Dawn: Hey y'all! *speaks with wonder* Guess what?
Sphinx: What?
Dawn: *ignores* I'm excited today!
Sphinx: Like that's new. When are you not?
Dawn: *glares* Sphinx. Leave. Now.
Sphinx: No! I like this place! Then after words I can go to the riddle maker's club and ridicule the stupid "riddles" you write!
Dawn: Better than your quizzes!
Sphinx: Would at least tell them why you're excited *mumbles* this time...
Dawn: They already know! With the Dawn of the next day begins the third week of 2014! Plus, it's the first update of the new year! Hooray!
Sphinx: that's the lamest pun ever!
Dawn: Whatever! Well, the reason I've not updated... Well... That's 'cause of my exams and stuff. More importantly... I have a severe writer's block!
Sphinx: *gasps dramatically* No!
Dawn: *glare*
Sphinx: You sure like glaring.
Dawn: whatever! Now to-
Sphinx: -infinity and beyond!
Dawn: I'm a writer not Buzz Lightyear!
Sphinx: *sheepishly* Sorry. I couldn't resist.
Dawn: Well, anyways... Here's chapter four! Nothing special though. That's 'cause *accusingly* YOU guys didn't suggest anything to me.
Sphinx: You're not going to have any fans at this rate.
Dawn: *pouts*
Answer to chapter 3:
5) Charybdis.
6) Gabe Uglanio aka Smelly Gabe.
So... Who was able to solve them? You were? Oh that's great!
7)
Loathed by the world
Feared by all
I walk unnoticed
Hidden by the wall.
Those who obey me
Are all incorporeal beings
They instill in humans
Fearful feelings.
My parents are not ones
Who respect me
Thus a supporting personality
For them, I shall not be.
8)
Questions I have answered
Creating doubts in minds
The King's threats I shunned
Regardless of his finds.
Some legends say I lost my love one,
To the desires of a god.
Others say I tricked her,
That she's victim to fraud.
Alas! In her eyes,
Either way now it does go,
I'm a cruel backstabber.
Hateful feelings for me, she does show.
Reply to reviews!
DualStarduster:
I love riddles. Shorter riddles but these are interesting.
Dawn:
Why thank you! Actually, I tried making them shorter but it was tough since the message wouldn't get relayed.
Princess Of Flames:
These riddles are amazing dude. I had IM Reyna and she said you are to report camp Jupiter by the Winter Soltice.
May Apollo bless you and the teddy bears.
Keep making amazing riddles!
Upload soon
Dawn:
Oh dear! I'm going to die of happiness! Though, if that happened, all you did would be in vain... so, I'll try not dying. That would probably be better for me too. Thanks a lot... It means a lot to me that you like my poems so much... That you leave a review every time. I feel like I'm on cloud nine every time I get a review and yours just make me smile. :D
8EternallyMortal8:
I really loved the Echo poem. It was prety incredible, and I absolutely loved your word choices, phrasing, and sentence structure. :D The Nancy one was O.K. Probably better than I could do with her character.
Dawn:
Yeah, the Nancy one was a disappointment to me as well. I was doing my first chapter and wasn't really sure who to choose for my second poem and I wrote it in literally 30 seconds. So I'm sorry for the poor quality.
8EternallyMortal8:
Anyway, I really love these poems; you're a really great writer! :D
-EM
Dawn:
Writing poems is my passion. I've never really been good at them so I've started writing more of them over the past two months... The fact that you loved them makes me happy. The compliment means a lot to me. Thank you. :)
8EternallyMortal8:
The first poem was really cool; it was kind of perplexing, but I liked it. :D
-EM
Dawn:
Wow. Thanks a bunch. No one has ever called anything I've written- 'cool'.
meggymoocow:
my favourite desert is chocolate mouse!
Merry Xmas!
-Meggymoocow
Dawn:
Chocolate mousse! Yum! Hmmmm... I want to have some now. *rushes to kitchen to make it* I'll be sure to send some over! :)
Seas and Shadows:
Sorry for not reviewing last time, I've lost my IPod and Laptop! D: even now, I'm sneaking/reading on my brother's phone. I 'borrowed' it. Heh heh heh...
Dis is so amazing! I can't even work the riddle out!
Dawn:
Aw! You don't have to be sorry. it means a great deal to me that you reviewed even once... :) Wait, you lost both at the same time? Is that even possible? Lol. I might've done that too if I had siblings... *Blushes* Amazing? why, thank you. as for not working it out, I'm pretty sure that you're being modest here just to make me merry! Thanks... :D
Dawn: Well, that's that! So... How was it this time? Constructive criticism and suggestions are always appreciated here!
Sphinx: How about you let me write the riddles?
Dawn: Sphinx. *glares*
Sphinx: What?! That was constructive criticism! I mean, your poems would be a lot better that way!
Dawn: *sarcastically* Really now?
Sphinx: Yes! So you'll consider it?
Dawn: NO! As for the readers, I would really appreciate if you guys sent me PMs as to which characters i should probably do. Writing poems is the easy part, finding good characters to empathise with is tough. If get replies to my requests, I'll be picking them at random and not telling you who I've picked so that you can still enjoy without me spoiling your fun! Anyways-
Sphinx: What she's trying to say is that YOU do all the hard work.
Dawn: Grrrrr...
Sphinx: Go ahead! Glare! That's your favourite past time anyways.
Dawn: I think that beloved machine of yours that you got repaired recently requires a few more hits. Maybe even complete destruction!
Sphinx: NO! NOT MY MACHINE!
Dawn: That always works! *smirks* Anyways, see you guys next time! :)
