Hello y'all! Sorry for not updating for three months...again, but when I promised a BTS for this chapter I figured that the chapter would be way too short and I got a minor writers block just by thinking about it. So this chapter will be a possibly very short BTS and the first challenge, hope you'll excuse me.
Second of all, I kinda was too pre-occupied thinking about the order in which the contestants are eliminated because I didn't plan that part yet..., but I'm happy to say that I have a winner in mind! And with one of my biggest stumbling blocks out of the way and this authors note becoming way too f*cking long for my taste because I won't stop rambling, let's get on with Episode 1 Part 2 of TPIS2! If my grammar is bad, please keep in mind that English is not my first language.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything in this fanfic except for my OC.
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In the Drapion's cabin, the girls were lying on their bunk beds, waiting for their belongings and generally being bored out of their minds. Occasionally, Cheshire groaned and slammed her pillow. "Where is my luggage?" she asked for the fiftieth time. "Victini said it could take a few minutes, well, it's been HOURS since I landed on this hellhole and my stuff still hasn't arrived yet!"
"Oh, please shut up!" Kiki grunted. "It's been only fifteen minutes since we were taken to this dump! Besides, I have bigger issues with this place!"
"Like what?" The Dark-Type replied.
"Ugh, this place in general!" The Espeon replied frustrated. "I hate to repeat myself, but how do they expect us to sleep in this rubbish! Everything looks like it's about to fall apart, and I could have sworn I saw a Joltik running around the floor! If they expect ME to stay here for a second longer, then they are dead wrong!" She let out a last, annoyed "hmph" before turned her back at the contestants and laid down on her bed.
Mocha, altough she was noticably annoyed by the two, got up in a sitting position on her bed and nodded in agreement. "Kiki is right. This place desparetly needs a renovation. My bed isn't stable in the slightest." She moved up and down a few times to demonstrate the sturdiness of the beds, making an afwul creaking sound every time the bed went down. "And I hate to admit it, but I think you were right about that Joltik."
"I actually kinda like it here." Frost said smiling, while getting a few surprised looks from the other girls. "Anything better than at home." She added, instantly replacing with a sad face.
All the girls were surprised, and began to asked question to her. "What do you mean "better than at home"?" How can something be worse than THIS?" "Do you live in a box or something?" The Froslass began to cry and backed away to a corner in an attemt to escape from the torrent of questions.
"ÇA SUFFIT! (Translation: Cut it out!) An angry voice suddenly yelled. The girls turned around to find Scarlett, who was previously lying in her bed trying not to be part of the conversation, walking up to the crying ice-ghost thing. "Can't you all see this girl is close to being traumatized? Some terrible things happened to her and what those things are is none of your business! So please stop pestering her and leave her alone. The other girls looked at eachother, before going back to whatever the hell they were doing.
"Thank you." Frost said relieved.
"Your welcome." Scarlett replied, earning a faint smile from the Froslass. She blushed and turned her head away in embarrasment.
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Kiki was glaring at the camera, trying to keep her cool. "The nerve of that annoying little fox!"
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Zelda looked bewildered. "Even tough Scarlett WAS right, it surprised me how what appears to be an antisocial bookworm has the courage to stand up to 6 girls including a b*tch like Kiki." She paused. "If you see this Scarlett, no offense. Kiki, if you see this: have all the offense you can get!"
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"Scarlett may be a bit...out there, but she's a great freind." Frost said smiling. "Altough she acts a bit...weird whenever I'm around." She shrugged. "Ah, well. I'm probably imagining things."
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Scarlett was blushing fiercely. "There is a reson for my *ahem* 'outbreak' back there. Ever since I laid eyes on Frost, It would appear that I...you know..." Her entire head was becoming red. "I think I developed...a...small crush on her. And seeing her getting , I felt like I needed to do something about it." She paused and looked at the ground "She's so cute when she's scared..." She mutterd almost unhearable.
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"All my team members are so great, even the annoying ones!" Liza said, with a huge smile on her face, which suddenly changed into a look of pure evil. "It's such a shame they'll be leaving so soon!" She chuckled maniacally, as flames lit up in the background.
