I don't give a fuck what you have to say about my fics Desert Tree, you say Sesshomaru would never take kagome as his sister!!! Well guess what!!!!! This is called FAN FICTION for a damn reason!!!!! I don't give a flying shit what you got to say!!!! If I want to write Sesshomaru tap dancing in a frilly pink Toto singing 'hit me baby one more time' I will do it mother fucker!!!! Oh and for those wondering what Desert Tree said here is the review.
Unfortunately, we couldn't even get past the first large chunk of text. Seriously, this is strange and gross. "Waht" were you thinking? Do you want the world to suffer "to"? First, Sesshoumaru wouldn't make Kagome his sister or let any of his people teach her how to use weapons. The drinking blood thing is just disgusting and weird, though we suppose it's as good a way as any to give Kagome UBER-POWERS that she didn't have before. We can't have her, I dunno, be herself or anything.
The premise is pretty much wrong, too, since we're sure you're going to take Hiei and Kurama totally out of character to pull it off. Good luck with that.
And here's a tip…… SPELL CHECK BITCH!!!!!!!!!