.
"Oh shit!" I yelled. I ran off trying to find those bullets, despite my aching body I was able to ignore the pain because I was too scared to care.
"Now then let's draw!" I heard, followed by a click. I dove and hit the ground with a groan and quickly shot back up to find those bullets.
But it was hard. I heard the next click of the sheriff's gun and I dived again but this time towards a tree. I heard the bang and the tree got hit. I spun myself around until my back was leaning against the tree.
"Looks like we are going to be playing the waiting game hmmm?" I heard the sheriff say while I took deep breaths in and out and tried to settle my heart rate down. Whilst i try to figure out where the hell those bullets were.
This is going to take a while
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"Sigh that actually didn't take that long" the sheriff said as I trudged through the office portion of the station. I took no mind to him, as I was sweaty, in pain and probably traumatised to some really bad extent
"I'm going to go take a shower, then i'm going to bed and during that I don't want any jobs coming in, please" I stated with a more pleading nature. The sheriff grinned at me
"meh ok but if i'm going to need ya-"
"yeah I know just get me" I said as I walked up to my apartment. I opened the door and found myself being pulled inside
"HAMISH ARE YOU OK!?" exclaimed a now fully clothed Summer. I winced in so much pain that my entire back went from slouching in pain to stiffening in pain, in less that 0.3 seconds because of how tight Summer's hug was
"Uuuuuuuh. Summer stop. In pain. Oooooooooow" I groaned out. She quickly let go of me, and I sighed and slowly relaxed.
"What happened?" she asked while I relaxed my back
"Training and aren't you supposed to be on a one way trip to beacon?" I asked. She rolled her eyes at me.
"Oh well don't worry about that, I can get there faster with Raven but you should be more worried about yourself" she said. I sighed
"I am but i'm more worried about you and your education I mean come on don't you want to be a huntress?" I asked and she pouted at me.
"I do but that's not important" she said while I stared at her blankly. I had a feeling this was going to be leading to our first fight so I might as well get to the chase. I slowly moved my hand under Summer's chin and I tilted her head up. She blinked as I smiled at her.
"it's more important that I know that the next time I see you, I'll be seeing you in Beacon" I said with the best smile I could produce and I watched as her face turned redder than crimson.
"f-fine j-just don't die you idiot" she stuttered out as she pecked me on the lips. I watched as she slowly passed me
"Summer" I said quickly and she spun around. I gave her a bright smile
"I promise the next time you'll see me i'm going to take you out for dinner but this time, without a weird mix of a foursome this time" I stated. Summer smiled at me brightly
"I would love that Hamish" she said as a red and black portal appeared out of nowhere. She turned back and walked through it.
When the portal was finally gone I sighed and I slowly trudged over to my bathroom. I looked at myself in the mirror and saw the beaten and badly bruised face that was mine.
Hopefully the next time I see her, my face won't be just as beaten or bloody as when she left.
I smirked at that fact. I turned on the sink and slowly tended to my wounds.
Might as well since I got tomorrows training to go through next.
wow yeah told you different
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