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Meanwhile in the guy's cabin of the Drapions, Smith was staring through the window, into the cabin of the other team. Aurora was sitting on her bed, trying to make pleasant conversation with the other girls of her team. Suddenly, she glanced through the window of their cabin, accidentally making eye contact with the Absol. Smith began to blush, and looked away from the window. "She's so pretty..." he muttered.
Ty, who was still gaming, looked up from his 3ds. "Hey man, I'm not trying to hurt you here, but you have absolutely no chance getting her." Jake, Lyonel and Ciel simply nodded in agreement.
Flame looked up. "Why? He has as much chance as every one of us, right?" he asked.
"Yeah! Even I could just walk up to her and ask her to go out with me!" Sean added.
The Sneasel folded up his 3ds. "Sorry, what I meant is that he has no chance of getting her if her brother is in the way. Did you guys see the look in his eyes when you tried to filrt with her? It looked like he was about to kill you!" Flame and Sean just sat there with confused looks on their faces. "Oh yeah, you two arrived later. Let me explain what happened. What happened was that Smithy here fell on love with the girl the very second her layed eyes on her. So he tried to have some 'quality time' with the lady hoping to 'get to know her better.' Right, Smithy?" He explaind, adding a suggestive tone to the last sentence.
"Thatsnothowitwent..." The Absol muttered, looking at the ground.
"Anyway..." Ty continued. "Before he even had the chance to say something to her, her brother pushed him aside ant walked off with the hottest girl he had ever seen. The end."
Smith was even more nervous now. "Okthatwasactuallytrue..." he muttered, almost unhearable.
Jake walked up to the blushing Absol. "Don't worry." He said reassuringly, putting an arm around his neck. "You'll get her eventually. You just have to show her brother how good of a boyfreind you are."
Smith looked at him. "Thank you." He said softly. "You're not gonna steal her from me, right." He asked hopeful, with a teasing undertone in his voice.
"Me?" The Riolu asked. "I wouldn't dare. I already have my eyes set on somebody else." he added, almost unnoticably looking into Ciels direction. The Growlithe looked back, and began to blush.
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"Actually, I have something to confess." Jake began, looking at the ground.
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"I don't really know if this is the smartest thing to do..." Ciel said blushing.
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"But I felt the need to clarify this..."
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"The thing is..."
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"I'm not excatly sure how to put this, but..."
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The screen was split in two, showing Jake and Ciel's confession at the same time. "I'm gay." they both said at the same time, before fleeing from the confessional out of embarrasement.
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In the Fearless Feraligatrs girls cabin, Aurora looked away from the window. "Oh gosh, was he looking at me?" She asked nervously, shifting her paws on the wooden floor.
"I think so." Nina said.
"Yup." Aura, who was hanging from the side of her bed, said confirmingly.
"Totally." Pepper confirmed.
"I think so too." Sally remarked.
"I guess..." Mystic said softly.
Mai just nodded uninterested.
Aurora sighed. "He's so handsome and strong." she said blushing.
"Yeah, he's handsome, strong, smart, all kinds of good things." Pepper remarked. "However, there's one small problem."
Aurora looked at the Quilava. "What do you mean?"
"Your brother." The Fire-Type replied. "If he finds out you two are in a relationship, I don't wanna know what happens to that guy." Aurora was about to say something, but she realized that Pepper spoke the truth in certain ways.
"Dont worry!" Nina said smiling. "I have a brother who is almost exactly the same as him! Just talk to him, I'm sure he'll understand." She stared out of the window. "He actually signed up, but I guess he wasn't chosen. Oh well, there's always a next season."
Just then, A bunch of Machoke opened the door to the cabins, holding a few backpacks in their hands. "Are you girls Mai, Aura, Pepper, Nina, Sally, Mystic and Aurora?" One of them asked with a loud voice. The girls quickly nodded. "Good, long story short, your luggage has arrived. We'll be off." And with that, the interns lest as quickly as they came. The girls looked at eachother and started unpacking their stuff. Most of the contents were mandatory stuff like snacks or in Sally's case, an entire First Aid kit.
