Yes it works! oh and poor mis, all alone. I feel so sad for her.;;. so what are

we going to about the beta thing? oh i know! here is my story so far:

"S...Sakura?!" He asked in alarm, standing in one spot just staring at her.

"Um... Sasuke, I need to go, can you let me pass?" staring at the cold stone pathway that lead to the gates of the hidden leaf village.

"NO, YOU CANT GO!" Sasuke said to her, so many questions that would never be answered, if she left.

"I have to, Sasuke." she said calmly, still staring at the pathway.

"Please, don't, at least... answer a few question's" he pleaded.

Her gaze finally met his. It took her a few minutes to answer, but finally she spoke.

"O-ok, but only if we go some where private." (STOP THINKING WHAT YOUR THINKING PEOPLE! YOU PERV'S!)

So, Sasuke and Sakura set of to the Uchiha mansion. They did not talk much on the way. When they got out side the Uchiha household, Sakura gasped at how beautiful the house looked.

'Man, this guy has every thing!' her inner self told her.

When they got inside, they sat on the black leather sofa, in the living room. Sakura looked around, there were a few pictures of what looked like Sasuke's family. In the pictures, there was a very beautiful woman, that Sakura could tell was Sasuke's mother, because he looked so much like her.

"So, where are your parents?" she asked. She saw how Sasuke suddenly looked at the floor.

"They died… some time ago." he said with no emotion in his voice.

"Oh... I'm so sorry, Sasuke I didn't know." she touched him sympathetically. (I SAID STOP THINKING WHAT YOUR THINKING!)

"Its ok. Any way, tell me why did you have that cut on your arm? Why did you leave the hospital? Why did you want to leave the village? And why..." his voice was cut of by hers.

"Stop, maybe it would help if I just start from the beginning."

(OK, THIS IS GOING TO BE A BIT CONFUSING, YOU SEE THE THINGS SHE IS SAYING IN

THE PRESENT WILL BE UNDERLINED LIKE THIS, AND THE THINGS SHE IS SAYING IN THE

PAST WILL BE ITALIC LIKE THIS, UNDERSTAND, NO? OH, DAM YOU TO HELL!, ON WITH THE

STORY!)

"It was one month ago, when the trouble started. I lived in a town called, Hollow

Bastion (OK I GOT THAT FROM KINGDOM OF HEARTS, BUT DO YOU KNOW HOW HARD IT IS TO MAKE UP A NAME FOR A TOWN! IT'S HARD)

As you all know, our king is very ill. And now his son, Prince Rock Lee (HAHAHA YOU

WEREN'T EXPECTING THAT!), will be taking over for the king. Well you see, his

Highness was to go around his soon to be kingdom to see what needed to be done. So when he was to be king he would be able to change them and make his kingdom a much happier place. (What crap!)

Prince Lee was to come to my town first. We decided to hold a huge ball in his honor and every one in the village was to come. (CAN YOU GUYS SEE WHERE THIS IS GOING?)

On the night of the ball, every one was dressed in such beautiful clothing.

Wonderful ball gowns of many colors (with shoe's to match) and tuxedos with a flower attached on every one. My mother, father and I went to the ball. My mother wore a red dress that reached her ankles to revel her black high heels, with diamonds studded in the buckle. Her hair was up in a bun with a only a black rose clip to keep it in place. My father had a black tuxedo on (clean cut was the way I described it to him). And as for me, I had a deep pink/ purple dress on with a cherry blossom pattern on it.

I watched my mother and father dance for a long time. I started to wonder why I came. I

knew the ball itself was going to be boring, but the reason I went, was to see the prince.

In every fairy tale the prince is a handsome boy and/or the perfect man. Well I

discovered they are wrong! Absolutely WRONG! (Sorry. I had to add that.)

I was sitting down near a window, and this boy with bushy eyebrows, came up to me and said,

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well thats it so far, i know the lines and words in bold didnt come up, but well

you know. so what do you think so far, i think its crap! but it isnt the end of

the chap yet.

Well I did it. I change a sentence or two, but it's still basically your story. I checked the words and added some spacing. Bye for now.