TY TY TY for reviewing. I love them. Anyways, for my reviews. Why they ask is Orochimaru good. WELL let's see now. Long ago in the anime, he was a good strong ninja in the leaf village, so I decided, to make him good her, which is different from most stories.

I didn't want everything similar to the other stories, I want mine to be SPECIAL. Anyways. I am happy and sad. ONE: no was gave a slight prediction to, where she was going to go. What was going to happen or how or whatever. ANYTHING A SMALL PREDICTION BUT. NO none, nothing. T.T but at least you ppl reviewed. And I AM grateful for that. Keep it up, I plan to break my review goal (more than 30 review) and I hope to do it with this.

Since it is going well and I have some ideas that can make it juice. Now,

I own no one, but Midori, Ai, Hoshi (the sensei dude, who died mysterious...you'll find out how and why later on with the story) the bullies, uhmm, Kaoru and Kevin, lastly the rabbit.

Eternal-anime (reviewer #10) You call me heartless, (she's a friend in real life and calls me heartless, because i didn't care in any naruto characters death...really. and she cried litres) Yet here you say, it isn't sad, while the other reviews, disagree and say it is very sad.

Pain is mean because he is. He is serious about taking over the world and does not want a little girl to get in the way. He doesn't want anything to change his mind, no matter what. And to prevent that from happening (changing his mind) is to ignore anyone that makes him go soft or, kind, or weak, or thoughtful or carring. And so on.

Everyone clear now. About Orochimaru and Pain. BLAH BLAH on with the story

I'm Such a Fool

I sat down and ate an apple. I was getting closer to my destination. I was heading to the mist village, I heard from passengers by that it wasn't going well for them. Maybe, they need help, and I could get a job in helping them and get paid. Maybe I could live for a few more years, save up, and get all the preparation to get in the chunin exam. Then, after that, maybe I could see my sister again, by traveling back. Just maybe...

I got up, throwing what's left of the apple and kept moving. I had changed into my normal outfit. As I walked closer to the village, the foggier it got. Finally, I stopped when my feet walked into water. I winced my eyes trying to make, what it was, was it a pond?

"What is a kid like you doing here?" A cracking voice came. The voice sounded, like a whining animal. Squeaking and cracking. I looked closer; it was a man, on a boat.

"Oh, I'm here to help, I've come from the leaf village, and thought could help"

"Leaf village...are you a ninja?"

"Yes, I am"

"Wonderful, we can use a strong ninja. Hope in" I did, and he rode the boat on the other side on shore. I got off, and entered the village. The buildings were in ruins, the stores were mostly empty and the land was dry. Parents held their children's as I walked through the destroyed village.

"Who...could have done this?" I questioned myself.

"What do you want from us!" A man yelled.

"Haven't you taken enough?" Another yelled.

"Please leave us alone" A mother plead. "We have nothing more that you haven't yet taken" I saw a little boy, under a big pile of rocks, stick. He was crying for his mother. He had injures on his face. I looked around, why wasn't the mother running to her son's aid?

Until I saw a dead body, next to a building. She was on the floor, mouth open, and armed apart.

It would have seemed like she was in a position, to have been stabbed from the back, while running to her son, stretching her arm out. But falling before aiding him. And now he was crying. He looked younger than Ai, around five. His hair was dark gray, and his eyes blue. I slowly began to lift, rock by rock down, to help the poor boy. After the boy was freed he ran away to another family. I looked at the around. They were doing worse than me, and yet, I came here for my selfish reasons.

I pulled my bag down, taking all the food and water supplies out. I wore my bag again.

"Use it well, to grow what you need and to start again" I said, leaving. The boat man, surprised by my fast arrived, had said nothing, and returned me back. I thanked him, and began my walk through the fog. Another failed idea, no food, and no water.

I kept walking, and walking, as my leg ached, as my stomach growled, as my lips cracked up from no water, and as my throat dried and pleaded for water. Though I kept walking, till I reached a village, it was raining, and I had fallen unconscious at this village's gate.

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I woke up, hearing murmurs and feeling the rain drop on me. Two adults talked to one another, both wearing rain coats. As I sat up, their eyes looked at me.

"What business do you have in the Rain village?" The male asked.

"...Rain village? Sorry, I was only walking wherever my feet lead me. And here I am..." Some more people came, talked and then left. A sword was held under my neck.

"Did Pain send you, are you a spy?" I shook my head, eyes widen in fear. He slowly placed it down, still holding it. I looked around, the village was being repaired. Half of the village seemed to be whipped out.