"Is that really neccesairly? We have a nurse here, you know. Her tent is right next door." Pepper asked.
"Precaution." The Electric-Type replied. "Plus with our host being this egocentric, you don't have to count on him actually helping you."
The Quilava nodded and continued unpacking her bag. When she was at the bottom (after unpacking the previously mentioned 'mandatory stuff'), her paw brushed against something cold and made of glass. "What the-" she asked to herself, before taking out a framed photograph. "Oh, this" she said.
"A photo?" Aura asked. She dropped down from her bed and walked over to her freind, taking a better look at the picture. Pepper was smiling to the camera, standing next to an older looking Quilava, who was appearently sighing and rolling her eyes in an annoyed manner. "Who is that pissed girl standing next to you?" She asked to Pepper.
"My older sister." She replied in a shaky voice. "This picture was taken the day before..." She stopped herself from talking.
"The day before what?"
"It's nothing" the Quilava said, holding back tears.
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"Forget it." Pepper said stubborn. "I ain't gonna talk about it. This is something private which I'm not gonna say on national TV! I may be feisty and daredevilish, but not dumb!
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"ALRIGHT PEOPLE!" Victini yelled through a microphone, making most of the campers cover their ears. WE'RE STOPPING THIS BTS SEQUENCE BECAUSE THE AUTHOR WAS KINDA DONE WITH IT!" Offscreen, a faint mumbling could be heard. "SO IT'S TIME FOR THE FIRST CHALLENGE! MEET ME AT THE CLIFF IN FIVE MINUTES! AN CAN SOMEBODY SHUT THAT IDIOT UP!"
The guys of the Feraligatrs all looked dissapointed because of their lack of screen time. They, as all the others, walked up to the cliff, like they were told, Shadow now carrying a huge sword with a nicely decorated sheath around his back.
"Cool sword!" Xavier complimented him leaning forward to try and feel it, causing the Umbreon to growl at him. The Fighting-Type pulled his hand back, slightly shaken up. They walked over to the foot of a huge cliff where Vicini and Shaymin were waiting for them, the former carrying a suitcase in his paw and supporting a huge grin on his face.
"Welcome everybody!" He said with his usual cheery tone of voice. "Before we begin the first challenge, we never did specify the prizes you could win."
Luke rolled his eyes. "Let me guess, money and a lifetime supply of food?"
Victini glared at him, before continuing. "At the end of this season, the winner, if he or she is sitll alive of course, not only recieves Poké instead of , but also two fabulous prizes as well! Not only do you get automatic placement for the second season to have a chance at TRIPLING your money, but also THIS as well!" He opened the briefcase, revealing a contract inside.
"A piece of paper?" Psy asked confused.
"Not a paper, a contract." The Fire-Type replied. The young Espurr stared at him with a confused look on his face. "A promise written on a paper." Victini explained. "But this is not any ordinary contract. When you sign it, you will become the rightful owner of THIS VERY ISLAND!" The campers just stood there, their mouths hanging agape.
"Y-y-you mean you're actually giving away this place?" Cheshire asked in shock. When Victini nodded, she almost fainted.
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"Not only an ABSURDLY high sum of cash, but also a chance to TRIPLE it and an ENTIRE ISLAND?!" The Purrloin replied in disbelief. "Oh thank you Arceus, Creator of all. Thank you for forgiving my wrongdoings!"
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"Well then." The host continued to the still surpriesed contestants. "Now that you know what you're competing for, I'll meet you guys at the top at this cliff. No need to get mountain climbing equipment, you can use this." He pointed to a small and dangerous looking staircase hoven in the side of the cliff.
"Are you guys really so poor that you can't afford an escalator?" Kiki asked. "What if I fall? I might die, you know."
Shaymin sighed. "We were supposed to have a fairly large budget, but somehow all that money just dissapeared. Even we don't know what happened to it." At that moment, the camera panned out, revealing a large statue of Victini performing Searing Shot carved into the side of the cliff.
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Victini shrugged. "Eh, it was a good investement in my eyes."
