So I've been thinking about this story a bit. I want to keep the same idea of the story, but I want to make some changes to how I went about certain things.

I want the development between Jaune and RWBY/JNPR to grow over a longer period of time, rather than them quickly regretting their choice to abandon him. I also want to restart the story with clear points about certain things.

First of all, Jaune's Father is Commander Dante. For this Story, Dante was born on Remnant, and attended Beacon after becoming an Astartes as ordered by Chapter Master Kadeus who had seen potential in Dante and Lemartes Arc.

Second, Lemartes is Still a Chaplain and Guardian of the Lost, leading the Death Company in this story. However, his backstory is altered so that he is the brother of Dante Arc. Lemartes was strictly raised by their father to be a Chaplain as soon as he was 6 years old, causing him to be apathetic. His combat prowess surpasses Dante and Lemartes even trained Dante at times and he never cared about love or anything of the sort until his brother convinced him to try during Beacon, in which he fell in love with Glynda Goodwitch, who was a member of Dante and Lemartes' team along with Ozpin. Her harsh rejection caused him to abandon the idea and focus on his training, causing him to become cruel and unforgiving, eventually leading to his fall to the Black Rage.

I want to make a separate story about Dante and Lemartes' time during Beacon if anyone is interested.

But back to the main point. I want more development to Jaune this time around. And one issue I noticed was no one was really sure if Jaune was Primaris or not. So for the rewrite, DM me if you want him to be Primaris or not and I'll tally up the votes so that I can make it clear it Jaune is to be a Primaris Marine or not.

Thanks for understanding and I hope you look forward to the Rewrite. I'm not gonna take this story down but instead replace every chapter with the revised works.