Zina588
I think christian likes ana but he doesn't want to admit it to his friends because she is not popular. looking forward more.
HENDERSON1993-
HEY ZINA588 THAT IS WHAT IT IS ALWAYS LIKE WITH PEOPLE WHO ARE POPULAR. WILL SEE WHAT HAPPENS IN THIS CHAPTER,HAVE A GREAT DAY.
Great chapter Grace is Ana's doctor, and then Christian visits and then kisses Ana o.m.g what's is happening. Did Christian like her all along but went with the crowd at school, what about Kate? Interesting.
HENDERSON1993-
HEY OVE HOW ARE YOU? WE WILL SE WHAT HAPPENS IN THIS CHAPTER WITH CHRISTIAN AND KATE, I AM GOING TO WRITE IT AS CHRISTIAN ONLY JUST STARTED TO LIKE HER, THANKZ FOR YOUR REVIEW.
Really True Love
omg what does christian wanna say and i bet he is feeling bad about him self ! good story
HENDERSON1993 –
I WANT ANA TO MAKE HIM FEEL LIKE SHIT FOR WHAT HE HAS DONE TO HER FOR AGES JUST TO FIT IN.
THANK YOU FOR YOUR REVIEW.
An- hey babes thank-you for reviewing, and the support it means a lot to me. Please have a look at some of the stories I am reading. The new housekeeper- ShadyGreySteele.
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Fifty shades of a a ten age grey- isaira.
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After a few minutes of hard out making out we pulled apart. He pulled me even closer and moved his lips to my ear and whispered enchanting I was. I pulled him so that he was looking me right in the eye, blue eyes to grey; as soon as I looked into them I knew I was infatuated with this guy. "What are we going to do, what about Kate?" I asked him, "I honestly do not know what to0 do with Kate. She can be nice you know, well when she is not with her "friends", He remarks. I throw my hands over my face and screamed into them. "What do you mean she can be nice, she is always a bitch to me?" I said. "Well she doesn't really go out with me; she goes out with my older brother Elliot, she only says she is with me because everyone knows what my brother is like and her mum and dad doesn't want her around him. She tells everyone that we are together; I don't want everyone thinking I am banging with my brother girlfriend. I did say she can be," he answered back. I couldn't withstand the feeling, of sadness for Kate she couldn't be with the one she had feelings for. She couldn't be with the one she loves. "So what does that mean does that mean she is your girlfriend around town and I am just when nobody is around. Where do I stand in this? I asked. "I'm not sure what to do as well you know, I don't know what you want me to say Ana." He said. "Well I think you should leave then, my mum will be back with my food and drink soon. She will not be very happy with you been here because she knows that you haven't been the nicest person to me."
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Today is my first day been back at school and I am not happy about it. Christian and I have been going out since that day in the hospital, it's been really hard, me and Kate are getting alone she is nice when you get to know her, her and Christian have a double date this weekend. I have got to know his little sister too. Her name I Mia and she is so cute, really sweet girl. I find out that Christian's really mum and dad died, I find out that his mother was on rugs and that is dad got killed in a hit and run.
I walked into my normal English class and head for my sit in the front of the class room. I get called over to the teacher's desk and she gave me my test back and to9ld me I got the highest mark in the class of 2007. I walked back to my desk with my paper in my hand and was reading what had been put on it. As I walked over to my desk one of the rugby players pushed me and I landed right one top of his friends. "Leave the girl alone" came a big voice. They started to laugh again. "I said leave her alone." I turned around to find that Kate had stood up and was looking right into this guy's eyes, everyone turned and looked at her. She moved closer to me and pulled me out of my seat. 'I am not dating Christian Grey, Ana Steele is dating him." She said and their eyes went from me to her and then over the class room over to where Christian was sitting. "This class room is top learn not to clown around. Got it, now everyone get your butts back to your desk, now!" Mrs Roberts yells at all of us, we all slowly move across the room and sit down at our desk. "Hurry up!" she yells again.
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I run up to my room after school and head to grab my Dairy, I haven't written in it for days now.
DEAR DIARY
IT HAS BEEN ALONG TIME SINCE I HAVE WRITTEN IN YOU LASTED. A LOT OF THINGS HAVE HAPPEN IN MY LIFE AND IT JUST SO HAPPENS THAT I AM DATING THE HOTEST GUY IN SCHOOL. IT WASN'T UNTIL TODAY THAT THE PEOPLE AT SCHOOL FIND OUT ABOUT ME AND CHRISTIAN AND THAT KATE IS DATING CHRISTIAN OLDER BROTHER. KATE AND I HAVE BEEN GETTING ON REALLY WELL; SHE WAS THE ONE THAT TOLD EVERYONE ABOUT ME AND CHRISTIAN. I AM MEETING WITH CHRISTIAN, KATE, MIA AND ELLOIT. I HAVE LIKE 40 MINUTES TO DO SO, SO I BETTER GO AND HAVE A SHOWER AND THEN WAIT UNTIL THEY TURNED UP.
UNTIL NEXT TIME.
After having a shower and getting dressed, throwing on some make –up I head down stairs and into the living room. Dad is sitting in his normal lazy boy not far from the TV. "Baby girl we need to talk about this guy that you have been talking to. "He said as he points to the chair in front of him. "Sure dad just let me put the glass in the dish washer and then I'll be right with you." I walk into the kitchen and place the glass into the dish washer. "Ok dad what do you want to talk , about can we hurry to please because he is going to be here soon." I said as I take my seat again, "It will take as long as it will take now, the young man, I haven't even met him yet. I want him to come up and talk to me before you leave please. So when he gets here I want you to leave the room so I can have a man to man with this boy."
A few minutes later there is a knock on the door, I run to the door and answer it. Christian Mia, Kate, and Elliot are all standing there waiting for me. Elliot walks in without even a hello, Mia skips in and calls out to Kate that is standing behind her, in the back is Christian. He looks so sexy in his skinny jeans and dark blue v line tank top. He grabs my hand and pulls me in close, when our lips meet it was like them touching for the first time. From behind as we heard somebody clean their voice. "You are Christian I am taking, I am Ray Steele, and you can just call me Mr Steele. It's so nice that you have eaten my little girls face off now you can be a man and come inside and talk to me. Ana take your other friends up stairs." Dad says, as I walk pasted my dad I whisper to him and say do not scare him.
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-HENDERSON1993….. :)