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A few moments later, all contestants gathered on the top of the cliff. Some of them had a few bruised shins (or whatever four-legged animals have instead of shins) because of the stairs being really narrow.
"Ah, good. I see you are all relatively unharmed." Victini noticed while floating upwards, followed by a sky form Shaymin. He descended in front of the contestants. "Anyway, welcome to your first challenge, and a fairly simple one. As you all can see, we are now on top of this Arceus-knows-how-tall cliff." A few contestants rolled their eyes because of the obvious statement of the host. Soru however, was sweating bullets.
"What's wrong?" Nina whispered to him, sounding noticably worried.
"I'm afraid of heights." The Shinx whispered back.
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Soru shivered. "Normally, I don't have a problem doing things like this, but being this high... I hope the challenge doesn't involve what I think it involves..."
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"For our first challenge, you'll have to jump off this thing into the small pool below." The host said, keeping his cheery demeanor and tone of voice.
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Soru gulped. "F*ck."
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"Every time somebody jumps, your team gets a point. If you don't jump, you do not get a point and you will most likely be eliminated tonight. The team with the most points wins, the others must choose someone to send off, any questions?"
"What if you get injured?" Shadow asked.
"Then you'll still get a point." The host replied.
"Are you insane?!" Almost half of the campers asked/shouted.
"No, I'm sadistic. There's a difference. Anyway, since the Feraligatrs got cheated out of a BTS sequence, they get the honor to start. So, who's jumping first.
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Zero rolled his eyes. "What was I thinking when I signed up?"
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All the Feraligatrs were surprised when a large splash was heard. They looked down, where they saw Psy lounging in the water, appearently not noticing they were looking at him. Luke sighed, and jumped down to his brother. After that, Xavier, Sally and Zero jumped. Aura also eagerly jumped, followed by Mai, who rolled her eyes while flapping her wings to slow her descent. Aurora was looking down scared, until Shadow stood next to her.
"We'll jump together, For the team." He said, softly kissing his sister on the cheek. The Glaceon nodded and jumped together with her brother.
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Aurora smiled. "Shadow may seem harsh at first, but he can be really sweet once you get to know him."
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Pepper was nervously looking at the small pool below the cliff.
"What's the matter? Are you scared?" Kyle asked.
"No!" The Quilava replied bluntly. "It's just that...I can't swim all that well, being a Fire-Type and all."
The Mudkip thought about something for a second, before digging into his wheelbarrow full of pies, which no one understood how he carried the thing all the way to the top of the cliff. After a few seconds he got out, balancing a pie with a string sticking out of it on the fin on his head. "Use this! Just hold it underneath your feet, pull the string before you'll reach the water and you'll be fine!" He said, before running off the cliff himself. Pepper pondered for a moment, before also jumping off. Right before she hit the water, she pulled the string, causing an inner tube in the shape of a Ducklett to inflate within the pie. She fell right in the hole in the middle, causing her to safely land in the water.
"What the f*ck?" She asked to herseft, while she was bobbing in the water.
"You can keep it!" Kyle shouted from across the water, munching on one of his pies.
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Kyle smiled. "I always have some multifunctional food in that wheelbarrow! Not just inflateble pies, but also stuff like whipped cream that creates safety nets and sugar that acts as glue! And don't even get me started about the cucumbers that can be used as- *he was quickly cut off by static*
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"Um...aren't you guys jumping?" Nina asked to the two remaining contestants.
Mystic shook her head. "It's a bit too high for me..." She replied scared.
Nina nodded, and turned her head to Soru, who was still nervous. "Aren't you going?"
Soru gulped. "I...I...I can't." Nina walked towards him.
"S-s hould we jump together?" She asked a bit scared, holding her paw forward. The Electric-Type blushed, before putting his paw in the Eevees paw, causing them to make eye contact.
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She's so cute, and her eyes are so pretty..." Soru said blushing.
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He's so handsome, and his eyes are so pretty..." Nina said blushing.