"Who...is Pain?" I know him already, but...I don't know anything about him, or Konan or anything.

"Hmph, Pain is the leader of an S-ranked criminal's organization. He was a former shinobi in the leaf village, as was Konan. They were truly strong, but for some reason. They had turned their back against us, and destroyed our village. It has been many years, and it had taken us that long to recover only half of our village." The female explained. Crimi...nals...?

I shot up.

"I have to go!" I yelled, running out the village gate, down the path I had presumed to be how I came here. I felt Ai, with criminals!

I took a turn, down to the leaf, running through the ponds, and sands. On top of rocks and stones. I didn't take a break, I didn't slow down. I had to get Ai.

...

I had fallen on the shallow water in front of the boulder, it moved aside, to reveal Konan, and Pain.

"Midori!" Konan said, concern in her voice. She came to aid, me, but I slapped her hand off of me, and pushed her.

"Don't touch me!" I yelled anger in my voice. "Your criminals!" Konan took a step back. "Your betrayed her village, even destroyed it, have you seen it! Have you seen the damage you inflected! They've been repairing for years, and are only half repaired!" I yelled, panting. My blood boiled in rage. How could I have left Ai with them?

Pain glared down on me, eyes filled with hate and coldness. Konan's eyes only widen.

"How...How did you find out...?" My angered face turned into a sad and hurt face. My eyes became blurry.

"How could you...?" I sobbed. "I want Ai back!" I yelled out. "She deserves better than criminals!" I whipped my eyes dry. And Ai came out, calling for Konan.

"Sister! Your back" She said, running next to Pain. Pain grabbed arm and throw her to me.

"You can have her back, I don't need her" I held her close to me.

"Pain!" Konan yelled. He turned to leave. "How could you? Their parents had died in war, their alone, they have no home" he turned to her.

"That, isn't our problem, let them go beg, our only goal-" He was cut off by a slap from Konan. His face was to the side, looking into the cave, and then he shifted his eyes to her. Konan's face calmed down.

"What would Jiraiya-sensei do? You know very well what he did for us." She looked at me. Looking at Ai, as she sobbed into my arm. She looked back to Pain.

"Haven't I made it clear not to say his name" Pain replied. Her face hardened.

"Have you forgotten what we've been through! What pain we had after the war!" she snapped. Pain looked at me, my firm look was fixed on him.

"Do what you want" He said, bitter and poison in her voice, completely against this. Konan's eyes lightened. He walked back in the cave. "Their your responsibility" Konan, carried the sleeping Ai to her room, and I followed her, avoiding eyes from the rest of the member. Till I felt a thread around my ankles. It pulled me upside down in the arm. It placed me, in front of Kakuzu.

"Ah, good Kakuzu, your read my mind, I was going to ask you patch her up" Konan said, walking in.

"You're a brave kid to do what you did" Itachi said, suddenly. I shook my head as Kakuzu attended to my wounds.

"Fucking true, weasel" Hidan agreeing with the 'weasel'.

"I could only help one person in the mist village...compared to everyone else. The place was in ruins and lack of food" Kisame's face hardens.

"Mist village?" I nodded.

"Stop moving" Kakuzu growled. "Sat up straight, shoulders back, head up" He ordered. I quickly did what he asked. Wincing and held back whines. Before Kakuzu finished healing me, Pain entered, with her usual cold glare to me.

"I'd like a word with you" he said. Seeing as I didn't move from my spot, because I thought he should wait till I'm all healed. "Now" he added.

"One second, Kakuzu's almost done" Konan said. By now, everyone had left except for Kakuzu. They seem to not want to be there when Pain flared.

"That can wait" He said in a threatening voice. He grabbed my wrist and pulled me in his office room, with Konan. He pushed me to a wall, and grabbed my neck. Squeezing it. "How did you know? Who told you, about me?"

R.E.V.I.E.W. PLZZZZZZZZZZZZ I'd like that. So now, while she may be somewhat excepted in the Akatsuki, partly, under Konan only. This is completely against Pain.

This though, doesn't mean she is an Akatsuki member. She is just...like a freeloader...I suppose. Just because Pain, 'agreed' (not) for her to stay, with her sister, doesn't be he isn't going to hate her, and use her to do house work as he desires. Doesn't mean he's going to be nice, or respect her.

SO BE WRONGED, IT'S NOT YET TO BE HAPPY.

BYE, I LOVE YOU GUYS, DON'T FORGET TO REVIEW. :D