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Soru and Nina walked to the edge of the cliff, looking in eachothers eyes one more time before jumping off. When they landed in the pool, they looked into eachothers eyes again
"I...I dit it." Soru said to himself in disbelief. "I actually jumped! And I couldn't have done it without you!" He embraced the Eevee in a firm hug, causing several d'awwwwws from the jumpers. Meanwile, Mystic was still shivering in fear. When Victini asked her if she was going to jump, her eyes went wide and she almost fainted.
"Well that means the Feraligatrs have 13 jumpers!" Victini announced. "Let's see if the Drapions can beat that."
"I'm going first!" Sean shouted. He jumped off the cliff, but he overshot his jump and landed with his face on the rim. "I'm okay!" He shouted, before passing out. Ty rolled his eyes and jumped perfectly in the pool. He was about to walk to the others, but was interruped by a sharp pain in his foor. He checked his foot, and noticed a tooth sticking out of the sole of his foot.
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Ok, that's just f*cking disgusting." Ty said, trying not to vomit.
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Mocha and Smith both jumped, folowed by a slightly hesistant Frost. Liza also happily jumped, followed by Zelda and Jake. Cheshire looked at the pool below her, before shaking her head and jumping off the cliff. Lyonel also pondered a bit before jumping, makling Flame, Kiki, Ciel and Scarlett the only contestants left on the cliff.
"Any volenteers?" Scarlett asked to the remaining contestants.
Flame shook his head. "No way, I'm a Fire-Type, remember? I can't swim!"
"Same problem here." Ciel noted.
Scarlett nodded and turned her head to Kiki. "What about you? Are you jumping?"
Kiki looked up. "Me? Are you insane! Of course I'm not jumping, I just groomed my fur!"
"Come on, we'll lose the challenge if you don't jump." Ciel pleaded.
"Well, that's your problem! Now just leave me alone, will you!" She turned away from the contestants and layed down on the grass. Suddenly, she was cloaked in some kind of purple energy, which caused her to float upwards towards the edge of the cliff. "W-what's happening?" She asked. "Is this psychic energy? Whoever does this, I demand you to let me go this instant!" When she was above the pool, the psychic energy dissapeared, causing her to fall. She came out of the pool,
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Kiki was mad, steam coming from her head. "That! Wasn't! Funny!" She screamed, before crying over her ruined fur.
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Scarlett was looking at the camera. "What? She was pissing everybody off." She paused and laughed. "Oh Arceus, did you see her face when she was about to fall?"
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"Well, it looks like you guys aren't jumping anytime soon, which means that the Fearless Feraligatrs win the first challenge!" Victini shouted. The Feraligatrs were cheering below the cliff. For convienence's sake, the host teleported the remaining contestants to the bottom of the cliff.
"As for the prize, you guys win...a hot tub!" He turned his attention to the Drapions. "Drapions, since you guys lost, you'll have to choose which one of you will be eliminated tonight. You have until 10 p.m. to choose, meet me at the docks afterwards. Flame began to look at the crowd, wondering who would be voted off tonight, noticing the small flame tattooed on the arm of the injured Sean. Suddenly, he began to sweat and his eye began to twitch.
"No...must...resist..." he muttered.
"Um...is everything alright?" Lyonel asked worried.
"Must...resist...to... BURN EVERYTHING!" Flame shouted, before letting out a Flamethrower at the contestants.
"Oh, sh*t, everybody run!" Victini screamed. The contestants fled from the out of control Pyroar, who was spitting fire at the forest. The host proceeded to get a bucket of water. He walked up to the Fire-Type, and dunked the contents all over him. Flame calmed down almost immediately, and looked around confused. He looked at the shaking contestants, and at the burned trees in the forest.
"Oh, damn..." He said softly. "Well, I guess it's obvous who's leaving tonight." He added with a fake smile.
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Flame was looking ashamed. "Ever since I was born, I go out of control and try to burn everything I see fire. My parents sent me to a mental institution and i try to resist, but I guess I can't."
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The Drapions were sitting around a campfire, Sean had a few bandages around his jawline, and Flame waslooking the other way. Victini and Shaymin were standing in front of the campers, the former holding a plate with 13 Poffins on it.
"Campers, welcome to the elimination ceremony! When I call your name, you'll recieve a poffin and you'll be safe. If you don't get a poffin, your out and won't return again. Since every TPI has an uniqe way of sending contestants off, we have our own too." He walked up to something covered with a large red cloth. He pulled off the cloth, revealing a huge crossbow.
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Frost gulped. "Is he saying that..."
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Cheshire shivered. "I hope that thing is safe..."
"Introducing the Crossbow of Shame! When you are eliminated, you'll get tied to Egridos and basically shot off like an arrow. Any questions?" Several contestants gulped. "Good, I'll try to make this as quick as possible. First poffin goes to Zelda...
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The campers which names were announced walked up to Victini to get thier poffin one at the time. Only Kiki, Scarlett, Ciel and Flame were left. Scarlett and Ciel were nervous, Kiki had her paws crossed, and Flames expression wasn't seen.
"Well, you guys all know why you are here. Scarlett and Ciel, you guys didn't jump. Kiki, you're just a b*tch. And Flame, don't even get me started. So the next poffin is going to... Ciel." The Growlithe sighed and claimed his prize.
"Next one goes to... Kiki." The Espeon sighed.
"Naturally..." She muttered as she walked up to take her prize.
Only Scarlett and Flame were left. Scarlett was extremely nervous, as Flame sighed as if he already knew what was coming.
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"Scarlett. Flame, you're out." The Fennekin sighed as she walked up to take her poffin, as the Pyroar was levitated and tied onto the sarcophagus.
"Any last words?" Victini asked to the lion Pokemon.
"Well at least I-" he interrupted himself when he saw the campfire. "Jejeje jajaja! Lets burn everything!" He was about to shoot fire, when he was shot off the island, leaving a trail of fire behind.
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Flame was sitting in the confessional, with a soaking mane. "Yes, I understand why I was voted off. It's a shame I couldn't stay any longer."
"If I have to make a choice about who I want to win, it has to be Scarlett or Sean. Ty was a really good freinds to me during my short time here, and Scarlett can be a really cool girl.
He sighed. "Well, that's all I have to say, I can leave now.
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"And that concludes the first elimination ceremony. You are free to do whatever you want now." The host said, before teleporting away.
Kiki was looking at Liza and Lyonel. "Hey, you two. Come with me." She whispered to them. They walked off to a remote clearing in the forest.
"Look, I know I'm not the nicest person on the island, but I'm willing to form an alliance with you two. I can take you two to the final three, and if I win, we'll split the money and the island. What do you say?"
"I'm in!" Liza replied happily, without second thought. Lyonel however, was still pondering.
"I don't know. You are kind of a b*tch already, and I don't think I can trust you all that well." The Gligar said, earning a shocked reaction from the Espeon.
"Awww, come on Ly... It'll be fun..." Liza pleaded.
"Well...um...if you say so, then I'm in also."
"Excellent!" Kiki said happily. I'll think of a team name later.
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Kiki was rubbing her paws together. "It's official, I won. I have two idiots doing all my work for me, and I have also planned something to get rid of the other team. It's amazing how you can lure to fools into doing your bidding by only saying that you'll split the money, as if that is EVER happening."
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Liza smirked. "That b*tch isn't evil, she's just heartless. I'M the only girl here that is even remotely evil. I only joined this alliance so that I can get rid of that pink cat and her dumb henchman easier. Mark my words TPI, I'll win, and nothing can stop me!
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Victini was standing at the dock. "And that's all folks. The first contestant is gone, the first alliance has been made, and the first couple is close to being formed. Will Soru and Nina grow closer together? What is Kiki's plan to cause havoc in the other team? And will the lesser known characters FINALLY get some lines? Find out next time in
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And that concludes the first chapter. And Flame was eliminated. Yeah, if I kept him, his personality would become very redundant. Sorry for cutting the BTS, I'll never do it again...please forgive me.
Fun Fact, my original idea was to have the eliminated contestand board Egridos and paddle all the way to the Playa Del Losers (I had a really original name for that place, but I forgot. Oh, well). Also, while you're reading this, you should check out another awsome TPI I really like by an author called Seedot929.
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